for The English Rose3/19 c31 desiree-pow-37-1986
Hello Darling... This story is amazing but you actually have some wrong details for this chalter actually and I know its a fanfic but like i said before you do thos for Twlight crossover...
1.) The thing is the school couldn't do anything to Hermione do to it happen outside of the school grounds...
2.) Charlie couldn't do anything actually because do to he the chief of police he cant gwt involved because its hos daughter...
3.) All this happen on LaPush reservation, there land, which means Chalrie can't do shiit and never could the school because most natives have there own laws and police...
So my question for you is why the school involved because they can't do anything about it if it hapoens outside the school grounda and neither could Charlie because he doesnt have no say so on LaPush grounds because he not a cop for them...
Hello Darling... This story is amazing but you actually have some wrong details for this chalter actually and I know its a fanfic but like i said before you do thos for Twlight crossover...
1.) The thing is the school couldn't do anything to Hermione do to it happen outside of the school grounds...
2.) Charlie couldn't do anything actually because do to he the chief of police he cant gwt involved because its hos daughter...
3.) All this happen on LaPush reservation, there land, which means Chalrie can't do shiit and never could the school because most natives have there own laws and police...
So my question for you is why the school involved because they can't do anything about it if it hapoens outside the school grounda and neither could Charlie because he doesnt have no say so on LaPush grounds because he not a cop for them...
3/17 c11 desiree-pow-37-1986
HELLO DARLING...
I just wanted to come on here and say how much I love your work because you are rhe first writer that got me hooked on crossovers, ever since i read your work two years ago...
I just wanted to give you insight on some things okay...
You actually do this a lot in the twlight crossovers actually...
First off if you would have looked up some info on Twilight you would have seen that Werewolf were actually real...
It's actually the reaosn why Cauis Volturi hates then because when he was human his village was attacked by them and its why he turned into a vampire that night too...
He the one who have actually killed most werewolf...
And another thing when Hermione keeps the Wizarding World a secret or they could get into major trouble, that's not true...
Vampires and Shape-Shifters are apart of the supernatural world and so its okay to let them know the secret...
It's the same way for the Elders and there mates, mates are also apart of the supernatural world because of who there mate is and lets mot forget that Quil 5th grandfather is a true Shaman of the tribe who can communicate with thr spirits...
It also has to do with how the Elders are part of the supernatural world because of this reasons they would be able to know Hermione secret world as well...
Just to let you know you do this alot in your work...
You say it's a secret which it really isn't...
1.) Someone has to know about the supernatural world first
2.) Someone has to be a mate to someone who is supernatural, like a veela or a shifter or vampire or something
3.) Someone has to be supernatural
And unfortunately the shifters and vampires and there mates and Elders would be able to know the secret and Hermione wouldn't have been into any trouble for this reason...
...
And another problem i have is that you also done this in another Twlight fic is how you make Hermione and Ron be together when she with someone else... That's Cheating...
Like in your Sam and Hermione fic how she was engaged to Fred but he died and then she dating her brother, that is so damn disrespectful to Fred memories...
And in this one how she was engaged to Blaise and she still was kind of but she kissed Ron, doesn't Hermione have any damn respect for the people she was with or not...
I understand it's fanfic but still its not right...
That is all darling and i really do love your work...
HELLO DARLING...
I just wanted to come on here and say how much I love your work because you are rhe first writer that got me hooked on crossovers, ever since i read your work two years ago...
I just wanted to give you insight on some things okay...
You actually do this a lot in the twlight crossovers actually...
First off if you would have looked up some info on Twilight you would have seen that Werewolf were actually real...
It's actually the reaosn why Cauis Volturi hates then because when he was human his village was attacked by them and its why he turned into a vampire that night too...
He the one who have actually killed most werewolf...
And another thing when Hermione keeps the Wizarding World a secret or they could get into major trouble, that's not true...
Vampires and Shape-Shifters are apart of the supernatural world and so its okay to let them know the secret...
It's the same way for the Elders and there mates, mates are also apart of the supernatural world because of who there mate is and lets mot forget that Quil 5th grandfather is a true Shaman of the tribe who can communicate with thr spirits...
It also has to do with how the Elders are part of the supernatural world because of this reasons they would be able to know Hermione secret world as well...
Just to let you know you do this alot in your work...
You say it's a secret which it really isn't...
1.) Someone has to know about the supernatural world first
2.) Someone has to be a mate to someone who is supernatural, like a veela or a shifter or vampire or something
3.) Someone has to be supernatural
And unfortunately the shifters and vampires and there mates and Elders would be able to know the secret and Hermione wouldn't have been into any trouble for this reason...
...
And another problem i have is that you also done this in another Twlight fic is how you make Hermione and Ron be together when she with someone else... That's Cheating...
Like in your Sam and Hermione fic how she was engaged to Fred but he died and then she dating her brother, that is so damn disrespectful to Fred memories...
And in this one how she was engaged to Blaise and she still was kind of but she kissed Ron, doesn't Hermione have any damn respect for the people she was with or not...
I understand it's fanfic but still its not right...
That is all darling and i really do love your work...
2/25 c29 Guest
I just wanted to say, amazing story. One thing though, when you're writing the Spanish, you wrote un for and. I just wanted to tell you that and in Spanish is actually y not un. But great story!
I just wanted to say, amazing story. One thing though, when you're writing the Spanish, you wrote un for and. I just wanted to tell you that and in Spanish is actually y not un. But great story!
2/8 c57 Sophiamay
Hi! I wanted to let you know how much I admire your writing. Your story truly stood out to me, and I couldn’t help but imagine how incredible it would be as a comic.
I’m a commission-based digital artist with experience working on comics in collaboration with authors. If you’re open to the idea, I’d love to explore the possibility of working together to bring your story to life in a visual format.
Feel free to contact me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( mariegrey90) if this interests you. I’d love to hear your thoughts!
Hi! I wanted to let you know how much I admire your writing. Your story truly stood out to me, and I couldn’t help but imagine how incredible it would be as a comic.
I’m a commission-based digital artist with experience working on comics in collaboration with authors. If you’re open to the idea, I’d love to explore the possibility of working together to bring your story to life in a visual format.
Feel free to contact me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( mariegrey90) if this interests you. I’d love to hear your thoughts!
2/3 c57 WhisperLynn
I absolutely adore this story and have read it in pieces and reread over the last eight years. It has been a pleasure to have seen you grow as a writer. Thank you for the great story. ️
I absolutely adore this story and have read it in pieces and reread over the last eight years. It has been a pleasure to have seen you grow as a writer. Thank you for the great story. ️
1/14 c57 jjw.jade
It’s bittersweet to see this end since I’ve been keeping up to date with it for awhile. But thank you for drawing us into this world!
It’s bittersweet to see this end since I’ve been keeping up to date with it for awhile. But thank you for drawing us into this world!
1/13 c57 Naedine-Daki
Your story truly captivated me, and I couldn’t help but imagine it as a comic. I’m a digital artist specializing in comic collaborations, and I think your work would translate beautifully into this medium. If you’re open to exploring this idea, feel free to connect with me on Discord: lishafang or Twitter: Pelu_Oficial123.
Your story truly captivated me, and I couldn’t help but imagine it as a comic. I’m a digital artist specializing in comic collaborations, and I think your work would translate beautifully into this medium. If you’re open to exploring this idea, feel free to connect with me on Discord: lishafang or Twitter: Pelu_Oficial123.
1/11 c57 bookluv22
7yrs! Thank you for your efforts to continue with this and your others stories! This was such a sweet and tied up ending! Loved this story!
7yrs! Thank you for your efforts to continue with this and your others stories! This was such a sweet and tied up ending! Loved this story!
1/11 c57 
3xoam
Mee encantó, es una de mis historias favoritas muchas de tus historias son mis favoritas, por favor por favor termina la vida en manada y la Arturo y Hermione por favor
3xoamMee encantó, es una de mis historias favoritas muchas de tus historias son mis favoritas, por favor por favor termina la vida en manada y la Arturo y Hermione por favor
1/10 c57 carissamarie11
Im so happy/sad to seen this finished. Its been a great story. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Im so happy/sad to seen this finished. Its been a great story. Thank you for sharing it with us!
1/10 c57 Banshee Black
We probably all know the feeling, part elated part depressed, when a favourite story comes to its end. That's what I am experiencing right now.
Thank you for your work and the gift it was.
We probably all know the feeling, part elated part depressed, when a favourite story comes to its end. That's what I am experiencing right now.
Thank you for your work and the gift it was.
1/10 c57 Booklovinkitten
i will just throw it out there that my top requested fics from your list are numbers 9,12,13&16 off the top of my head. take your time though! you just finished this one.
i will just throw it out there that my top requested fics from your list are numbers 9,12,13&16 off the top of my head. take your time though! you just finished this one.
1/10 c57 Booklovinkitten
ok, can I just say i love the way you write! this was beautiful and definitely a favorite that I'll be coming back to.
ok, can I just say i love the way you write! this was beautiful and definitely a favorite that I'll be coming back to.