for Henry's Allegory of the Doghouse4/26/2018 c1 Pokemon67
loved it! excellent writing! ah, Shawn and Henry's relationship is something else...
Great story!
Happy Writing!
loved it! excellent writing! ah, Shawn and Henry's relationship is something else...
Great story!
Happy Writing!
8/11/2017 c1 
5MickyD777
i needed SO much more whump (actual good, realistic, serious whump) from this show... [sigh] ah, well. at least i can get it in fanfiction. ;) again, this is fantastic. you have such a perfect take on these characters, and your writing proves that again and again. can't wait for more! x
5MickyD777i needed SO much more whump (actual good, realistic, serious whump) from this show... [sigh] ah, well. at least i can get it in fanfiction. ;) again, this is fantastic. you have such a perfect take on these characters, and your writing proves that again and again. can't wait for more! x
8/4/2017 c1 18MoonyEstelChase
Awwwe! Father-Son bonding time! So cute! Especially when Shawn is barely conscious. *evil manaical laughing* I do love me some whump!
Super Story, as always.
18MoonyEstelChaseAwwwe! Father-Son bonding time! So cute! Especially when Shawn is barely conscious. *evil manaical laughing* I do love me some whump!
Super Story, as always.
7/27/2017 c1 Probe to Malapropisms
Loved the allegory reference, loved the bonding, loved the whump. I think maybe you could have played into themes of the allegory a bit? like, maybe juxtapose the difference between the perspectives of Shawn and Henry? Show how Henry can learn to understand Shawn's perspective by considering his situation, and vice versa? I don't know, you picked a really good metaphor and I feel like there could be a lot more you could do with it. I'd actually be really interested to see a couple more chapters symbolizing Henry and Shawn coming out of the cave and reaching a higher level of "enlightenment" or, in their case, empathy.
Loved the allegory reference, loved the bonding, loved the whump. I think maybe you could have played into themes of the allegory a bit? like, maybe juxtapose the difference between the perspectives of Shawn and Henry? Show how Henry can learn to understand Shawn's perspective by considering his situation, and vice versa? I don't know, you picked a really good metaphor and I feel like there could be a lot more you could do with it. I'd actually be really interested to see a couple more chapters symbolizing Henry and Shawn coming out of the cave and reaching a higher level of "enlightenment" or, in their case, empathy.
7/26/2017 c1 4AlainnRain
Please excuse me while I squeal in the corner. This just, ugh, It hits all my emotions. Why do I love Whump so much? I just can't help but Love this!
4AlainnRainPlease excuse me while I squeal in the corner. This just, ugh, It hits all my emotions. Why do I love Whump so much? I just can't help but Love this!
7/25/2017 c1 1Candle-lit Dreams
Wow! You're right, you did put this out super fast. And it was great! I agree, I love the father-son bonding, too. And I loved the comparison between the dog house and their relationship. So good. Keep it up, and I look forward to the next one!
1Candle-lit DreamsWow! You're right, you did put this out super fast. And it was great! I agree, I love the father-son bonding, too. And I loved the comparison between the dog house and their relationship. So good. Keep it up, and I look forward to the next one!