3/14 c46 DragonTetho
Man, its been close to a half a year or so since last update. I wished we can see more on how it would work and what not. I legit want them to see Shirou casting UBW.
Man, its been close to a half a year or so since last update. I wished we can see more on how it would work and what not. I legit want them to see Shirou casting UBW.
3/7 c46 26Cyricist001
Great chapter, looking forward to the great battle. I wonder if Bakugo will be kidnapped or not.
Great chapter, looking forward to the great battle. I wonder if Bakugo will be kidnapped or not.
2/13 c6 2000str
this 'fight' was super boring and dragged
this 'fight' was super boring and dragged
1/27 c6 Infinity819
So far, so good. But please, for the love of God cut down on the "..." 's. You don't have to use them ever second sentence.
So far, so good. But please, for the love of God cut down on the "..." 's. You don't have to use them ever second sentence.
1/24 c46 3Eternal Escapist
I'm very late! But I'm here.
I'm a little disappointed we didn't get a post-exam reaction from 1-A to Shirou emerging from his solo battle against Endeavour VIRTUALLY UNSCATHED. But maybe that'll come up in the coming chapters?
On the other hand, it's nice that we're diving into the next arc so quickly, cos this is where shiz is REALLY gonna go down. Here and maybe when All For One appears? I can see Shirou having to get involved there.
Regarding Patreon, deffo gotta be careful with copyright and stuff, but maybe you could make one to commission artwork or something?
I'm very late! But I'm here.
I'm a little disappointed we didn't get a post-exam reaction from 1-A to Shirou emerging from his solo battle against Endeavour VIRTUALLY UNSCATHED. But maybe that'll come up in the coming chapters?
On the other hand, it's nice that we're diving into the next arc so quickly, cos this is where shiz is REALLY gonna go down. Here and maybe when All For One appears? I can see Shirou having to get involved there.
Regarding Patreon, deffo gotta be careful with copyright and stuff, but maybe you could make one to commission artwork or something?
1/23 c14 hainbane
Unsure why he did not warn Archer about another Servant. They don't like each other but Archer is a lot more capable of dealing with Angra Manyu that Shiro. I know that is a setup up for personal nemesis and all that. But concealing this vital info looks weird.
Unsure why he did not warn Archer about another Servant. They don't like each other but Archer is a lot more capable of dealing with Angra Manyu that Shiro. I know that is a setup up for personal nemesis and all that. But concealing this vital info looks weird.
1/16 c46 Emiya Hmida
Hello, Saraak.
- First of all, i wanted to start by telling you that My Ideal Academia was my first ever fanfic, and that i binged it in less than a week because of how much fun i had reading it, to this day, even after reading hundreds of fanfics it is still my favorite for it's good writing, as well as the experience i had reading it for the first time and then re-reading it multiple times, and seeing it updated never fails to give me copious amounts of dopamine, and despite this i honestly think i'd prefer you to update randomly but still churn out quality chapters than something half baked you are not proud of to meet a deadline or make a decision you otherwise wouldn't have done to satisfy the readers. When your story constantly gets unfounded criticism by the readers simply for not being the story they would have mode or otherwise expected it to be, i thought expressing my opinion in this paragraph was necessary.
As for the chapter itself : I loved it like always, Shirou's interactions with Yu constantly cements their bond and shows the growth of the trust they put in each other, the interactions between Shirou and the charachters of the universe he crossed over into are always the thing you know how to write best in your fics it shows the butterfly effect that his crossing over had on the charachters and their personalities and them slowly befriending him after their intial suspicions of him is wholesome.
Crack Theories :
-Koda being in the trainning camp makes me theorise that Shirou will be the one to save him this time and not Midoriya, probably while being all Gar about it and showing Koda the spirit of being a hero.
- This will probably lead to Shirou being kidnapped, it's always something that happens in Xover fanfics to kidnap the main charachter regardless of how strong they are just to conform to canon, something that i honestly deeply dislike. The reason why i think the League of Villains would rather kidnap Shirou is because i think AFO taking an interest in Shirou's quirk from his understanding being able to create weapons that posess quirks could be a motive for him wanting to steal Shirou's quirk thinking (correctly) that he is hiding how powerful his quirk is, as well as since weapons with quirk factors could revolutionize the MHA world's understanding of quirks, the reason i think this is because i also remember you saying somewhere that Shirou would be revealed to be quirkless, and AFO attempting to steal his quirk only to find that he has no quirk factor and commenting on it is the most realistic way this could happen.
-I honestly don't think Yoroi-Musha can teach Shirou anything that he does not know already, i know people in the reviews often overrate Shirou and it can be a pain in the ass, but Archer is repeatedly stated to be a very skilled swordsman and Shirou absorbed enough of his techniques and expertise to have borderline supernatural skill on them, neither can he teach Shirou anything about strategizing because Shirou is also very good at that as well, the last thing i can think of is hero logistics but Shirou already learned it from Yu and this is a trainning camp so it is unlikely he'd try to teach him this, because of these reasons i think that : - Yoroi-Musha is going to believe that Shirou is talented but either arrogant/foolish for him not to accept intership with him, so he is going to try and teach him a lesson by doing a sparring session with Shirou where Shirou would win, Shirou being on the level of a Top Ten hero would probably make people be even more aware of how strong he really is and it will be a good humbling for Yoroi-Musha, this was also kind of foreshadowed by Uwabami asking if the real reason Yoroi-Musha wanted Shirou to intern under him was because Shirou was already ahead of him during the sports festival.
- Archer being included in the fight though makes me think that there is a 99 percent chance that he would die, something that he honestly does not deserve and i would have hoped he'd get a happy ending in the MHA world, especially with the connections he made. But i recognise that he would would probably have to die in this arc to raise the stakes in the story and give more importance to Shirou in the narrative, especially because he is the only servant in this world and is thus not affected by Angra-Mainyu's anti humanity conceptual advantage, if i end up being correct though i only ask that it'd be in a GAR way and raise questions about his relationship with Shirou with his classmate.
Criticisms:
-I only have one minor gripe with this chapter, and it's the fact that i've been hyped for it for so long simply to see the reactions of Shirou's classmates to Shirou being the only person in his class to fight a pro-hero alone, that pro-hero being Endeavor no less, and still passing the test, especially when there was an entire chapter dedicated to them passing their own tests and wondering how he was doing in his. Them not even asking or knowing about how he did it, especially after they probably know he survived Prominence fucking Burn feels oddly weird.
As for the patty :
-I say go for it, you deserve to be rewarded for your work. As a reward you can probably take into account your patreons's reviews of your chapters and their criticisms into heart more than the reveiws in ffnet, since those tend to be more negative and unfounded.
Hello, Saraak.
- First of all, i wanted to start by telling you that My Ideal Academia was my first ever fanfic, and that i binged it in less than a week because of how much fun i had reading it, to this day, even after reading hundreds of fanfics it is still my favorite for it's good writing, as well as the experience i had reading it for the first time and then re-reading it multiple times, and seeing it updated never fails to give me copious amounts of dopamine, and despite this i honestly think i'd prefer you to update randomly but still churn out quality chapters than something half baked you are not proud of to meet a deadline or make a decision you otherwise wouldn't have done to satisfy the readers. When your story constantly gets unfounded criticism by the readers simply for not being the story they would have mode or otherwise expected it to be, i thought expressing my opinion in this paragraph was necessary.
As for the chapter itself : I loved it like always, Shirou's interactions with Yu constantly cements their bond and shows the growth of the trust they put in each other, the interactions between Shirou and the charachters of the universe he crossed over into are always the thing you know how to write best in your fics it shows the butterfly effect that his crossing over had on the charachters and their personalities and them slowly befriending him after their intial suspicions of him is wholesome.
Crack Theories :
-Koda being in the trainning camp makes me theorise that Shirou will be the one to save him this time and not Midoriya, probably while being all Gar about it and showing Koda the spirit of being a hero.
- This will probably lead to Shirou being kidnapped, it's always something that happens in Xover fanfics to kidnap the main charachter regardless of how strong they are just to conform to canon, something that i honestly deeply dislike. The reason why i think the League of Villains would rather kidnap Shirou is because i think AFO taking an interest in Shirou's quirk from his understanding being able to create weapons that posess quirks could be a motive for him wanting to steal Shirou's quirk thinking (correctly) that he is hiding how powerful his quirk is, as well as since weapons with quirk factors could revolutionize the MHA world's understanding of quirks, the reason i think this is because i also remember you saying somewhere that Shirou would be revealed to be quirkless, and AFO attempting to steal his quirk only to find that he has no quirk factor and commenting on it is the most realistic way this could happen.
-I honestly don't think Yoroi-Musha can teach Shirou anything that he does not know already, i know people in the reviews often overrate Shirou and it can be a pain in the ass, but Archer is repeatedly stated to be a very skilled swordsman and Shirou absorbed enough of his techniques and expertise to have borderline supernatural skill on them, neither can he teach Shirou anything about strategizing because Shirou is also very good at that as well, the last thing i can think of is hero logistics but Shirou already learned it from Yu and this is a trainning camp so it is unlikely he'd try to teach him this, because of these reasons i think that : - Yoroi-Musha is going to believe that Shirou is talented but either arrogant/foolish for him not to accept intership with him, so he is going to try and teach him a lesson by doing a sparring session with Shirou where Shirou would win, Shirou being on the level of a Top Ten hero would probably make people be even more aware of how strong he really is and it will be a good humbling for Yoroi-Musha, this was also kind of foreshadowed by Uwabami asking if the real reason Yoroi-Musha wanted Shirou to intern under him was because Shirou was already ahead of him during the sports festival.
- Archer being included in the fight though makes me think that there is a 99 percent chance that he would die, something that he honestly does not deserve and i would have hoped he'd get a happy ending in the MHA world, especially with the connections he made. But i recognise that he would would probably have to die in this arc to raise the stakes in the story and give more importance to Shirou in the narrative, especially because he is the only servant in this world and is thus not affected by Angra-Mainyu's anti humanity conceptual advantage, if i end up being correct though i only ask that it'd be in a GAR way and raise questions about his relationship with Shirou with his classmate.
Criticisms:
-I only have one minor gripe with this chapter, and it's the fact that i've been hyped for it for so long simply to see the reactions of Shirou's classmates to Shirou being the only person in his class to fight a pro-hero alone, that pro-hero being Endeavor no less, and still passing the test, especially when there was an entire chapter dedicated to them passing their own tests and wondering how he was doing in his. Them not even asking or knowing about how he did it, especially after they probably know he survived Prominence fucking Burn feels oddly weird.
As for the patty :
-I say go for it, you deserve to be rewarded for your work. As a reward you can probably take into account your patreons's reviews of your chapters and their criticisms into heart more than the reveiws in ffnet, since those tend to be more negative and unfounded.
1/17 c46 Santiago Emanuel Ponce
Translate inglish/spanish
Mi Inglés está demasiado atrofiado como para hacer algo legible mis disculpas. XD
En la historia no tengo quejas es tan buena que por más que no esté al día (aunque ahora si) nunca me olvido de ella y termino leyendola de nuevo.
Mi sugerencia es que quizás hacer un grupo de discord para las personas que lean tu historia podría ayudarte a esclarecer las cosas y puedas resolver dudas o escuchar sugerencias de primera mano. No conozco como esta la comunidad de este fic pero pienso que valdría la pena intentarlo. En cuanto a abrir un "pitty" que supongo que es algún tipo de página de donación si no estoy equivocado. Pienso que no habría problema. Por más que no haya "beneficios" creo que habrá gente que simplemente quiera apoyar de alguna manera sin importar si hay beneficios exclusivos. Así es mi punto de vista. Por lo menos la primera sugerencia creo que vale de algo la segunda es solo mi opinión con una pseudo intuición de lo que quisiste decir XD
A por cierto me gusta como intentas mezclar la personalidad de Archer y Shirou. Siento que lo vuelves más conciente de si mismo y a la vez más sensible a todo lo que le rodea.. tanto su pasado como su entorno en si.
Vas muy bien. Sigue así y aguanta tu puedes. Tienes mi apoyo.
Un latino Random Fuera!
Translate inglish/spanish
Mi Inglés está demasiado atrofiado como para hacer algo legible mis disculpas. XD
En la historia no tengo quejas es tan buena que por más que no esté al día (aunque ahora si) nunca me olvido de ella y termino leyendola de nuevo.
Mi sugerencia es que quizás hacer un grupo de discord para las personas que lean tu historia podría ayudarte a esclarecer las cosas y puedas resolver dudas o escuchar sugerencias de primera mano. No conozco como esta la comunidad de este fic pero pienso que valdría la pena intentarlo. En cuanto a abrir un "pitty" que supongo que es algún tipo de página de donación si no estoy equivocado. Pienso que no habría problema. Por más que no haya "beneficios" creo que habrá gente que simplemente quiera apoyar de alguna manera sin importar si hay beneficios exclusivos. Así es mi punto de vista. Por lo menos la primera sugerencia creo que vale de algo la segunda es solo mi opinión con una pseudo intuición de lo que quisiste decir XD
A por cierto me gusta como intentas mezclar la personalidad de Archer y Shirou. Siento que lo vuelves más conciente de si mismo y a la vez más sensible a todo lo que le rodea.. tanto su pasado como su entorno en si.
Vas muy bien. Sigue así y aguanta tu puedes. Tienes mi apoyo.
Un latino Random Fuera!
1/16 c46 Memes Hmida Ras Lmida
Hello, Saraak.
- First of all, i wanted to start by telling you that My Ideal Academia was my first ever fanfic, and that i binged it in less than a week because of how much fun i had reading it, to this day, even after reading hundreds of fanfics it is still my favorite for it's good writing, as well as the experience i had reading it for the first time and then re-reading it multiple times, and seeing it updated never fails to give me copious amounts of dopamine, and despite this i honestly think i'd prefer you to update randomly but still churn out quality chapters than something half baked you are not proud of to meet a deadline or make a decision you otherwise wouldn't have done to satisfy the readers. When your story constantly gets unfounded criticism by the readers simply for not being the story they would have mode or otherwise expected it to be, i thought expressing my opinion in this paragraph was necessary.
As for the chapter itself : I loved it like always, Shirou's interactions with Yu constantly cements their bond and shows the growth of the trust they put in each other, the interactions between Shirou and the charachters of the universe he crossed over into are always the thing you know how to write best in your fics it shows the butterfly effect that his crossing over had on the charachters and their personalities and them slowly befriending him after their intial suspicions of him is wholesome.
Crack Theories :
-Koda being in the trainning camp makes me theorise that Shirou will be the one to save him this time and not Midoriya, probably while being all Gar about it and showing Koda the spirit of being a hero.
- This will probably lead to Shirou being kidnapped, it's always something that happens in Xover fanfics to kidnap the main charachter regardless of how strong they are just to conform to canon, something that i honestly deeply dislike. The reason why i think the League of Villains would rather kidnap Shirou is because i think AFO taking an interest in Shirou's quirk from his understanding being able to create weapons that posess quirks could be a motive for him wanting to steal Shirou's quirk thinking (correctly) that he is hiding how powerful his quirk is, as well as since weapons with quirk factors could revolutionize the MHA world's understanding of quirks, the reason i think this is because i also remember you saying somewhere that Shirou would be revealed to be quirkless, and AFO attempting to steal his quirk only to find that he has no quirk factor and commenting on it is the most realistic way this could happen.
-I honestly don't think Yoroi-Musha can teach Shirou anything that he does not know already, i know people in the reviews often overrate Shirou and it can be a pain in the ass, but Archer is repeatedly stated to be a very skilled swordsman and Shirou absorbed enough of his techniques and expertise to have borderline supernatural skill on them, neither can he teach Shirou anything about strategizing because Shirou is also very good at that as well, the last thing i can think of is hero logistics but Shirou already learned it from Yu and this is a trainning camp so it is unlikely he'd try to teach him this, because of these reasons i think that : - Yoroi-Musha is going to believe that Shirou is talented but either arrogant/foolish for him not to accept intership with him, so he is going to try and teach him a lesson by doing a sparring session with Shirou where Shirou would win, Shirou being on the level of a Top Ten hero would probably make people be even more aware of how strong he really is and it will be a good humbling for Yoroi-Musha, this was also kind of foreshadowed by Uwabami asking if the real reason Yoroi-Musha wanted Shirou to intern under him was because Shirou was already ahead of him during the sports festival.
- Archer being included in the fight though makes me think that there is a 99 percent chance that he would die, something that he honestly does not deserve and i would have hoped he'd get a happy ending in the MHA world, especially with the connections he made. But i recognise that he would would probably have to die in this arc to raise the stakes in the story and give more importance to Shirou in the narrative, especially because he is the only servant in this world and is thus not affected by Angra-Mainyu's anti humanity conceptual advantage, if i end up being correct though i only ask that it'd be in a GAR way and raise questions about his relationship with Shirou with his classmate.
Criticisms:
-I only have one minor gripe with this chapter, and it's the fact that i've been hyped for it for so long simply to see the reactions of Shirou's classmates to Shirou being the only person in his class to fight a pro-hero alone, that pro-hero being Endeavor no less, and still passing the test, especially when there was an entire chapter dedicated to them passing their own tests and wondering how he was doing in his. Them not even asking or knowing about how he did it, especially after they probably know he survived Prominence fucking Burn feels oddly weird.
Hello, Saraak.
- First of all, i wanted to start by telling you that My Ideal Academia was my first ever fanfic, and that i binged it in less than a week because of how much fun i had reading it, to this day, even after reading hundreds of fanfics it is still my favorite for it's good writing, as well as the experience i had reading it for the first time and then re-reading it multiple times, and seeing it updated never fails to give me copious amounts of dopamine, and despite this i honestly think i'd prefer you to update randomly but still churn out quality chapters than something half baked you are not proud of to meet a deadline or make a decision you otherwise wouldn't have done to satisfy the readers. When your story constantly gets unfounded criticism by the readers simply for not being the story they would have mode or otherwise expected it to be, i thought expressing my opinion in this paragraph was necessary.
As for the chapter itself : I loved it like always, Shirou's interactions with Yu constantly cements their bond and shows the growth of the trust they put in each other, the interactions between Shirou and the charachters of the universe he crossed over into are always the thing you know how to write best in your fics it shows the butterfly effect that his crossing over had on the charachters and their personalities and them slowly befriending him after their intial suspicions of him is wholesome.
Crack Theories :
-Koda being in the trainning camp makes me theorise that Shirou will be the one to save him this time and not Midoriya, probably while being all Gar about it and showing Koda the spirit of being a hero.
- This will probably lead to Shirou being kidnapped, it's always something that happens in Xover fanfics to kidnap the main charachter regardless of how strong they are just to conform to canon, something that i honestly deeply dislike. The reason why i think the League of Villains would rather kidnap Shirou is because i think AFO taking an interest in Shirou's quirk from his understanding being able to create weapons that posess quirks could be a motive for him wanting to steal Shirou's quirk thinking (correctly) that he is hiding how powerful his quirk is, as well as since weapons with quirk factors could revolutionize the MHA world's understanding of quirks, the reason i think this is because i also remember you saying somewhere that Shirou would be revealed to be quirkless, and AFO attempting to steal his quirk only to find that he has no quirk factor and commenting on it is the most realistic way this could happen.
-I honestly don't think Yoroi-Musha can teach Shirou anything that he does not know already, i know people in the reviews often overrate Shirou and it can be a pain in the ass, but Archer is repeatedly stated to be a very skilled swordsman and Shirou absorbed enough of his techniques and expertise to have borderline supernatural skill on them, neither can he teach Shirou anything about strategizing because Shirou is also very good at that as well, the last thing i can think of is hero logistics but Shirou already learned it from Yu and this is a trainning camp so it is unlikely he'd try to teach him this, because of these reasons i think that : - Yoroi-Musha is going to believe that Shirou is talented but either arrogant/foolish for him not to accept intership with him, so he is going to try and teach him a lesson by doing a sparring session with Shirou where Shirou would win, Shirou being on the level of a Top Ten hero would probably make people be even more aware of how strong he really is and it will be a good humbling for Yoroi-Musha, this was also kind of foreshadowed by Uwabami asking if the real reason Yoroi-Musha wanted Shirou to intern under him was because Shirou was already ahead of him during the sports festival.
- Archer being included in the fight though makes me think that there is a 99 percent chance that he would die, something that he honestly does not deserve and i would have hoped he'd get a happy ending in the MHA world, especially with the connections he made. But i recognise that he would would probably have to die in this arc to raise the stakes in the story and give more importance to Shirou in the narrative, especially because he is the only servant in this world and is thus not affected by Angra-Mainyu's anti humanity conceptual advantage, if i end up being correct though i only ask that it'd be in a GAR way and raise questions about his relationship with Shirou with his classmate.
Criticisms:
-I only have one minor gripe with this chapter, and it's the fact that i've been hyped for it for so long simply to see the reactions of Shirou's classmates to Shirou being the only person in his class to fight a pro-hero alone, that pro-hero being Endeavor no less, and still passing the test, especially when there was an entire chapter dedicated to them passing their own tests and wondering how he was doing in his. Them not even asking or knowing about how he did it, especially after they probably know he survived Prominence fucking Burn feels oddly weird.
1/14 c46 Drachasor
Just wanted to say that I really enjoy this story and appreciate all the work that you've put into it!
Just wanted to say that I really enjoy this story and appreciate all the work that you've put into it!
1/8 c46 NightBrother
Hey man, I really enjoyed this chapter. Everything so far has felt like a labor of love, and I'm sorry things have been so crap for you. While I think you should put your finances in front of hobbies, I don't think a patty is bad in any way for you. This is a popular work, and everyone who piles in kinda knows it's a money sink. It's a fund to make sure you have the give in your schedule to to what you need to make sure you don't have to destroy your body at work . Some people try for a monthly chapter, though with how dense yours are, maybe two months would be a better start. As long as this doesn't turn into work. Please take care of yourself.
Hey man, I really enjoyed this chapter. Everything so far has felt like a labor of love, and I'm sorry things have been so crap for you. While I think you should put your finances in front of hobbies, I don't think a patty is bad in any way for you. This is a popular work, and everyone who piles in kinda knows it's a money sink. It's a fund to make sure you have the give in your schedule to to what you need to make sure you don't have to destroy your body at work . Some people try for a monthly chapter, though with how dense yours are, maybe two months would be a better start. As long as this doesn't turn into work. Please take care of yourself.