for Rainbow Six Siege: The Unsung Hero3/4/2021 c1 superninja123aa
Im nitoicking here. But i dont think an hispano-filipini could be 6'3. I mean no offence but they arent exactly tall. Just seems weird
Im nitoicking here. But i dont think an hispano-filipini could be 6'3. I mean no offence but they arent exactly tall. Just seems weird
2/13/2021 c7 Guest
I- Ok? Man I got so excited when I saw that update
I- Ok? Man I got so excited when I saw that update
11/20/2020 c6 
5GrimGravy
So I finally managed to read Chapter 6. I must admit I had a bit of trouble following through all the things happening here as there was a lot of information dumped in the first part (like the Assassin's Creed and Ghost Recon bits) and I had to read the previous chapters as a refresher.
Anyway, this chapter is quite packed, considering the present day scenes and the flashback in Los Angeles. Like, I feel that the bit with the physical training in "Present Time" could have been shortened, but I suppose it was needed there to give Roman, Blackbeard, and Valkyrie a chance to bond. In terms of pacing, the switch of POV to Valerie and Scarlett was quite a surprise in my opinion, but perhaps I should've expected something like this since you revealed Roman was an Assassin. I do hope you can tie the sisters' story with Roman's in the upcoming chapters, to keep their narrative relevant.
Keep up the good work! :)
5GrimGravySo I finally managed to read Chapter 6. I must admit I had a bit of trouble following through all the things happening here as there was a lot of information dumped in the first part (like the Assassin's Creed and Ghost Recon bits) and I had to read the previous chapters as a refresher.
Anyway, this chapter is quite packed, considering the present day scenes and the flashback in Los Angeles. Like, I feel that the bit with the physical training in "Present Time" could have been shortened, but I suppose it was needed there to give Roman, Blackbeard, and Valkyrie a chance to bond. In terms of pacing, the switch of POV to Valerie and Scarlett was quite a surprise in my opinion, but perhaps I should've expected something like this since you revealed Roman was an Assassin. I do hope you can tie the sisters' story with Roman's in the upcoming chapters, to keep their narrative relevant.
Keep up the good work! :)
10/22/2020 c1 solomon1943
I cant help but feel that Roman is too OP and Mary Sue (numerous blackbelts, valedecterion at age 10, I think its a little too much). As always I like characters that feel real, but I do have high hopes for the upcoming chapters.
I cant help but feel that Roman is too OP and Mary Sue (numerous blackbelts, valedecterion at age 10, I think its a little too much). As always I like characters that feel real, but I do have high hopes for the upcoming chapters.
9/11/2020 c6 7CanisterMain
Didn't have the chance to read the previous version, but I like how this is going, especially the Roman and doggo's relationship. Keep up the good work!
7CanisterMainDidn't have the chance to read the previous version, but I like how this is going, especially the Roman and doggo's relationship. Keep up the good work!
9/11/2020 c6 1SolozzoTheTurk
And Roman's problems are finally revealed.
Waiting patiently for Chapter 7 my good sir.
1SolozzoTheTurkAnd Roman's problems are finally revealed.
Waiting patiently for Chapter 7 my good sir.
8/10/2020 c5 SolozzoTheTurk
Great story so far! The reworked story is amazing! Really wondering what powers do the Iron Stand Act give to the US President...
Great story so far! The reworked story is amazing! Really wondering what powers do the Iron Stand Act give to the US President...
6/11/2020 c4 Guest
Good chapter, but how did Roman almost die to Taina? And how did America cover up that travesty?
Good chapter, but how did Roman almost die to Taina? And how did America cover up that travesty?
2/14/2020 c3 TheLupus
One of the more interesting stories of R6, I love that this story goes out of the norm for other Fanfics, and decides what its own world is. I have been reading a lot of Fanfics, and this is one of the better out there. Keep up the good work and I hope that you don't get a writers block, cause this is too good to be let down.
One of the more interesting stories of R6, I love that this story goes out of the norm for other Fanfics, and decides what its own world is. I have been reading a lot of Fanfics, and this is one of the better out there. Keep up the good work and I hope that you don't get a writers block, cause this is too good to be let down.