7/26/2017 c2 4raydark182
Very interesting story, you've caught my attention and I'm hoping you continue to grow and improve this story further. can't wait for the next chapter.
Very interesting story, you've caught my attention and I'm hoping you continue to grow and improve this story further. can't wait for the next chapter.
7/26/2017 c2 2Skytte
Okay, you are just a cruel person... That cliffhanger kills me. Yep, you, bad person. But I love it! Too much, I felt the angust in Soma's thoughts, words and actions. This chapter was insane, keep the good work.
Okay, you are just a cruel person... That cliffhanger kills me. Yep, you, bad person. But I love it! Too much, I felt the angust in Soma's thoughts, words and actions. This chapter was insane, keep the good work.
7/26/2017 c1 Skytte
This is interesting! It really is! I hope you continue this and give it an end, a happy one of course. I will follow this fic, the drama is nice and I love tragic and sad themes.
This is interesting! It really is! I hope you continue this and give it an end, a happy one of course. I will follow this fic, the drama is nice and I love tragic and sad themes.
7/26/2017 c2 Guest
Excellent work, eager to see what happens next.
Excellent work, eager to see what happens next.
7/26/2017 c1 Guestt
Cooool ! I'm starting to like this story so far! Seeing Soma pissed was the best part imo. Keep up the good work and update as soon as possible ! :)
Cooool ! I'm starting to like this story so far! Seeing Soma pissed was the best part imo. Keep up the good work and update as soon as possible ! :)
7/25/2017 c1 Guest
I think it's pretty good. :)
I think it's pretty good. :)
7/24/2017 c1 Lylaz
You did it great
You did it great
7/24/2017 c1 Guest
Such a great start can't wait to see the best chapter
Such a great start can't wait to see the best chapter
7/24/2017 c1 1FanFicFoxy
This is really good, keep your pace is my only advice because bad pacing can ruin a story, other than that I see nothing but positives in this opening chapter
This is really good, keep your pace is my only advice because bad pacing can ruin a story, other than that I see nothing but positives in this opening chapter