1/16 c46 Memes Hmida Ras Lmida
Hello, Saraak.
- First of all, i wanted to start by telling you that My Ideal Academia was my first ever fanfic, and that i binged it in less than a week because of how much fun i had reading it, to this day, even after reading hundreds of fanfics it is still my favorite for it's good writing, as well as the experience i had reading it for the first time and then re-reading it multiple times, and seeing it updated never fails to give me copious amounts of dopamine, and despite this i honestly think i'd prefer you to update randomly but still churn out quality chapters than something half baked you are not proud of to meet a deadline or make a decision you otherwise wouldn't have done to satisfy the readers. When your story constantly gets unfounded criticism by the readers simply for not being the story they would have mode or otherwise expected it to be, i thought expressing my opinion in this paragraph was necessary.
As for the chapter itself : I loved it like always, Shirou's interactions with Yu constantly cements their bond and shows the growth of the trust they put in each other, the interactions between Shirou and the charachters of the universe he crossed over into are always the thing you know how to write best in your fics it shows the butterfly effect that his crossing over had on the charachters and their personalities and them slowly befriending him after their intial suspicions of him is wholesome.

Crack Theories :
-Koda being in the trainning camp makes me theorise that Shirou will be the one to save him this time and not Midoriya, probably while being all Gar about it and showing Koda the spirit of being a hero.
- This will probably lead to Shirou being kidnapped, it's always something that happens in Xover fanfics to kidnap the main charachter regardless of how strong they are just to conform to canon, something that i honestly deeply dislike. The reason why i think the League of Villains would rather kidnap Shirou is because i think AFO taking an interest in Shirou's quirk from his understanding being able to create weapons that posess quirks could be a motive for him wanting to steal Shirou's quirk thinking (correctly) that he is hiding how powerful his quirk is, as well as since weapons with quirk factors could revolutionize the MHA world's understanding of quirks, the reason i think this is because i also remember you saying somewhere that Shirou would be revealed to be quirkless, and AFO attempting to steal his quirk only to find that he has no quirk factor and commenting on it is the most realistic way this could happen.
-I honestly don't think Yoroi-Musha can teach Shirou anything that he does not know already, i know people in the reviews often overrate Shirou and it can be a pain in the ass, but Archer is repeatedly stated to be a very skilled swordsman and Shirou absorbed enough of his techniques and expertise to have borderline supernatural skill on them, neither can he teach Shirou anything about strategizing because Shirou is also very good at that as well, the last thing i can think of is hero logistics but Shirou already learned it from Yu and this is a trainning camp so it is unlikely he'd try to teach him this, because of these reasons i think that : - Yoroi-Musha is going to believe that Shirou is talented but either arrogant/foolish for him not to accept intership with him, so he is going to try and teach him a lesson by doing a sparring session with Shirou where Shirou would win, Shirou being on the level of a Top Ten hero would probably make people be even more aware of how strong he really is and it will be a good humbling for Yoroi-Musha, this was also kind of foreshadowed by Uwabami asking if the real reason Yoroi-Musha wanted Shirou to intern under him was because Shirou was already ahead of him during the sports festival.
- Archer being included in the fight though makes me think that there is a 99 percent chance that he would die, something that he honestly does not deserve and i would have hoped he'd get a happy ending in the MHA world, especially with the connections he made. But i recognise that he would would probably have to die in this arc to raise the stakes in the story and give more importance to Shirou in the narrative, especially because he is the only servant in this world and is thus not affected by Angra-Mainyu's anti humanity conceptual advantage, if i end up being correct though i only ask that it'd be in a GAR way and raise questions about his relationship with Shirou with his classmate.

Criticisms:
-I only have one minor gripe with this chapter, and it's the fact that i've been hyped for it for so long simply to see the reactions of Shirou's classmates to Shirou being the only person in his class to fight a pro-hero alone, that pro-hero being Endeavor no less, and still passing the test, especially when there was an entire chapter dedicated to them passing their own tests and wondering how he was doing in his. Them not even asking or knowing about how he did it, especially after they probably know he survived Prominence fucking Burn feels oddly weird.

1/8 c46 NightBrother
Hey man, I really enjoyed this chapter. Everything so far has felt like a labor of love, and I'm sorry things have been so crap for you. While I think you should put your finances in front of hobbies, I don't think a patty is bad in any way for you. This is a popular work, and everyone who piles in kinda knows it's a money sink. It's a fund to make sure you have the give in your schedule to to what you need to make sure you don't have to destroy your body at work . Some people try for a monthly chapter, though with how dense yours are, maybe two months would be a better start. As long as this doesn't turn into work. Please take care of yourself.

12/8/2023 c46 realfan16
quite sorry to hear that, fic has been good so far. Hope you'll find the motivation to continue, best of luck

11/24/2023 c32 SeanyWants2read
don't know what was the point of having so many people tell him to not hold back and then end the tournament like that

11/20/2023 c46 ledesmajoaquin418
Nuevo lector aquí, gran historia y honestamente no puede esperar a ver cómo desarrollarán el ataque al campamento

11/8/2023 c46 AdrianVnz
Hahahaha, looks like this seasons anime are a little too good (and now you can add stuff like Invincible season 2 to the mix), maybe we will see a new chapter or 2 by christmass if we are lucky.

Anyway i kind of hope Shirou makes it clear he is better that Yoroi with a sword, he is a little too arrogant, and again seeing how much Shirou misses Rin and to a lesser extend Saber and Sakura (and again if he ever finds out about Sakura's circunstances it will hit him HARD but i kind of want him to find out) is painfull. Pity you didn't have Yu use food and kitchen privileges to have him go all out in the race...but maybe she will now so he can trash Yoroi because he anoys her xD

Lastly i hope at some point Shirou tries a tantric ritual out of desperation (Archer can provide any know how if needed), because that would be hilarious, like he trying to pass it up as his "quirk" being powered by SEX would be fun as hell xD

11/4/2023 c46 1StormCrownSr
Don't write full chapters. Not even in your mind.
For the next chapter, treat each perspective as its own little or maybe even not so little story.
When you're done writing a section, stop and do something else. I suggest some physical activity that doesn't require much thinking. So, no weightlifting with a goal to keep track of.

Followed by a short power nap. It'll feel amazing. Then, you continue on with your day. You could go back to writing, but don't do it if you still feel forced to do so.

This way, your mind and your body will be exercised and then rejuvinated. It helps with mental stability, and it's good for the soul. Maybe. We don't know what the soul is, but I'm sure it appreciates it.