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1/17/2018 c1 Angery Katte
Granted Glaux can be deadly with his implant. Still won't stop a sniper, though. Or a missile.
1/17/2018 c1 Angery Katte
Thing is... if we saw one of our creations speaking out against us (which we would, without a doubtwhy would we not keep a close eye on them at all times?) like Glaux is in your story, we would have terminated them immediately. Books aren't movies where you can just give the main characters some innate, unnatural advantage (aka plot armor, like stormtroopers always missing). It doesn't work. The idea of Glaux conquering Earth is, although a stretch, a good ideaif it is written right, that is.

Remember, we haves our guns, tanks, helicopters, jets, drones, and warships. Owls don't, not even supposedly centuries after the disappearance of the Others.
10/8/2017 c1 EstrellaStar
This story has a lot of potential. I hope you'll continue!

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