for My Ideal Academia10/30/2023 c46 kd2211312
Yay, new chapter! Good to hear you’re back
Pros:
- I love how you’re foreshadowing Stars and Stripes via Melissa. Great way to slowly introduce her into the story (if you are planning to do so). And I am looking forward to how you’ll expand on her character like you did with Yu/Mount Lady. As a manga reader, SNS definitely deserves better
- Love how Spinner is developing under Stain’s tutelage. Seems like he’s gonna be a bit of a challenge compared to how he is in canon.
Cons:
- I’m pretty bummed that you’re skipping over the mall scene where Shigaraki runs into Deku and they have a chat. Was hoping how you would tackle that and how having Shirou’s views getting included in the discussion would change Shigaraki’s views as well as Deku’s.
- I expected Shirou to refuse getting invited to the swimming exercise, though I was hoping to see his classmates’ reaction to the fact that he’s the only one not there.
All in all, good chapter! Looking forward to seeing Yoroi training Shirou.
Also, take all the time you need to do whatever important matters that need to be done. It’s better to have a burnout despite having a plan for the story, than having a burnout without one. MHA’s already ending, so you’ll have an easier time plotting how the story goes. Take it nice and slow, and write because you wanted tell a story.
Yay, new chapter! Good to hear you’re back
Pros:
- I love how you’re foreshadowing Stars and Stripes via Melissa. Great way to slowly introduce her into the story (if you are planning to do so). And I am looking forward to how you’ll expand on her character like you did with Yu/Mount Lady. As a manga reader, SNS definitely deserves better
- Love how Spinner is developing under Stain’s tutelage. Seems like he’s gonna be a bit of a challenge compared to how he is in canon.
Cons:
- I’m pretty bummed that you’re skipping over the mall scene where Shigaraki runs into Deku and they have a chat. Was hoping how you would tackle that and how having Shirou’s views getting included in the discussion would change Shigaraki’s views as well as Deku’s.
- I expected Shirou to refuse getting invited to the swimming exercise, though I was hoping to see his classmates’ reaction to the fact that he’s the only one not there.
All in all, good chapter! Looking forward to seeing Yoroi training Shirou.
Also, take all the time you need to do whatever important matters that need to be done. It’s better to have a burnout despite having a plan for the story, than having a burnout without one. MHA’s already ending, so you’ll have an easier time plotting how the story goes. Take it nice and slow, and write because you wanted tell a story.
10/27/2023 c46 Guest
cringass pay - tree - noway.
cringass pay - tree - noway.
10/27/2023 c46 
1Wicked.A
Nice chapter, for a sec I thought it would be archer instead of yorou musha, good luck
1Wicked.ANice chapter, for a sec I thought it would be archer instead of yorou musha, good luck
10/27/2023 c46 Lazy Servant
Thanks for the chapter.
Is nice to see u back, dont worry too much about us, just tell and probably a good amount gonna wait.
Write little one-shots to flow ur mojo? Make a crack-shot? Or just wacth or read to relax? Dunno, u do u.
Sorry for the poor review.
Thanks for the chapter.
Is nice to see u back, dont worry too much about us, just tell and probably a good amount gonna wait.
Write little one-shots to flow ur mojo? Make a crack-shot? Or just wacth or read to relax? Dunno, u do u.
Sorry for the poor review.
10/27/2023 c46 H7712
Really nice to see this story back in action! Though also really sorry to hear about your burnout.
While its none of my business what goes on in your life outside of writing fanfiction, please do prioritise taking care of yourself and your real life needs.
Burnout can also be due to stresses from other things going on in personal life, and also just from going through tough and difficult times. So if you really need some time off to focus on things going on in your personal life, then please do by all means.
You mentioned a part-time job which is good. But its far from a long term solution. And you do need to make a living, to tend to your needs, and to be both stable and comfortable in your life to even be able to continue doing creative work out of pure passion alone with no profit. Fanfiction being no exception to this.
As for the Patreon, well, its something. But please do be careful about that. Making profit off of someone else’s IP could have copyright issues and so on. So again, just be cautious when it comes to that.
Really hoping that you pull through and wishing you the best. You’re a very skilled writer and you’ve done an amazing job with this crossover so far. And its only getting even more interesting to follow and see where it goes.
So it’d honestly be very sad to see this story, as well as your life as a fanfiction author, take an even bigger pounding than its all already going through right now with your burnout. Again, please do take some time off if you really need to, tend to whatever you need to be addressing in your personal life, and come back later refreshed, relaxed, settled, and so on.
With regards to this story though, it will be really interesting how things play out later down the line. Especially considering what’s been revealed in canon MHA. What with All For One turning out to be highly vulnerable to negative emotions due to his quirk, as well as his motivations for being a villain at all. Motivations which, in my humble opinion, could’ve been handled much better if I were to be perfectly honest.
However, it all ironically sets things up perfectly for this story’s plot. Especially considering that Angra Mainyu is involved here. Very ironic for things to coincidentally be perfectly set up for this particular story’s plot and premise. So really looking forward to seeing how all of that plays out. And a conflict that Shirou will DEFINITELY need his Reality Marble for no doubt.
Besides all that, another great chapter! Really looking forward to the next one! Whenever it comes out, though hopefully its able to come sooner rather than later.
Really nice to see this story back in action! Though also really sorry to hear about your burnout.
While its none of my business what goes on in your life outside of writing fanfiction, please do prioritise taking care of yourself and your real life needs.
Burnout can also be due to stresses from other things going on in personal life, and also just from going through tough and difficult times. So if you really need some time off to focus on things going on in your personal life, then please do by all means.
You mentioned a part-time job which is good. But its far from a long term solution. And you do need to make a living, to tend to your needs, and to be both stable and comfortable in your life to even be able to continue doing creative work out of pure passion alone with no profit. Fanfiction being no exception to this.
As for the Patreon, well, its something. But please do be careful about that. Making profit off of someone else’s IP could have copyright issues and so on. So again, just be cautious when it comes to that.
Really hoping that you pull through and wishing you the best. You’re a very skilled writer and you’ve done an amazing job with this crossover so far. And its only getting even more interesting to follow and see where it goes.
So it’d honestly be very sad to see this story, as well as your life as a fanfiction author, take an even bigger pounding than its all already going through right now with your burnout. Again, please do take some time off if you really need to, tend to whatever you need to be addressing in your personal life, and come back later refreshed, relaxed, settled, and so on.
With regards to this story though, it will be really interesting how things play out later down the line. Especially considering what’s been revealed in canon MHA. What with All For One turning out to be highly vulnerable to negative emotions due to his quirk, as well as his motivations for being a villain at all. Motivations which, in my humble opinion, could’ve been handled much better if I were to be perfectly honest.
However, it all ironically sets things up perfectly for this story’s plot. Especially considering that Angra Mainyu is involved here. Very ironic for things to coincidentally be perfectly set up for this particular story’s plot and premise. So really looking forward to seeing how all of that plays out. And a conflict that Shirou will DEFINITELY need his Reality Marble for no doubt.
Besides all that, another great chapter! Really looking forward to the next one! Whenever it comes out, though hopefully its able to come sooner rather than later.
10/26/2023 c46 20Rialga
Wonder if Kouta will latch onto Shirou instead of Izuku... or just hero worship both of them by the end of this arc. Would be funny if he started to take up weapons training after seeing Shirou in action, ha ha.
And our favorite elderly hero is clearly being set up here to mentor Shirou during this arc! Wonder what exactly his opinion will be of our favorite Faker once they get to know each other. Would be even funnier if he somehow bumps into EMIYA later on and forms a very different opinion of him.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
P.S. Yeah, I feel you - motivation for writing can come and go pretty damn hard when life is throwing a lot more at you, hence that burnout sensation. But never try and force it too hard - just go at your own pace and write what you can when you can!
20RialgaWonder if Kouta will latch onto Shirou instead of Izuku... or just hero worship both of them by the end of this arc. Would be funny if he started to take up weapons training after seeing Shirou in action, ha ha.
And our favorite elderly hero is clearly being set up here to mentor Shirou during this arc! Wonder what exactly his opinion will be of our favorite Faker once they get to know each other. Would be even funnier if he somehow bumps into EMIYA later on and forms a very different opinion of him.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
P.S. Yeah, I feel you - motivation for writing can come and go pretty damn hard when life is throwing a lot more at you, hence that burnout sensation. But never try and force it too hard - just go at your own pace and write what you can when you can!
10/23/2023 c46 Guest
Nice!
Nice!
10/25/2023 c46 4Boyboy180
Problem:
"He wasn't sure if magical energy could be stored."
...Shirou knows it can, for a fact. I'm fairly sure Rin explains the concept of what her Gems are to him. Sure, that's magecraft but the fact remains that magical energy can be stored. They'd just need to find a new way to do it.
4Boyboy180Problem:
"He wasn't sure if magical energy could be stored."
...Shirou knows it can, for a fact. I'm fairly sure Rin explains the concept of what her Gems are to him. Sure, that's magecraft but the fact remains that magical energy can be stored. They'd just need to find a new way to do it.
10/23/2023 c46 Guest
I missed this story is great to see another update after so many months. I still loved the so little mentioning of Tohsaka every now and then here. Keep going please.
I missed this story is great to see another update after so many months. I still loved the so little mentioning of Tohsaka every now and then here. Keep going please.
10/25/2023 c46 Glasrevin
Good to see ya back mate, have you tried using chat gpt to help write. Heard it can really help with writers block.
Good to see ya back mate, have you tried using chat gpt to help write. Heard it can really help with writers block.
10/24/2023 c46 11HKGlenstid
Welcome back! Honestly glad I found this story. It's been really fun so far. Also wondering if Nighteye will see Shirou's future on the hill of swords as well.
11HKGlenstidWelcome back! Honestly glad I found this story. It's been really fun so far. Also wondering if Nighteye will see Shirou's future on the hill of swords as well.