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for The Eighth Time

8/31/2017 c1 9OnYourLeft107
This was a powerful piece. Well and deliberately written. I understand that you were trying to convey the struggle of Bucky between being a machine and being human, but you inconsistently used he/it/his/its in the beginning of the piece. It's just something to be aware of. The rest of it was chilling, especially during the struggle and collapse of Bucky when he's on the border of both sides and he's starting to "malfunction." Overall, great work.
8/30/2017 c1 4CTpoetgirl63
wow, I'm speechless, very powerful...

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