
11/25/2017 c1 Cherubim
Your writing is the definition of eloquence. Thanks for sharing.
Your writing is the definition of eloquence. Thanks for sharing.
7/31/2017 c1 Guest
this is lovely and eloquent and heartbreaking and wonderful! i love your writing!
this is lovely and eloquent and heartbreaking and wonderful! i love your writing!
8/1/2017 c1
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Nothing wrong with unhappy endings, as long as they elucidate something about life. Once again, I love your use of metaphor, especially in the latter half of the story. Looking forward to your next work.

Nothing wrong with unhappy endings, as long as they elucidate something about life. Once again, I love your use of metaphor, especially in the latter half of the story. Looking forward to your next work.