
6/14/2018 c1
27kelsi106
I like this story so far, are you planning on continuing it? Also, some constructive criticism, I noticed in the beginning you were kind of jumping around a bit. Would you mind giving Eli and her family some context and background? Like why she gets flashes of and seems to know the future, what did it mean for her when she said it is time in the beginning? Why did she go to Forks and pretend to be Bella? That among other things. I enjoyed the story don't get me wrong and look forward to reading more if you continue, I would just like some clarification due to some of my confusion. Other than that, good job!

I like this story so far, are you planning on continuing it? Also, some constructive criticism, I noticed in the beginning you were kind of jumping around a bit. Would you mind giving Eli and her family some context and background? Like why she gets flashes of and seems to know the future, what did it mean for her when she said it is time in the beginning? Why did she go to Forks and pretend to be Bella? That among other things. I enjoyed the story don't get me wrong and look forward to reading more if you continue, I would just like some clarification due to some of my confusion. Other than that, good job!
10/21/2017 c1 Guest
Please continue ,can izabola be Klaus mikaelson mate
Please continue ,can izabola be Klaus mikaelson mate