for State of the Meta3/12/2022 c65 Peter Kim
To Rahad,
I like have a duel in every chapter and it makes it interesting. However, I understand your point to having too much dueling in every chapters as well. Jamie makes things interesting in this fan fiction and is not useless and Jamie could have a overwhelming deck like D/D/D deck, etc or an OC deck that can defeat almost all opponent but his deck is medium ranked archetype deck that he is improving and Jamie is a careful duelists and like to plan out thing when he duel.
To Rahad,
I like have a duel in every chapter and it makes it interesting. However, I understand your point to having too much dueling in every chapters as well. Jamie makes things interesting in this fan fiction and is not useless and Jamie could have a overwhelming deck like D/D/D deck, etc or an OC deck that can defeat almost all opponent but his deck is medium ranked archetype deck that he is improving and Jamie is a careful duelists and like to plan out thing when he duel.
3/9/2022 c1 
3KingNovaCrimson
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
tomorrow. Good day
3KingNovaCrimsonWARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
tomorrow. Good day
3/7/2022 c29 rahad
God... this chapter has so trash. Kaiba got every single card he needed and wanted. The story is just getting worse with each chapter. I did love the story at the start. But, does every damn chapter has to have a duel? Is it so hard for you to advance the story or character with out needing to have a duel in every single chapter?
One thing, i hate about the recent chapter, is the MC. He is just useless to the story. He did not improve or made the live of the character easier. He made it worse. So what the point of your Mc in This story? He should have gone to a different school and stay away from canon. He is making the live of everyone worse like Yubel said.
God... this chapter has so trash. Kaiba got every single card he needed and wanted. The story is just getting worse with each chapter. I did love the story at the start. But, does every damn chapter has to have a duel? Is it so hard for you to advance the story or character with out needing to have a duel in every single chapter?
One thing, i hate about the recent chapter, is the MC. He is just useless to the story. He did not improve or made the live of the character easier. He made it worse. So what the point of your Mc in This story? He should have gone to a different school and stay away from canon. He is making the live of everyone worse like Yubel said.
3/5/2022 c16 Luciano Gregorio
great chapter , but the mistakes are to large to let it get a pass , cards in alexis hand don't add up , how she has 3 cards in the end of turn if : she draw (6) , summoned maju (5) activate maju (6) , set one card (5) , HOW she has 3 cards in her hand? meteor dragon and benten destroyed thenselves , how darkshwoud has 2 monsters?
great chapter , but the mistakes are to large to let it get a pass , cards in alexis hand don't add up , how she has 3 cards in the end of turn if : she draw (6) , summoned maju (5) activate maju (6) , set one card (5) , HOW she has 3 cards in her hand? meteor dragon and benten destroyed thenselves , how darkshwoud has 2 monsters?
2/25/2022 c27 Krulla Chief
"Mindlessly following the meta" My god, that line gets even more hysterical with age.
"Mindlessly following the meta" My god, that line gets even more hysterical with age.
2/22/2022 c1 Guest
...Anyone else feel that "Jamie" is a self righteous arrogant asshole?
...Anyone else feel that "Jamie" is a self righteous arrogant asshole?
2/20/2022 c32 1PersonaNinja Lux
The Vagabond was based on the Tag-Force game MC, he wore the same clothes and is basically the self-Insert character for the player but until Tag Force 4 or 5 didn't really affect the storyline
1PersonaNinja LuxThe Vagabond was based on the Tag-Force game MC, he wore the same clothes and is basically the self-Insert character for the player but until Tag Force 4 or 5 didn't really affect the storyline
2/20/2022 c65 Guest
Excellent chapter! Really enjoy the use of Viper's son as a character and excited to see what he will do. The arc seems to be hitting it's climax soon and I am curious to see what will happen after that. Thanks for keeping up with the story for these years and I look forward to seeing the conclusion.
Excellent chapter! Really enjoy the use of Viper's son as a character and excited to see what he will do. The arc seems to be hitting it's climax soon and I am curious to see what will happen after that. Thanks for keeping up with the story for these years and I look forward to seeing the conclusion.
2/18/2022 c65 Just a Reader
This chapter, man...this chapter left me in stiches.
Everything from Erin enslaving the boys, Crowler mistaken Axel's duel disk for a gun and Jaden with an army of darkness singing freaking All Star...I don't know what to say, that's such a Jaden thing to do.
Now that I got my laughs out of the way, on to the review.
I thought Sartorius was going to die on the spot, but it's in Yubel's character to keep him alive for torture later. So he might have a chance. I just hope Jamie won't go back on his word with Sarina if he does find her brother.
So Jamie and the gang got in touch with Witchcrafters and Amazons. Who are they going to meet next along the way?
Where did Viper get the sudden bravado? did he made a deal with Yubel like in canon again? or is Tragoedia finally making his move?
Some random thoughts:
Maybe after the tournament, Central academy will finally open a female dorm in Slifer and Ra. To filter out the weak from the strong. According to yugioh wiki, The reason for females automaticity placing in Obelisk is "because the lower two dorms do not have the appropriate housing". But to be honest, that doesn't sound like Kaiba. Even at his most ludicrous, he NEVER half ass anything. It's much more believable he's using the ladies as motivation for the guys in lower ranks to work hard and rise to Obelisk. That would explain why their skirts are at the size of belts! (seriously, how do they sit down without exposing their entire ass?) Akiza from 5ds was a Slifer red, so I guess they opened them eventually. I'm saying all of this because it could be the perfect opportunity to develop Mindy. Everyone is moving up to better things, while she's going down...that had to be scary to her.
You know? I used to think that Trickstar would fit Jamie's deck, being idol singers and all. But it would only make Melodious stand out less. There's only room for one goofy singing archetype!
That's why I think Lunalight are the final piece of the puzzle. So many thing comes full circle with them. Their play style is aggressive in nature, contradicting to Melodious defensive style, yet similar. Like how their Goldin masks cover half their faces like the Melodious music notes. Defense and Offence, Light and Dark, Chaos. They're Beast Worriers while Jamie's duel energy manifest in the form of a Lion. And not to mention, musicians and dancers complete each other.
Dancers...like the Cyber Angels. huh?
Maybe I'm stretching that one, but it's interesting to think about.
Sorry for the long paragraph, I got exited.
This chapter, man...this chapter left me in stiches.
Everything from Erin enslaving the boys, Crowler mistaken Axel's duel disk for a gun and Jaden with an army of darkness singing freaking All Star...I don't know what to say, that's such a Jaden thing to do.
Now that I got my laughs out of the way, on to the review.
I thought Sartorius was going to die on the spot, but it's in Yubel's character to keep him alive for torture later. So he might have a chance. I just hope Jamie won't go back on his word with Sarina if he does find her brother.
So Jamie and the gang got in touch with Witchcrafters and Amazons. Who are they going to meet next along the way?
Where did Viper get the sudden bravado? did he made a deal with Yubel like in canon again? or is Tragoedia finally making his move?
Some random thoughts:
Maybe after the tournament, Central academy will finally open a female dorm in Slifer and Ra. To filter out the weak from the strong. According to yugioh wiki, The reason for females automaticity placing in Obelisk is "because the lower two dorms do not have the appropriate housing". But to be honest, that doesn't sound like Kaiba. Even at his most ludicrous, he NEVER half ass anything. It's much more believable he's using the ladies as motivation for the guys in lower ranks to work hard and rise to Obelisk. That would explain why their skirts are at the size of belts! (seriously, how do they sit down without exposing their entire ass?) Akiza from 5ds was a Slifer red, so I guess they opened them eventually. I'm saying all of this because it could be the perfect opportunity to develop Mindy. Everyone is moving up to better things, while she's going down...that had to be scary to her.
You know? I used to think that Trickstar would fit Jamie's deck, being idol singers and all. But it would only make Melodious stand out less. There's only room for one goofy singing archetype!
That's why I think Lunalight are the final piece of the puzzle. So many thing comes full circle with them. Their play style is aggressive in nature, contradicting to Melodious defensive style, yet similar. Like how their Goldin masks cover half their faces like the Melodious music notes. Defense and Offence, Light and Dark, Chaos. They're Beast Worriers while Jamie's duel energy manifest in the form of a Lion. And not to mention, musicians and dancers complete each other.
Dancers...like the Cyber Angels. huh?
Maybe I'm stretching that one, but it's interesting to think about.
Sorry for the long paragraph, I got exited.
2/18/2022 c65 8myfunvideos
Finally! We got to the part where Jaden meets Yubel again. Although, I have to say Jaden passing out from the sight of his old card is...not unexpected, but definitely surprising anyway.
I hope there is more interactions pertaining to this because these past few chapters we less of that is driving me nuts with excitement!
8myfunvideosFinally! We got to the part where Jaden meets Yubel again. Although, I have to say Jaden passing out from the sight of his old card is...not unexpected, but definitely surprising anyway.
I hope there is more interactions pertaining to this because these past few chapters we less of that is driving me nuts with excitement!
2/17/2022 c65 Peter Kim
I would like to see Jamie fight a Trickstar and how will he do against a Trickstar deck with link summoning which the others have never seen? Jamie has to fake awe or surprise when a trickster monster link summon a Trickstar link monster. Trickstar and his deck can fit very well together and Trickstar is dangerous even without Trickstar link monsters in fact, most players in this world doesn’t even use Trickstar link monsters and I would like to see Jamie’ gain a Trickstar deck to merge with his deck.
I would like to see Jamie fight a Trickstar and how will he do against a Trickstar deck with link summoning which the others have never seen? Jamie has to fake awe or surprise when a trickster monster link summon a Trickstar link monster. Trickstar and his deck can fit very well together and Trickstar is dangerous even without Trickstar link monsters in fact, most players in this world doesn’t even use Trickstar link monsters and I would like to see Jamie’ gain a Trickstar deck to merge with his deck.
2/17/2022 c65 2LoveGlutton
Well. She hasn’t immediately ordered sartorius’ execution, so there’s that.
Also. Kaiba trying to find the maiden. Not unexpected, but I have a feeling if she was found things would not go nealry as well as he thinks… after all he still has the fourth one being ripped to answer for.
Also… the slave snu snu plan was hilarious. Disturbing when zane partially revealed his hidden side, but hilarious.
2LoveGluttonWell. She hasn’t immediately ordered sartorius’ execution, so there’s that.
Also. Kaiba trying to find the maiden. Not unexpected, but I have a feeling if she was found things would not go nealry as well as he thinks… after all he still has the fourth one being ripped to answer for.
Also… the slave snu snu plan was hilarious. Disturbing when zane partially revealed his hidden side, but hilarious.
2/17/2022 c65 Peter Kim
So who is Edo, Jessie and Ryo is going to duel? I would like to see Ryo duel Lunalight since both playing style is similar which is destroy your opponent with raw power. I would like to see Edo duel wind witch since wind witch has nasty effects. Jessie should duel Lyrilusc deck. I think Jamie and the others should recruit Lunalight, Wind Witch and Lurilusc monsters into helping, etc them and they are female does help. Notice the pattern that I want female archetype monsters to help, etc since Jamie is a harem protagonist.
So who is Edo, Jessie and Ryo is going to duel? I would like to see Ryo duel Lunalight since both playing style is similar which is destroy your opponent with raw power. I would like to see Edo duel wind witch since wind witch has nasty effects. Jessie should duel Lyrilusc deck. I think Jamie and the others should recruit Lunalight, Wind Witch and Lurilusc monsters into helping, etc them and they are female does help. Notice the pattern that I want female archetype monsters to help, etc since Jamie is a harem protagonist.
2/16/2022 c65 Neo Infinity
Thanks for the great chapter glad you finally updated, the spirit world is kinda confusing cause some legendary monsters like blue eyes are known but not seen or have strict territories, I’m expecting MC group to eventually meet magician girls or similar famous yet underrated team/archetype who will help them get the bigger picture and give them a needed powerhouse.
Thanks for the great chapter glad you finally updated, the spirit world is kinda confusing cause some legendary monsters like blue eyes are known but not seen or have strict territories, I’m expecting MC group to eventually meet magician girls or similar famous yet underrated team/archetype who will help them get the bigger picture and give them a needed powerhouse.