
5/6 c5 Babysis64
this was an awesome chapter. Yes I hooe that they can protect Bella from Alice and Edward right. Demetri, Jane and Alec should come and help the Major
this was an awesome chapter. Yes I hooe that they can protect Bella from Alice and Edward right. Demetri, Jane and Alec should come and help the Major
5/6 c4 Babysis64
this is good that Bella and Peter let Jasper know everything right. So I hope nothing happens to her at all.
this is good that Bella and Peter let Jasper know everything right. So I hope nothing happens to her at all.
5/4 c3 Babysis64
this was a good chapter as well. I wonder if Aluce and Edward will back off when they find out Jasper is Bella's true mate or soul mates
this was a good chapter as well. I wonder if Aluce and Edward will back off when they find out Jasper is Bella's true mate or soul mates
5/4 c2 Babysis64
oh no so Jasper has met his mate. interesting so he would be able to pritext Bella from Alice and Edward then, awesome same with Peter and her aunty Lottie.
oh no so Jasper has met his mate. interesting so he would be able to pritext Bella from Alice and Edward then, awesome same with Peter and her aunty Lottie.
5/4 c1 Babysis64
interesting first chapter I thought. I sure hope that Bella is going to be safe right.
interesting first chapter I thought. I sure hope that Bella is going to be safe right.
5/6/2024 c24 grumpieroldman
i hope you are feeling better and get back to updating when you can. great story by the way.
i hope you are feeling better and get back to updating when you can. great story by the way.
4/12/2024 c23 Sandra46
i think the other wolf is leah, so bella and jasper are having 2 girls and a boy. That's what i think. you have no idea how hard it is to stop myself from peeking at the oher chapters xx
i think the other wolf is leah, so bella and jasper are having 2 girls and a boy. That's what i think. you have no idea how hard it is to stop myself from peeking at the oher chapters xx
4/12/2024 c18 Sandra46
i was wrong bout tanya, cant say i ever thought of her as greedy other than in an insiatably sexual way. i did think santiago for a mate should have gone with my first instinct... who for charlie? maybe renata!? realy hope not jane that would be really freaky with the age difference... dun dun dun xxx
i was wrong bout tanya, cant say i ever thought of her as greedy other than in an insiatably sexual way. i did think santiago for a mate should have gone with my first instinct... who for charlie? maybe renata!? realy hope not jane that would be really freaky with the age difference... dun dun dun xxx
4/12/2024 c14 Sandra46
im glad laurent and irina are real mates, nearly put that but was kinda hoping charlie would be or fins a mate. i do think he will become an awesome vamp maybe hell find true love in Voltura someone from the volturi guard. dun dun dun
im glad laurent and irina are real mates, nearly put that but was kinda hoping charlie would be or fins a mate. i do think he will become an awesome vamp maybe hell find true love in Voltura someone from the volturi guard. dun dun dun
4/12/2024 c14 Sandra46
i think angela is abbys mate alistar is pheobes mate charlie is irinas mate. i think felix is tanyas mate. not sure if laurent has a mate yet. the shits definitely going to hit he fan. nice to no victoria is rileys mate and seems to be on the ide of good... oh i cant wait xxthanks for great story so far. pheobe is bellas twin xx
i think angela is abbys mate alistar is pheobes mate charlie is irinas mate. i think felix is tanyas mate. not sure if laurent has a mate yet. the shits definitely going to hit he fan. nice to no victoria is rileys mate and seems to be on the ide of good... oh i cant wait xxthanks for great story so far. pheobe is bellas twin xx
2/14/2024 c17 celajwhitney123gmail.com
so the mutts are going to stick their wet noses in? that means if Charlie knows then they broke the treaty.
so the mutts are going to stick their wet noses in? that means if Charlie knows then they broke the treaty.