for Book of Dreams and Magical Things8/20/2017 c1 Guest
This is really good. But you shouldn't switch pov so randomly with out warning, it's a little confusing. Other than that, good job.
This is really good. But you shouldn't switch pov so randomly with out warning, it's a little confusing. Other than that, good job.
8/19/2017 c1 
15Serami Nefera
It is a good start to the story that you adopted. I look forward to how this one will go :)
15Serami NeferaIt is a good start to the story that you adopted. I look forward to how this one will go :)
8/15/2017 c1 9bluefrostyy
Sounds interesting so far! Poor baby :( Ok so he had always been human is not Jack turned human
His aunt is a bit**!
Continue soon
9bluefrostyySounds interesting so far! Poor baby :( Ok so he had always been human is not Jack turned human
His aunt is a bit**!
Continue soon