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35/3/2024 c46 Guest
Twin tailed in red oh that’s Rin! Rinnnnnnn!
Twin tailed in red oh that’s Rin! Rinnnnnnn!
4/24/2024 c1 MailmanNo.51
Valve update time be like: this fic
Much love Saraak.
Valve update time be like: this fic
Much love Saraak.
4/25/2024 c9 omiguh
Thank god there wont be another cooking scene, the first cooking scene in this story was torture, this scene though? Absolute waste of time. Honestly, i really hope he doesnt refer mt lady as mom. Im sorry but it's just stupid. I understand trying to create a relationship so he doesnt do stupid things but that;s who he is. He has had rin, his "older sister", his adopitve sister. He was and always would be that person. That is shirou, if you want them to form a significant relationship then brother/sister combo is really the only way. If you wanted a true mother figure, it would have to be someone older, close to their 50s by now. It might have been better to have recovery giirl be the grandmother type of figure. Anyways, please dont call her mom. Even though this chapter is years old and theirs no way of changing the past...please
Thank god there wont be another cooking scene, the first cooking scene in this story was torture, this scene though? Absolute waste of time. Honestly, i really hope he doesnt refer mt lady as mom. Im sorry but it's just stupid. I understand trying to create a relationship so he doesnt do stupid things but that;s who he is. He has had rin, his "older sister", his adopitve sister. He was and always would be that person. That is shirou, if you want them to form a significant relationship then brother/sister combo is really the only way. If you wanted a true mother figure, it would have to be someone older, close to their 50s by now. It might have been better to have recovery giirl be the grandmother type of figure. Anyways, please dont call her mom. Even though this chapter is years old and theirs no way of changing the past...please
4/25/2024 c8 omiguh
A mother? Isnt she a new hero so shes recently graduated? So she's around 18? lol, or maybe new to japan and was a pro over seas? I mean whatever her age is, she;s still young and at best be a big sis in his eyes after all, he is already 17 if not older.
A mother? Isnt she a new hero so shes recently graduated? So she's around 18? lol, or maybe new to japan and was a pro over seas? I mean whatever her age is, she;s still young and at best be a big sis in his eyes after all, he is already 17 if not older.
4/22/2024 c22 Guest
Kind of annoying that he's hiding his abilities to such a degree tbh, Also I don't think Shirou at this stage would have much patience for Bakugou's crap.
Kind of annoying that he's hiding his abilities to such a degree tbh, Also I don't think Shirou at this stage would have much patience for Bakugou's crap.
4/21/2024 c10 Guest
You need to have Shirou cook better meals, Fish fingers and chicken with both mashed potatoes and rice sounds like something dreamed up by a person who has never cooked! Just have him cook a Pork Cutlet Rice bowl or something.
You need to have Shirou cook better meals, Fish fingers and chicken with both mashed potatoes and rice sounds like something dreamed up by a person who has never cooked! Just have him cook a Pork Cutlet Rice bowl or something.
4/21/2024 c3 Guest
I find the law regarding self defense here to be insane.
I find the law regarding self defense here to be insane.
4/11/2024 c46 keiriala
Love this story. I also really love how Shirou keeps developing some of Archer's quirks, it's so funny. I hope your burnout is getting better!
Love this story. I also really love how Shirou keeps developing some of Archer's quirks, it's so funny. I hope your burnout is getting better!
3/31/2024 c45 Guest
Por ahora todo lo que quisiera tratar de pedir es que te concentres en aportar conceptos que complemenen y ayuden a la construccion de mundos del universo de My Hero Academia y
que conectes lo mejor posibñe Fate con MHA en 1 unoiverso compartido /universo conjunto
Por ahora todo lo que quisiera tratar de pedir es que te concentres en aportar conceptos que complemenen y ayuden a la construccion de mundos del universo de My Hero Academia y
que conectes lo mejor posibñe Fate con MHA en 1 unoiverso compartido /universo conjunto
3/24/2024 c46 Snig1815
Cool story so far.
- Hope that Shirou (secretly to heroes) will be able to team up with Stain (after he makes him reconsider his methods) I'm pretty sure that he will recall Ilya upon meeting with Toga, pretty sure that their interactions will be interesting. (btw i'm not sure if Ilya is alive 'cause route looked like UBW; however this is nazuverse and most autors tend to keep her alive; if she is, then i hope that Rin will bring her along upon learning second magic and visiting Shirou; If she isn't then i'll send you to GULAG, have a nice day!)
Cool story so far.
- Hope that Shirou (secretly to heroes) will be able to team up with Stain (after he makes him reconsider his methods) I'm pretty sure that he will recall Ilya upon meeting with Toga, pretty sure that their interactions will be interesting. (btw i'm not sure if Ilya is alive 'cause route looked like UBW; however this is nazuverse and most autors tend to keep her alive; if she is, then i hope that Rin will bring her along upon learning second magic and visiting Shirou; If she isn't then i'll send you to GULAG, have a nice day!)
3/22/2024 c9 VeganoCanibal
Rereading. Just wanted to say I enjoyed the cooking scene and I could see you had fun doing it. Criticism can be a pain sometimes, just do what you want to see.
Rereading. Just wanted to say I enjoyed the cooking scene and I could see you had fun doing it. Criticism can be a pain sometimes, just do what you want to see.
3/22/2024 c22 Aliata
honestly I don't really like how you've done shirou in this story you've made him such a complete looser.
he barely speaks barely does anything outside of fighting he isn't actively trying to become a hero he's just coasting along acting with next to no agency of his own.
this is not shirou emiya. shirou is one of the most dedicated and headstrong characters I have ever seen he literally trained every day putting himself through immense pain for 8 years with basically no gains and still carried on he wants to be a hero and will stop at nothing to achieve it.
your shirou by contrast just kind of exists and goes where others tell him to go he's been stripped of most of his core character traits.
this story has a decent premise but your version of shirou is just terribly done.
honestly I don't really like how you've done shirou in this story you've made him such a complete looser.
he barely speaks barely does anything outside of fighting he isn't actively trying to become a hero he's just coasting along acting with next to no agency of his own.
this is not shirou emiya. shirou is one of the most dedicated and headstrong characters I have ever seen he literally trained every day putting himself through immense pain for 8 years with basically no gains and still carried on he wants to be a hero and will stop at nothing to achieve it.
your shirou by contrast just kind of exists and goes where others tell him to go he's been stripped of most of his core character traits.
this story has a decent premise but your version of shirou is just terribly done.