for Rest In Peace7/29/2003 c1 
6Demeter Goddess of Protection
Please update! This a really great, simple, story with a beautiful way of woven words. Please update!
6Demeter Goddess of ProtectionPlease update! This a really great, simple, story with a beautiful way of woven words. Please update!
3/5/2003 c1 16Sniffles 55
I am very confused. Ver, very confused. Which means you will have to write more soon.
16Sniffles 55I am very confused. Ver, very confused. Which means you will have to write more soon.
3/5/2003 c1 everblue3
Well, this is certainly something! I was just browsing the new editions and saw this, and I was thrilled to have found it - it's got a lot of great things going for it. I like your simple language, which is precise and not trumped-up by overealous attempts at showboating. You've included answers to every question which might be asked (why aren't they buried together, why isn't she Lily Potter), and yet you've introduced a new and unique type of plot which is interesting and grabs our attention.
All in all? Bravo!
Please continue with this writing, I see you've written short one-shots before, and I hope to see this develop into something a little longer - good luck!
Well, this is certainly something! I was just browsing the new editions and saw this, and I was thrilled to have found it - it's got a lot of great things going for it. I like your simple language, which is precise and not trumped-up by overealous attempts at showboating. You've included answers to every question which might be asked (why aren't they buried together, why isn't she Lily Potter), and yet you've introduced a new and unique type of plot which is interesting and grabs our attention.
All in all? Bravo!
Please continue with this writing, I see you've written short one-shots before, and I hope to see this develop into something a little longer - good luck!