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1/30/2018 c1 Guest
Love it! :D
10/9/2017 c1 9yhighon
I love this. It shows the aftermath of the main storyline, and I really like the way you write these two.
8/30/2017 c1 12Sage1111
I love this, I adore this, this is awesome, you're awesome :D You portrayed Them perfectly(as usual) and I just love the idea of this. It also gave me an idea, what if, following this, they move, and Matt gets a job as a technician or graphic editor, then he gets the idea to create a documentary about him and Mello with the resources of that job. But then it gets them recognized and they DO get in trouble, and bam! Whole new story. Haha, I have no time to write that. I doubt you do either, But go ahead if you want :)

I like how ambitious Mello is in here, like he just can't stand not accomplishing anything, and then you attribute that trait to being raised in Wammy's and always having to push himself. Like, you didn't just show that Mello is ambitious, but you proved it. I notice this in your other works to, and its awesome, its what makes your writing amazing.
I would love to read some of your original work(I'd definitely buy it), so please send me a Pm. Also, have you ever heard a song called 'the origin of love' by MIKA? Its perfect for Matt and Mello, you should go check it out.
8/28/2017 c1 27Axcent
I was just popping in here for old times sake and saw you'd posted this literal seconds before. Great to see you still around, writing incredible fic! I loved the lowkey tone in this; their interactions are gentle and sweet and biting all at once - just as I remember, haha.

Congrats on your wedding date, too! Have a good one!
8/28/2017 c1 120Dlvvanzor
Love it!

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