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12/16/2018 c1 Guest
Is this going to be secondary riders crossover?

This has a lot of potential.
8/19/2017 c1 YukariNanaya22
The grammar and spelling need some work. But there isn't anything really too bad to point out right away, but also use of line breaks between your "author's notes" and the actual story is something else you will need.

But beyond that, this is an interesting read and a good idea for a crossover.
8/18/2017 c1 140SeaSpectre160
This looks like an interesting story, and I would love to see where it goes. It reminds me of another fic I wrote around the same time as 'The Other Two-in-One Hero'.

The spelling and grammar could use some work, however.
8/18/2017 c1 8D.N.S Akina
It's looked interesting maybe put a test for Barry by Ryusei if he qualifies as a real hero or ally
8/16/2017 c1 deadaccountneveropeningitagain
It's pretty good. But it could use more line breaks, because the dialogue is all over the place. You can still raise the quality of this story, good luck!

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