for The Book of Love10/21/2018 c1 
6mokubahv
This was a very intriguing storyline, albeit a little hard to follow at times. While your character interactions are written well, you should try to put more focus on locations so we know what to visualize when reading your stories.
6mokubahvThis was a very intriguing storyline, albeit a little hard to follow at times. While your character interactions are written well, you should try to put more focus on locations so we know what to visualize when reading your stories.
8/7/2017 c1 WizardingWhovian
:) Great!
:) Great!