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for Madness and Murder: Harley and Joker One-Shot

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I've only ever saw harley in the suicide squad comics, a few batman ones and then the arkham games and suicide squad the film but I love your characterisation of her, I did notice one error "twisted the tan bed sheets" should be "twisting" unless you change "with" to "while" then your original line would run fine. I've noticed a few other little errors too but they don't take from the story. Also "asylum" has one s not two. I can't wait until she sees the Joker again.

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