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7/7/2018 c5 6DDC20
Neat story, I can see some problems with dialogue, some pacing, and other scenes.
But I don't really hate it though and I can see the effort put into making this.
To be honest, with some of my own DuckTales stories, I kinda have trouble writing some dialogue for some of the characters like Scrooge, Donald, Beakley, and Louie at times for me.
But Dewey, Webby, Huey and Launchpad are the easiest to create dialogue for.
Either way, I sincerely hope that you can manage to pull off this story again someday, once you improve with the problems that rose in this early version.
I wish you the best of luck!
As a sign of support and friendship, I'll become a fellow follower of your work.
3/21/2018 c5 3Taranodongirl1
I hope that in the future you’ll be able to write this. It’s very good and a good idea.
1/16/2018 c5 15SonsOfBeaches99
This is a really good plot script for this story! I'm sorry you had dialogue issues though, but at least you given it some type of closure to it.
10/3/2017 c4 29Creepy-Pasta
You better update soon. I'm super excited about this! :D
9/19/2017 c2 13foxchick1
I can't wait to see what happens next.
8/14/2017 c1 55AutobotBecks
Good start. I like The start of Sari's story

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