
2/15 c4 Guest
1st chapter, you made Peter out to be some kind of super super genius like reed Richards, but so far he hasn't done much genius stuff. Is he going to work with curt Connors or Otto maybe?
1st chapter, you made Peter out to be some kind of super super genius like reed Richards, but so far he hasn't done much genius stuff. Is he going to work with curt Connors or Otto maybe?
2/15 c2 Guest
I like the idea of Peter being a superhero who's a combination of Spiderman and Batman.
I like the idea of Peter being a superhero who's a combination of Spiderman and Batman.
2/5 c29 Morrigan
Okay so I know you are way beyond this point and I don't usually review anyways but you are amazing and this story is spectacular. This is probably one of if not my favorite mcu fic out there because of how much depth and complexity you bring to the characters. No one is really 2D and I just love it. So ignore everyone else saying its bad because its amazing and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Okay so I know you are way beyond this point and I don't usually review anyways but you are amazing and this story is spectacular. This is probably one of if not my favorite mcu fic out there because of how much depth and complexity you bring to the characters. No one is really 2D and I just love it. So ignore everyone else saying its bad because its amazing and I can't wait to see where it goes.
2/3 c7 kirosyamcha
Ahhh kinda hope he dates both MJ and Felicia, those 2 are some of the best girls in marvel
Ahhh kinda hope he dates both MJ and Felicia, those 2 are some of the best girls in marvel
2/3 c4 kirosyamcha
im not sure a teens physical strength could even bruise spider-man with a punch lol.
im not sure a teens physical strength could even bruise spider-man with a punch lol.
2/1 c51 Guest
Holy fuck, that's a whole bunch of smut, bro had a pen in 1 hand and his tool in the other.
Holy fuck, that's a whole bunch of smut, bro had a pen in 1 hand and his tool in the other.
2/1 c1
1DemonWolf25
I think u need to go back through this chapter to fix some spelling errors. Its not everywhere but there are quite a few of them.

I think u need to go back through this chapter to fix some spelling errors. Its not everywhere but there are quite a few of them.
1/31 c1 Guest
This story is a fucking shit. From the beginning to the end.
Those who are reading this shit are mother fuckers.
"Your aunt is a MILF, exactly my type" wtf is the first chapter bro, is something wrong with you or what.
And not only just, his behaviour trough the story is childish, his comments when he is talking to a girl or a woman are like sexual harrasment, there are a lot of nonesense like having more than 1 billion followers, it's imposible to get that number, most of the social media doesn't have that much.
If you are expecting a good story, with a non childish mc and common sense, serious, a good plot, then don't waste your time in this shit.
This story is a fucking shit. From the beginning to the end.
Those who are reading this shit are mother fuckers.
"Your aunt is a MILF, exactly my type" wtf is the first chapter bro, is something wrong with you or what.
And not only just, his behaviour trough the story is childish, his comments when he is talking to a girl or a woman are like sexual harrasment, there are a lot of nonesense like having more than 1 billion followers, it's imposible to get that number, most of the social media doesn't have that much.
If you are expecting a good story, with a non childish mc and common sense, serious, a good plot, then don't waste your time in this shit.
1/26 c1 Fiction Haven
Why does it sound so childish? Am I wrong for expecting a superhero story to feel a bit mature?
Why does it sound so childish? Am I wrong for expecting a superhero story to feel a bit mature?
1/24 c98 Gridjo
This is the most disgusting work I've ever seen. I read until chapter 59 for 20 hours for what? For the sake of seeing this shit? This is not a work, it's just a dumpster. I hope the author is already dead and won't keep posting this shit. I hope you break your arms and your jaw, you bastard, so you don't write this shit anymore.
This is the most disgusting work I've ever seen. I read until chapter 59 for 20 hours for what? For the sake of seeing this shit? This is not a work, it's just a dumpster. I hope the author is already dead and won't keep posting this shit. I hope you break your arms and your jaw, you bastard, so you don't write this shit anymore.
1/11 c1 TomoShikii
What a amazing story and you’ve cooked up, it keep me hooked thoughout the whole story! And I see it has been 4 years since the last update i hope you are doing well author, i also hope you can come back and continue updating this story but if not thank you for the experience and i wish you the best in life!
What a amazing story and you’ve cooked up, it keep me hooked thoughout the whole story! And I see it has been 4 years since the last update i hope you are doing well author, i also hope you can come back and continue updating this story but if not thank you for the experience and i wish you the best in life!