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1maya2
Sounds like a new mystery to me. Beautiful job as usual, Leya! I have really enjoyed reading your series as much as I enjoyed reading the Dixon series when I was younger. You are a natural as far as I am concerned and I hope that you continue to write when you are able. I understand how RL can often prove disruptive to our creative passions. My sincerest condolences for your losses even at such a latent date. Keep up the great writing and thank you so much for sharing your talents with us. _~
1maya2Sounds like a new mystery to me. Beautiful job as usual, Leya! I have really enjoyed reading your series as much as I enjoyed reading the Dixon series when I was younger. You are a natural as far as I am concerned and I hope that you continue to write when you are able. I understand how RL can often prove disruptive to our creative passions. My sincerest condolences for your losses even at such a latent date. Keep up the great writing and thank you so much for sharing your talents with us. _~
6/28/2019 c15 Guest
Man, I can't believe I missed the new chapters! Awesome, as usual!
Man, I can't believe I missed the new chapters! Awesome, as usual!
6/28/2019 c16 8zenfrodo
Bravo!
Looking forward to the next story. And you have my deepest sympathies for your mom & you bf's dad. Losing family always sucks.
8zenfrodoBravo!
Looking forward to the next story. And you have my deepest sympathies for your mom & you bf's dad. Losing family always sucks.
6/2/2019 c16 sm2003495
I loved this story and the ending was great too..so Calvin finally ends up marrying the boss :) congratulations on writing a great story and can't wait for your next one..
Very sorry to hear about your losses..it's really hard on the people who have to soldier on..hope you have the strength to carry on.. prayers and hugs!
I loved this story and the ending was great too..so Calvin finally ends up marrying the boss :) congratulations on writing a great story and can't wait for your next one..
Very sorry to hear about your losses..it's really hard on the people who have to soldier on..hope you have the strength to carry on.. prayers and hugs!
5/30/2019 c16 Xenitha
Nice finish. Sorryabout the beating RL has been giving you, and thank you for posting the finish. AND a cliffhanger!
Nice finish. Sorryabout the beating RL has been giving you, and thank you for posting the finish. AND a cliffhanger!
5/30/2019 c16 15Jilsen
So very sorry to hear about your losses.
This was a nice ending to the story. You successfully tied up all the loose ends and even snuck in a surprise. I never would have guessed that Liz and Calvin would get married! I liked him. Maybe you will use him in a future story?
Now, who is Ryckman? :)
Take care and thank you for sharing your story.
15JilsenSo very sorry to hear about your losses.
This was a nice ending to the story. You successfully tied up all the loose ends and even snuck in a surprise. I never would have guessed that Liz and Calvin would get married! I liked him. Maybe you will use him in a future story?
Now, who is Ryckman? :)
Take care and thank you for sharing your story.
5/30/2019 c16 54EvergreenDreamweaver
First, so very sorry for your multiple losses! All my sympathies and condolences to you and your family.
Good to get all the tag ends tucked in, at the lunch with Frank, Joe and Chet. AND, it sounds like you're leading into the next story, yes? Yay!
54EvergreenDreamweaverFirst, so very sorry for your multiple losses! All my sympathies and condolences to you and your family.
Good to get all the tag ends tucked in, at the lunch with Frank, Joe and Chet. AND, it sounds like you're leading into the next story, yes? Yay!
5/29/2019 c16 Candylou
Sorry to hear about your losses. This was a really good story. I cannot believe von Ormond didn't have to answer for his consequences. Then again that cop was trying to pin everything on Joe from the beginning. I wasn't t expecting Liz and Calvin to get married. It will be interesting to see what happens in your next story.
Sorry to hear about your losses. This was a really good story. I cannot believe von Ormond didn't have to answer for his consequences. Then again that cop was trying to pin everything on Joe from the beginning. I wasn't t expecting Liz and Calvin to get married. It will be interesting to see what happens in your next story.
5/29/2019 c16 max2013
Sorry for your losses. Now I need to know about Ryckman, yet you marked this complete?! Is there more?!
Sorry for your losses. Now I need to know about Ryckman, yet you marked this complete?! Is there more?!
5/29/2019 c16 79Paulina Ann
Nice closure for the story. And so sorry to hear about all your losses.
I like how you have a perfect lead-in to another story if you want to go in that direction and I do hope there will be another but I definitely understand the need to take some time. I hope that your summer brings you peace and happiness.
79Paulina AnnNice closure for the story. And so sorry to hear about all your losses.
I like how you have a perfect lead-in to another story if you want to go in that direction and I do hope there will be another but I definitely understand the need to take some time. I hope that your summer brings you peace and happiness.
5/29/2019 c16 27Drumboy100
I like this final wind-down chapter, using dialogue between the friends to put the final solution/bow on the mystery. Nice blush from Joe discussing ladies. No, I highly doubt the Ryckman visit will be non-stressful...so sorry to hear of your quite recent bereavement, I hope that writing and finishing this chapter gave you some small therapeutic value.
27Drumboy100I like this final wind-down chapter, using dialogue between the friends to put the final solution/bow on the mystery. Nice blush from Joe discussing ladies. No, I highly doubt the Ryckman visit will be non-stressful...so sorry to hear of your quite recent bereavement, I hope that writing and finishing this chapter gave you some small therapeutic value.
5/29/2019 c16 30Caranath
It’s not nothing. It’s some desperate dude who needs to be bailed out of trouble. Joes gonna get shot again.
Sorry to hear about your losses
30CaranathIt’s not nothing. It’s some desperate dude who needs to be bailed out of trouble. Joes gonna get shot again.
Sorry to hear about your losses
4/30/2019 c7 WindGemini
Love this chapter! Things are finally working out for the boys. How is this going to wrap up though, I wonder? Mr. Michaels put an awful lot of effort into this whole ploy, I can't imagine him folding quietly. Then there's the mystery about Frank's assault. Who else could be involved?
Love this chapter! Things are finally working out for the boys. How is this going to wrap up though, I wonder? Mr. Michaels put an awful lot of effort into this whole ploy, I can't imagine him folding quietly. Then there's the mystery about Frank's assault. Who else could be involved?