for Good and Evil8/29/2017 c3 CuteVyper
Hi, I hope I wasn't too rude with you last time. Sometimes I can be quite harsh. And (since I didnt wanted to sound selfish) thanks for taking in consideration my and 'InnocenceOnlyInDeath' 's reviews. I found interesting the story so far and as I seen improvements in this chapter I will continue to read it. And I like that you are trying this time to keep yourself more mysterious since you mentioned 'those' things (which I have a feeling I know what those are but Im not gonna say anything for now) and 2 new OCs. Interesting. At least in this story Kurogiri has (kind of?) a backstory. Also, a tip if you want to get more involved into this. If you didn't knew, the author of the story made so that the names of the characters would show hints towards the quirk that the heroes and the villains possess. Maybe you could do so with any new OCs you may show in the future but dont bother with it if you dont have the time. I already like the fact that you're actually planning things right before writting and publishing. And take your time with it. Nobody can rush you. Hope to read you soon.
Hi, I hope I wasn't too rude with you last time. Sometimes I can be quite harsh. And (since I didnt wanted to sound selfish) thanks for taking in consideration my and 'InnocenceOnlyInDeath' 's reviews. I found interesting the story so far and as I seen improvements in this chapter I will continue to read it. And I like that you are trying this time to keep yourself more mysterious since you mentioned 'those' things (which I have a feeling I know what those are but Im not gonna say anything for now) and 2 new OCs. Interesting. At least in this story Kurogiri has (kind of?) a backstory. Also, a tip if you want to get more involved into this. If you didn't knew, the author of the story made so that the names of the characters would show hints towards the quirk that the heroes and the villains possess. Maybe you could do so with any new OCs you may show in the future but dont bother with it if you dont have the time. I already like the fact that you're actually planning things right before writting and publishing. And take your time with it. Nobody can rush you. Hope to read you soon.
8/28/2017 c2 
1Review Fiction
I see this to be an interesting twist on the manga and found that your fanfiction of helping the villains out of a desire to be accepted for what he can do, when others did not see him as much. CuteVyper does make some valid points but for some stories some changes are needed here and there as long as Deku retains most of his character, as well as the other characters in the manga. I do enjoy reading the two chapters that have been posted and I also agreeing with InnocenceOnlyInDeath comment on he can be a "bad guy" without necessarily being "evil". I hope to see more chapters of this fanfiction in the quick future. Thank you
1Review FictionI see this to be an interesting twist on the manga and found that your fanfiction of helping the villains out of a desire to be accepted for what he can do, when others did not see him as much. CuteVyper does make some valid points but for some stories some changes are needed here and there as long as Deku retains most of his character, as well as the other characters in the manga. I do enjoy reading the two chapters that have been posted and I also agreeing with InnocenceOnlyInDeath comment on he can be a "bad guy" without necessarily being "evil". I hope to see more chapters of this fanfiction in the quick future. Thank you
8/25/2017 c1 KisekiNoUta
i just stumbled across the idea of Villain Deku a little while ago and i have to say, it didn't make sense to me. he's such a stereotypical anime "good guy" that the concept was a bit difficult for me. however, reading what you've got here, I can see how it would work! he can be a "bad guy" without necessarily being "evil". i can't WAIT to read the next chapter! _
i just stumbled across the idea of Villain Deku a little while ago and i have to say, it didn't make sense to me. he's such a stereotypical anime "good guy" that the concept was a bit difficult for me. however, reading what you've got here, I can see how it would work! he can be a "bad guy" without necessarily being "evil". i can't WAIT to read the next chapter! _
8/25/2017 c2 CuteVyper
Im not sure what to say actually right now since its the beginning of the story but I will try my best. I hope that I will not insult you but this chapter didnt strike me at all. Maybe if you would have kept more mystery about your OCs it would have picked my interest but when you just let all the information out is... too simple. As if youre telling me a small incident that I could care less about. Also your characters felt like... they were emotionless. For All For One I expect it since he wants to be as secretive as possible (althought I believe it was a mistake to make AFO reveal himself so suddenly to Izuku) but for Tomura to not react to this decision or at least talk in game terms and Kurogiri not saying anything too... Also Deku just taking it all in as if it was nothing and just leave his mother all alone... I just cant see him do it so easily. He may be suffering but she is still his mother that gave him all her love even thought she hurt him unintentionally and even if he wanted to suicide, Izuku is clever and has a too good heart for... jusy throwing it all away just to avenge himself and deal a couple of blows to the society of heroes... there needs to be more motives bc in the anime/manga he still tried to save Katsuki from the slime villain even though he put him through so much shit. I hope you take this a constructive criticism but I believe you need to reconsider some facts in your story bc for now it didnt give me any impression of wanting to continue to read it. Hope to read you soon.
Im not sure what to say actually right now since its the beginning of the story but I will try my best. I hope that I will not insult you but this chapter didnt strike me at all. Maybe if you would have kept more mystery about your OCs it would have picked my interest but when you just let all the information out is... too simple. As if youre telling me a small incident that I could care less about. Also your characters felt like... they were emotionless. For All For One I expect it since he wants to be as secretive as possible (althought I believe it was a mistake to make AFO reveal himself so suddenly to Izuku) but for Tomura to not react to this decision or at least talk in game terms and Kurogiri not saying anything too... Also Deku just taking it all in as if it was nothing and just leave his mother all alone... I just cant see him do it so easily. He may be suffering but she is still his mother that gave him all her love even thought she hurt him unintentionally and even if he wanted to suicide, Izuku is clever and has a too good heart for... jusy throwing it all away just to avenge himself and deal a couple of blows to the society of heroes... there needs to be more motives bc in the anime/manga he still tried to save Katsuki from the slime villain even though he put him through so much shit. I hope you take this a constructive criticism but I believe you need to reconsider some facts in your story bc for now it didnt give me any impression of wanting to continue to read it. Hope to read you soon.
8/24/2017 c2 Saturno2149
Yay, another chapter of this, i hope, great story. Will be any pairings with Izuku?
Yay, another chapter of this, i hope, great story. Will be any pairings with Izuku?
8/23/2017 c1 Saturno2149
I really like the fics of VillianDeku, so i hope you update soon.
Good chapter btw.
I really like the fics of VillianDeku, so i hope you update soon.
Good chapter btw.
8/23/2017 c1 CuteVyper
This is an interesting turn of events. With him not being able to take the bull of the world, not trying to save Bakugou from that villain and not being recognised by All Might... and finally making him consider suicide... but miraculously being saved by Darkmist... but under orders of who? Our 'handy' man or All for One? Or just by his own thinking? If its by his own thinking I can see it but by psycho dandy-handy man... only if Izuku reminded him of himself when he was a kid and no hero coming to save him... or AFO... but it would be weird since he hates quirkless people (I think so since he was the one who started the war between people and quirks, unless it was his ante)... but maybe he just wants to see he can exploit the hate for this society hiding in Izuku.
Im not sure, these are all ideas.
I hope I read ya soon.
This is an interesting turn of events. With him not being able to take the bull of the world, not trying to save Bakugou from that villain and not being recognised by All Might... and finally making him consider suicide... but miraculously being saved by Darkmist... but under orders of who? Our 'handy' man or All for One? Or just by his own thinking? If its by his own thinking I can see it but by psycho dandy-handy man... only if Izuku reminded him of himself when he was a kid and no hero coming to save him... or AFO... but it would be weird since he hates quirkless people (I think so since he was the one who started the war between people and quirks, unless it was his ante)... but maybe he just wants to see he can exploit the hate for this society hiding in Izuku.
Im not sure, these are all ideas.
I hope I read ya soon.