for Never alone12/25/2021 c1 SomeOne
vertaling/engels-nederlands/anage
maar in de basis een tijdperk en aangezien 100 jaar al z'n eigen naamwoord? heeft (sorry Nederlandse les(en) zijn echt làng weg gezakte set termen/regels voor mij nu)
"Een eeuw" or a Century might be others termd stough?
vertaling/engels-nederlands/anage
maar in de basis een tijdperk en aangezien 100 jaar al z'n eigen naamwoord? heeft (sorry Nederlandse les(en) zijn echt làng weg gezakte set termen/regels voor mij nu)
"Een eeuw" or a Century might be others termd stough?
8/1/2020 c5 Jim
Good story and it looks you are writing again. I appreciate the effort and thank you for the entertainment.
Good story and it looks you are writing again. I appreciate the effort and thank you for the entertainment.
6/18/2020 c5 NoTredOnSnek
THIS is the kind of mod story I've been looking for. No more 'my friends and family' angst every 3rd line. It's great! I can't wait for more!
THIS is the kind of mod story I've been looking for. No more 'my friends and family' angst every 3rd line. It's great! I can't wait for more!
6/11/2020 c1 Jacksonion Democracy
The first thing that really sticks out to me is you have a big issue with your Capitalisation and a couple typos. I can't remember all the rules, but the main one is whenever you end a sentence the first word in the following sentence starts with a Capital letter. I would suggest trying out grammarly (its a free app that checks your grammar) as it could take care of your typos and small issues pretty easily. As for the story itself, pretty good and I guess you are trying to go for a slightly insane Harry as that is the feel of the story. TY 4 the chapter!
The first thing that really sticks out to me is you have a big issue with your Capitalisation and a couple typos. I can't remember all the rules, but the main one is whenever you end a sentence the first word in the following sentence starts with a Capital letter. I would suggest trying out grammarly (its a free app that checks your grammar) as it could take care of your typos and small issues pretty easily. As for the story itself, pretty good and I guess you are trying to go for a slightly insane Harry as that is the feel of the story. TY 4 the chapter!
6/2/2020 c5 
7Qorianth Grindelwald
Oooooo! Eeee! I love it! I can't portray it in text so you'll just have to imagine it. Probably only a little less than the amount of glee if you saw a Dwarf of Hobbit in real life.
7Qorianth GrindelwaldOooooo! Eeee! I love it! I can't portray it in text so you'll just have to imagine it. Probably only a little less than the amount of glee if you saw a Dwarf of Hobbit in real life.
6/1/2020 c5 Guest
This is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
This is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.