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8/6/2017 c1 2k+Hawki
So, anyway, reviewing this again. Since my old review is no longer available, I’ll be treating it in the context of this submission in isolation. So, on that note, it’s quite decent. Whatever grammar/spelling/punctuation stuff I brought up last time is absent here. So, story flows well, it has a good structure with the seconds format, and…yeah. Decent job.
7/29/2017 c1 Niscoma
Great stuff as usual Red!
7/28/2017 c1 lisbjerg123
hmm... yeah, sure, it was alright.
7/28/2017 c1 6Nipplegunz
Hey man, great chapter! I don't see a lot of payday fanfics so its nice to see one.

Also I wanted to tell you that I am making a Mass Effect SI and I would really appreciate it if you could give me some advice because it is my first fan-fiction.

Thanks!

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