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Plz continue
Plz continue
1/16/2018 c1 
2MechanizedCorvid
I’m loving your writing style, characterization, and the plot so far! Please continue this great story!
2MechanizedCorvidI’m loving your writing style, characterization, and the plot so far! Please continue this great story!
9/6/2017 c2 sparklehannah
I'm glad to see a new chapter. It was interesting to see some elf chaos which. Thought was hilarious, but I was curious about why they were being so wild. I loved that Jack got to go on his super secret guardian spy mission and it was fun to see some daring Sandy and Tooth. Were they feeling bolder perhaps since last time they were Pitch's first targets. The battle was good. I like that Jack led them to the lair and then split off a bit to investigate. I'm curious to see what's up with the box and this women. Good work. Looking forward to next time.
I'm glad to see a new chapter. It was interesting to see some elf chaos which. Thought was hilarious, but I was curious about why they were being so wild. I loved that Jack got to go on his super secret guardian spy mission and it was fun to see some daring Sandy and Tooth. Were they feeling bolder perhaps since last time they were Pitch's first targets. The battle was good. I like that Jack led them to the lair and then split off a bit to investigate. I'm curious to see what's up with the box and this women. Good work. Looking forward to next time.
8/16/2017 c1 sparklehannah
Nice cliffhanger at the end. You can really feel the shift from playful to serious. I liked your idea of Jack going overboard his first Christmas as a guardian and then having to slow down for a few years. I also think it's interesting to see Jack building a new home in the South Pole. I'm excited to see where this goes. Great work and welcome back.
Nice cliffhanger at the end. You can really feel the shift from playful to serious. I liked your idea of Jack going overboard his first Christmas as a guardian and then having to slow down for a few years. I also think it's interesting to see Jack building a new home in the South Pole. I'm excited to see where this goes. Great work and welcome back.