for Spitfire9/3/2017 c4 Guest
Ok, I'm so excited about this story i can't even. Please please please update as frequently as you can. I'm completely hooked in just 3 chapters already. I love your writing. So good. So excited for this!
Ok, I'm so excited about this story i can't even. Please please please update as frequently as you can. I'm completely hooked in just 3 chapters already. I love your writing. So good. So excited for this!
9/1/2017 c4 jo2012
So so excited for the fiction! The writing is amazing as always. Love the concept and premise of the story. Looking forward to the next update eagerly! Hope you have a nice day.
So so excited for the fiction! The writing is amazing as always. Love the concept and premise of the story. Looking forward to the next update eagerly! Hope you have a nice day.
9/1/2017 c4 polkorz
I'm absolutely captivated by this idea! The suspense is real! ;) SO much angst, but I love it so far. I'll be waiting unpatiently for the next part. Greetings from Poland!
I'm absolutely captivated by this idea! The suspense is real! ;) SO much angst, but I love it so far. I'll be waiting unpatiently for the next part. Greetings from Poland!
9/1/2017 c4 
21notsing
Damn, I wish Hermione had thought to ask Thomas for a physical description of Spitfire, but I suppose that would make it too easy. I hope the people on the list are found alive, but I'm bracing for them being found dead. Really good chapter, thanks for posting.
21notsingDamn, I wish Hermione had thought to ask Thomas for a physical description of Spitfire, but I suppose that would make it too easy. I hope the people on the list are found alive, but I'm bracing for them being found dead. Really good chapter, thanks for posting.
9/1/2017 c4 56Aida Caroti
Omg! I wanted her to ask more about Spitfire! Cos obviously, that's Ron, right? Really enjoying this looking forward o next update
56Aida CarotiOmg! I wanted her to ask more about Spitfire! Cos obviously, that's Ron, right? Really enjoying this looking forward o next update
8/31/2017 c4 JC RH
I think I'll like this than Vanguard. Both are good though. This is a solid chapter.
I think I'll like this than Vanguard. Both are good though. This is a solid chapter.
8/31/2017 c4 banzi
Enjoyed your update. Loved how Hermione handled everything. Would Spitfire be Ron perhaps? Guess we'll find out. Wonderful chapter.
Enjoyed your update. Loved how Hermione handled everything. Would Spitfire be Ron perhaps? Guess we'll find out. Wonderful chapter.
8/31/2017 c4 ArumaR
Oh, oh, oh! This is really good, I have so many possible scenarios popping up in my head about what's to come, but I just know it'll never be half as exciting as what you have in store for us. Thank you for the swift update, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh, oh, oh! This is really good, I have so many possible scenarios popping up in my head about what's to come, but I just know it'll never be half as exciting as what you have in store for us. Thank you for the swift update, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
8/31/2017 c4 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
8/30/2017 c3 21notsing
This was great. Harrowing, but great. Some how I'm not convinced Ron's entirely a figment of Harry's imagination. Maybe Ron's in some kind of near death state and his spirit is wandering? I'm just speculating here, I don't expect you to explain. Thanks for posting.
21notsingThis was great. Harrowing, but great. Some how I'm not convinced Ron's entirely a figment of Harry's imagination. Maybe Ron's in some kind of near death state and his spirit is wandering? I'm just speculating here, I don't expect you to explain. Thanks for posting.
8/30/2017 c2 notsing
Wow, I like the idea of Fawkes choosing Ron. That's original. The talk between Hagrid and Dumbledore was good. There's no one who hasn't made mistakes, and doesn't have regret. Part of being a good friend and a good person is not judging others so harshly. Dumbledore seeking absolution from Hagrid seemed fitting. Thanks for posting.
Wow, I like the idea of Fawkes choosing Ron. That's original. The talk between Hagrid and Dumbledore was good. There's no one who hasn't made mistakes, and doesn't have regret. Part of being a good friend and a good person is not judging others so harshly. Dumbledore seeking absolution from Hagrid seemed fitting. Thanks for posting.
8/30/2017 c1 21notsing
On your author's note, I couldn't agree more with what you said about Ron's relationship with Harry, Hermione and his family. Both Harry and Hermione constantly take Ron for granted. The only time they notice him is when he's not there, then they're angry at him because their lives are harder. Ron does make mistakes, but Harry and Hermione are hardly perfect. I get so exhausted by all the bashers who drag Ron over the coals while ignoring everyone else's flaws. Harry's extremely self-centered, and Hermione is abrasive and rather irritating. If all the fangirls who adore Hermione so much actually knew a real Hermione, they would detest her. I also wonder if all the Ron bashers are saints who have no clue what jealousy feels like. Being jealous is normal. Harry and Hermione also get jealous, but they're forgiven, But Ron being jealous is some how a major character flaw and both Harry and Hermione ought to kick him to the curb according to the bashers. You writing a realistic, dark story about if Ron hadn't come back intrigues me. All the Ron haters act like it would have been wonderful if he hadn't come back. My honest first thought is always, 'Yep, then Harry would have drowned. Wonderful.' Obviously, you're not going to have that happen. As for the trouble you have about writing sex scenes, forget about it! There are plenty of smutty stories out there; how many do we need? I also struggle to write sex and/or romantic scenes. I'm not asexual, I enjoy sex very much, but I have an offbeat sense of humor. Even in RL, every time I (or a loved one) tries to act romantic or alluring, my gut response is to giggle. I just can't take it seriously. When I try to write it, I always laugh as well, which pretty much wrecks my muse. I look forward to your new story.
21notsingOn your author's note, I couldn't agree more with what you said about Ron's relationship with Harry, Hermione and his family. Both Harry and Hermione constantly take Ron for granted. The only time they notice him is when he's not there, then they're angry at him because their lives are harder. Ron does make mistakes, but Harry and Hermione are hardly perfect. I get so exhausted by all the bashers who drag Ron over the coals while ignoring everyone else's flaws. Harry's extremely self-centered, and Hermione is abrasive and rather irritating. If all the fangirls who adore Hermione so much actually knew a real Hermione, they would detest her. I also wonder if all the Ron bashers are saints who have no clue what jealousy feels like. Being jealous is normal. Harry and Hermione also get jealous, but they're forgiven, But Ron being jealous is some how a major character flaw and both Harry and Hermione ought to kick him to the curb according to the bashers. You writing a realistic, dark story about if Ron hadn't come back intrigues me. All the Ron haters act like it would have been wonderful if he hadn't come back. My honest first thought is always, 'Yep, then Harry would have drowned. Wonderful.' Obviously, you're not going to have that happen. As for the trouble you have about writing sex scenes, forget about it! There are plenty of smutty stories out there; how many do we need? I also struggle to write sex and/or romantic scenes. I'm not asexual, I enjoy sex very much, but I have an offbeat sense of humor. Even in RL, every time I (or a loved one) tries to act romantic or alluring, my gut response is to giggle. I just can't take it seriously. When I try to write it, I always laugh as well, which pretty much wrecks my muse. I look forward to your new story.