for State of the Meta6/17 c77 ACE
man this is awsome glad to see updates again
but i kinda wanna see joey and tristan dule
i mean even mokuba got a moment
and possibly joey and atticus have a moment together also
man this is awsome glad to see updates again
but i kinda wanna see joey and tristan dule
i mean even mokuba got a moment
and possibly joey and atticus have a moment together also
6/13 c3 
3Thatlonelyguy2010
Jamie is way more like Kaiba, and Zane is like Yugi. Zane's attitude is like Kaiba, but he's also the same guy who practically scolded Jaiden for dueling with his head instead of his heart. Jaime would literally be Kaiba if he was as rich. Good story but obvious plothole with how he could've won with ring of destruction.
3Thatlonelyguy2010Jamie is way more like Kaiba, and Zane is like Yugi. Zane's attitude is like Kaiba, but he's also the same guy who practically scolded Jaiden for dueling with his head instead of his heart. Jaime would literally be Kaiba if he was as rich. Good story but obvious plothole with how he could've won with ring of destruction.
6/9 c77 Dark
What was his goal with Yubel? To stop her from getting what she wants? The fusion with Jaden?
Also since the Mc got dumped in with og Jamie, did that switch the fusion targets? Otherwise it'd be a 4 way fusion instead of two different ones.
This should serve as a lesson, mercy was the wrong choice.
What was his goal with Yubel? To stop her from getting what she wants? The fusion with Jaden?
Also since the Mc got dumped in with og Jamie, did that switch the fusion targets? Otherwise it'd be a 4 way fusion instead of two different ones.
This should serve as a lesson, mercy was the wrong choice.
6/8 c77 Peter Kim
Unlike in Yugioh GX anime, Jaden wasn’t corrupted by his dark side and hasn’t trap himself inside himself and Yubel never understood love and I am not saying the Yubel isn’t the victim, etc but misunderstood, corrupted by the Light Of Destruction and such. Even if Jamie try to change the timeline, the river of destiny correct type mistake, in a way Banner is right, they are fishes swept in the river of destiny, you can fight the currents but sometimes the current s will swept you away like what happened to Judai and Yubel.
Unlike in Yugioh GX anime, Jaden wasn’t corrupted by his dark side and hasn’t trap himself inside himself and Yubel never understood love and I am not saying the Yubel isn’t the victim, etc but misunderstood, corrupted by the Light Of Destruction and such. Even if Jamie try to change the timeline, the river of destiny correct type mistake, in a way Banner is right, they are fishes swept in the river of destiny, you can fight the currents but sometimes the current s will swept you away like what happened to Judai and Yubel.
6/4 c77 Guest
So, this fusion readjusts powerscaling. Does this put the Yugi’s at 1, Jaden/Yubel at 2, Jamie/BN at 3 and Kaiba at 4?
Will be interesting to see how it goes. I imagine both the MC will want to de-fuse
So, this fusion readjusts powerscaling. Does this put the Yugi’s at 1, Jaden/Yubel at 2, Jamie/BN at 3 and Kaiba at 4?
Will be interesting to see how it goes. I imagine both the MC will want to de-fuse
5/30 c77 reader0007
ugh,everyone in Yubel camp (even Jaden) pushing Jamie as if he is a malicious liar body snatcher from different dimension,when actually Jamie has no control about how he suddenly appear here. And why Jaden is so upset with Jamie,enough to severe their friendship? it is not like Jaden is already friend with the OG Jamie before the body snatch happen,the one who is friend with Jaden from beginning is always been MC Jamie! if it is about the secret,as if anyone would believe Jamie if he told anyone about it.
ugh,everyone in Yubel camp (even Jaden) pushing Jamie as if he is a malicious liar body snatcher from different dimension,when actually Jamie has no control about how he suddenly appear here. And why Jaden is so upset with Jamie,enough to severe their friendship? it is not like Jaden is already friend with the OG Jamie before the body snatch happen,the one who is friend with Jaden from beginning is always been MC Jamie! if it is about the secret,as if anyone would believe Jamie if he told anyone about it.
5/28 c77 Just a Reader
I may not like the superpoly direction, but it certainly dosen't warrant dropping this fic. I'm here for the long run, buddy.
For better or worse, you should write with passion, no matter what your choices might be. Even if I and many others would disagree. You are the author. It's your story.
Sonata coming in clutch! I don't think our Jamie could've come back from this one.
That duel was intense! I kept thinking "how's Yubel getting out of this one?" and then go "Oh! You cockroach!". But when Jaden said to Jamie they're not friends anymore... (clutch my pearls) it's not undeserved... but coming from him, it really hurts. Maybe there's hope for them to... start over? If there's even hope for that...
So... Jamie's fusion. How's that gonna work? Did they became a whole new person? A Yami Yugi situation? Or an abridged Piccolo thing?
Well... at least it plays into the bizarre world of yugioh.
But hey, wouldn't reached this far if I didn't like the story, so let's see where it goes.
Despite my grievance, you did a good job.
Take care.
P.S.
Whatever mistakes you've made with dueling rule book, it could not be compared to the MANY mistakes from canon. And they had budget.
I may not like the superpoly direction, but it certainly dosen't warrant dropping this fic. I'm here for the long run, buddy.
For better or worse, you should write with passion, no matter what your choices might be. Even if I and many others would disagree. You are the author. It's your story.
Sonata coming in clutch! I don't think our Jamie could've come back from this one.
That duel was intense! I kept thinking "how's Yubel getting out of this one?" and then go "Oh! You cockroach!". But when Jaden said to Jamie they're not friends anymore... (clutch my pearls) it's not undeserved... but coming from him, it really hurts. Maybe there's hope for them to... start over? If there's even hope for that...
So... Jamie's fusion. How's that gonna work? Did they became a whole new person? A Yami Yugi situation? Or an abridged Piccolo thing?
Well... at least it plays into the bizarre world of yugioh.
But hey, wouldn't reached this far if I didn't like the story, so let's see where it goes.
Despite my grievance, you did a good job.
Take care.
P.S.
Whatever mistakes you've made with dueling rule book, it could not be compared to the MANY mistakes from canon. And they had budget.
5/27 c77 2Pridesbane
Excellent chapter as usual! The 12-material Super Poly was incredibly hype, as was the ACTUALLY LEGAL Fusion Duplication that Jaden used to replicate the anime scene
Only nitpick is that King of the Swamp shouldnt be able to substitute for an "Armed Dragon" monster, but who cared, that was hype. And it's not like we'd see Armed Neos any other way
Truly an excellent high octane cinematic and meaningful fight. Excited to see how this plays out!
2PridesbaneExcellent chapter as usual! The 12-material Super Poly was incredibly hype, as was the ACTUALLY LEGAL Fusion Duplication that Jaden used to replicate the anime scene
Only nitpick is that King of the Swamp shouldnt be able to substitute for an "Armed Dragon" monster, but who cared, that was hype. And it's not like we'd see Armed Neos any other way
Truly an excellent high octane cinematic and meaningful fight. Excited to see how this plays out!
5/27 c77 Peter Kim
There is a question that need to be answered which who brought Jamie to Yugioh GX world and how did he gain the Gentle Darkness’s powers and who arranged to have Jamie to have that deck which is only in the real world and Yugioh Arc V to get the Jamie from the Yugioh GX world to get that deck pack in the first place?
There is a question that need to be answered which who brought Jamie to Yugioh GX world and how did he gain the Gentle Darkness’s powers and who arranged to have Jamie to have that deck which is only in the real world and Yugioh Arc V to get the Jamie from the Yugioh GX world to get that deck pack in the first place?
5/27 c77 guest
I wonder how long this story will goes. The Yubel arc has been pretty much wrapped up and the Exodia stuff needs to be dealt with. What comes after that? I am fine with the story finally concluding after everything gets wrapped up. It is still a great Yugioh fanfic with an oc main character.
I wonder how long this story will goes. The Yubel arc has been pretty much wrapped up and the Exodia stuff needs to be dealt with. What comes after that? I am fine with the story finally concluding after everything gets wrapped up. It is still a great Yugioh fanfic with an oc main character.
5/27 c77 2SilverJoJo
Thank God Jamie didn't kill OG Jamie that would've been his Moral Event Horizon for sure, on the brightside however, Jaden did his canonical way of defeating Yubel... And bringing Jamie along by accident, really looking forward how THAT will play out in the next chapter.
2SilverJoJoThank God Jamie didn't kill OG Jamie that would've been his Moral Event Horizon for sure, on the brightside however, Jaden did his canonical way of defeating Yubel... And bringing Jamie along by accident, really looking forward how THAT will play out in the next chapter.
5/26 c77 15KuriMaster13
Actually, I think Divine Neos's coping effect would also copy the cost of Aqua Dolphin... because I know Pseudo Space copied the cost of Chicken Game when those were used together as upstarts 4-9.
Though considering how other cards like Transaction Rollback and... like, ALL the Darklord monsters... do bypass cost, I can't blame you for making that mistake.
Beyond that... nice duel. :)
Yeah, sometimes Super poly shenanigans happen.
15KuriMaster13Actually, I think Divine Neos's coping effect would also copy the cost of Aqua Dolphin... because I know Pseudo Space copied the cost of Chicken Game when those were used together as upstarts 4-9.
Though considering how other cards like Transaction Rollback and... like, ALL the Darklord monsters... do bypass cost, I can't blame you for making that mistake.
Beyond that... nice duel. :)
Yeah, sometimes Super poly shenanigans happen.
5/26 c2 Messala9999
Neo infinity Regarding extra zone, I assume it is similar in the OCG structure manga where the extra zone pops up from the upper left side of the monster zone on your duel disk
Neo infinity Regarding extra zone, I assume it is similar in the OCG structure manga where the extra zone pops up from the upper left side of the monster zone on your duel disk
5/26 c77 Vini666
The extra zone and the 1000LP confused me a bit.
I liked the duel, Yubel’s feelings of love and hate, Jaden’s disillusionment with his current life, and the meeting between Jamie and Jaden at the end were the things I enjoyed the most.
I wanted a bit more perspective from the other characters watching Jaden’s duel, but honestly, I don’t know if it would have made it even more emotional or just bloated with words.
Jamie fusing seems a bit cliché, and the decision to kill or not kill the original Jamie felt a bit rushed. In retrospect, I think this would have fit better in the previous chapter, which would have given you more words to develop that decision.
I’ll wait for the next chapter so I can better evaluate my thoughts on the fusion of the two Jamies.
The extra zone and the 1000LP confused me a bit.
I liked the duel, Yubel’s feelings of love and hate, Jaden’s disillusionment with his current life, and the meeting between Jamie and Jaden at the end were the things I enjoyed the most.
I wanted a bit more perspective from the other characters watching Jaden’s duel, but honestly, I don’t know if it would have made it even more emotional or just bloated with words.
Jamie fusing seems a bit cliché, and the decision to kill or not kill the original Jamie felt a bit rushed. In retrospect, I think this would have fit better in the previous chapter, which would have given you more words to develop that decision.
I’ll wait for the next chapter so I can better evaluate my thoughts on the fusion of the two Jamies.
5/26 c77 2Zap C. Cannon
Man what a chapter. Of course Jamie's decision came back to bite him, but any choice would've been bad. Maybe he'll get to do Yugi-Atem stuff with Blade Knight? Or more how Jaden and Yubel became, though I guess Jamie would be in control in that case, since BK is a spirit like Yubel? Or maybe they'll become a fourway-clustertruck, who knows. Looking forward to what it'll be!
The duel was great. Can't believe you managed to pull out all the big Neo's fusions. The little error with Instant Contact is what it is but I don't think it matters at the end since the result would be the same.
While the consequences of Jamie's decision were ... not ideal for him I'm happy to see he managed to pull himself together after all the shit he went through. Speaks a lot of his character and reminded me of how broken he was when he confessed his supernatural existence to Kaiba all the way back.
Similarly, the Jaden-Jesse-Yubel stuff was really good and I hope to see more of that when it comes to mopping up the remaining antagonists.
Thanks for the chapter!
2Zap C. CannonMan what a chapter. Of course Jamie's decision came back to bite him, but any choice would've been bad. Maybe he'll get to do Yugi-Atem stuff with Blade Knight? Or more how Jaden and Yubel became, though I guess Jamie would be in control in that case, since BK is a spirit like Yubel? Or maybe they'll become a fourway-clustertruck, who knows. Looking forward to what it'll be!
The duel was great. Can't believe you managed to pull out all the big Neo's fusions. The little error with Instant Contact is what it is but I don't think it matters at the end since the result would be the same.
While the consequences of Jamie's decision were ... not ideal for him I'm happy to see he managed to pull himself together after all the shit he went through. Speaks a lot of his character and reminded me of how broken he was when he confessed his supernatural existence to Kaiba all the way back.
Similarly, the Jaden-Jesse-Yubel stuff was really good and I hope to see more of that when it comes to mopping up the remaining antagonists.
Thanks for the chapter!