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8/24/2017 c1 30elisuni
Although the grammar is something to work on, I see great potential. Little things you do and words you use point towards advanced writing, so never fear! Just work on execution of your skills and then you'll be great! I suggest you find a good beta reader, they help catch those little mistakes and smooth out your story! In the meantime, thanks for writing this!
8/18/2017 c1 8Dossypet
you should keep writing this was great!
8/14/2017 c1 Guest
HEY HOLA, ME GUSTO MUCHO ESTA HISTORIA, ESCRIBES BIEN, SIGUE ASI
8/15/2017 c1 Mia Tia
Nice. I have that problem too
8/14/2017 c1 22REDNV12
Uh oh! Better watch out Brandon!
8/14/2017 c1 34Samaritan Prime
Oh dear. Brendan has triggered Angry!Daddy!Bats. He's screwed.

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