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2/22/2018 c14 LabyrinthChild05
I want to see what happens next!
2/22/2018 c14 Linkwonka88
Yes plz make a part 2 it would be so awesome
2/21/2018 c14 3Skyler the Elf Owl
Yes :)
2/21/2018 c14 5TheFastFox
Part 2!
10/26/2017 c13 LabyrinthChild05
Squee!
10/27/2017 c13 TheFastFox
Wow! What a story! I enjoyed reading it. This chapter almost made me cry tears of joy :') I enjoyed reviewing! Hope you write more stories!
10/25/2017 c1 Zeek101
This story makes no sense and it’s not formatted correctly even though it’s good
10/24/2017 c12 LabyrinthChild05
Awe I can't wait for him to say how pretty Violet is.
10/22/2017 c1 XXCandyLoverXX
Wowimhavingsuchahardtimereadingthisbecauseyourformattingisinneedofseriousworkifyoucantunderstandwhatiwroteherethenyoushouldhaveanideaofhowharditisforustounderstandyourwriting.
10/22/2017 c1 31mattTheWriter072
Wow. I'm terribly sorry to say this, but your formatting needs some serious work, since I'm having a very hard time with reading your story. There aren't any paragraphs; just a big, imposing wall of text that gives me a headache whenever I try to read what you're writing, as well as tons of run-on sentences. Turrislucidus posted similar comments of her own, in case you haven't read them. Please make sure to heed our advice, as well as the FanFiction dot net guidelines for your future works, okay? We would all benefit from less eye strain while reading.
10/22/2017 c12 5TheFastFox
Is that the end? If it is, I liked it!
10/20/2017 c11 TheFastFox
Nice chapter! Also, why does it say complete when your still updating it?
10/15/2017 c11 12Turrislucidus
This wall of words, it's all a blur, I can't make out a thing;
The thoughts herein, will stay hidden, for lack of formatting.
*weeps copiously*
10/10/2017 c10 Linkwonka88
Ooo that’s interesting room is Charlie gonna get his eyes fixed or something more sinsiter
10/11/2017 c10 Turrislucidus
Gosh. I wish I could read this :—D
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