for The Surgeon Of DxDeath2/10/2023 c3 darknessking675
you could add chopper as a familiar or have him as a subspecies of yuki. you could make the d clan a Piller family with each of the name as branch members. like Luffy, dragon and garp being from the monkey family. while Roger being from the gol family.
you could add chopper as a familiar or have him as a subspecies of yuki. you could make the d clan a Piller family with each of the name as branch members. like Luffy, dragon and garp being from the monkey family. while Roger being from the gol family.
12/15/2021 c1 
7TheLivingMyth
Hm, I can't seem to follow. Apparently Law is already well established in this world. How? I have no clue since everyone seems to know who he is all of a sudden. Is a Pirate? Is he a Devil? I understand the world of fanfiction isn't meant to be accurate with cannon ideals, but even then there's only so much you can include/exclude until it becomes ridiculously confusing. The story started out well, but then it gradually decreased until the end. In my opinion at least. I'll probably give a few more chapters a shot to see what the actual hell is happening or if you just decided to throw Law in this universe like some Gary Sue.
This chapter fanfiction has a ton of potential, but I can't say for certain if it'll succeed.
7TheLivingMythHm, I can't seem to follow. Apparently Law is already well established in this world. How? I have no clue since everyone seems to know who he is all of a sudden. Is a Pirate? Is he a Devil? I understand the world of fanfiction isn't meant to be accurate with cannon ideals, but even then there's only so much you can include/exclude until it becomes ridiculously confusing. The story started out well, but then it gradually decreased until the end. In my opinion at least. I'll probably give a few more chapters a shot to see what the actual hell is happening or if you just decided to throw Law in this universe like some Gary Sue.
This chapter fanfiction has a ton of potential, but I can't say for certain if it'll succeed.
7/2/2020 c2 Guest
TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! FUCKING BASTARD! FUCKING USELESS! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU SON OF A BITCH! FUCKING BAD GRAMMAR YOU ASS HOLE!
TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! FUCKING BASTARD! FUCKING USELESS! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU SON OF A BITCH! FUCKING BAD GRAMMAR YOU ASS HOLE!
6/15/2018 c7 5Rivik
I like the story and I actually like it, that Kuroka is part of his peerage, because now you have quite some story changes at your hands.
You could make her betray him, or like tell the story of her and him together or make him become more canon like again. It's a funny story, but I'd like it to be more serious, p.s pls! rewrite the fight against riser, it was too short!
5RivikI like the story and I actually like it, that Kuroka is part of his peerage, because now you have quite some story changes at your hands.
You could make her betray him, or like tell the story of her and him together or make him become more canon like again. It's a funny story, but I'd like it to be more serious, p.s pls! rewrite the fight against riser, it was too short!
5/19/2018 c1 deltadragon373
Word of the wise. The attack Law uses to remove hearts is Scalpel, not Shambles. Shambles only swaps stuff around.
Word of the wise. The attack Law uses to remove hearts is Scalpel, not Shambles. Shambles only swaps stuff around.
5/18/2018 c1 2FerunaLutelou
Trash. The idea for the story is cool, but the story itself and the writing is on its own level of bad.
2FerunaLutelouTrash. The idea for the story is cool, but the story itself and the writing is on its own level of bad.
5/18/2018 c7 5Sntakawa Toki
That isn't my best chap, I honestly just wanted to publish, but the next is gonna be way better
5Sntakawa TokiThat isn't my best chap, I honestly just wanted to publish, but the next is gonna be way better
4/16/2018 c7 WOLF SIN OF GREED
I understand that life can be crazy I know that very well but when do you think you’ll be able to update next
I understand that life can be crazy I know that very well but when do you think you’ll be able to update next
11/12/2017 c1 1Super Kamehameha
Hey so I checked your profile and saw that I inspired you. I'm honestly flattered man thank you. This story is actually pretty good! I don't watch one piece so I don't know much about Law but I like this. Only suggestion would be to work on grammar a bit but considering you're German it's actually pretty commendable! Great job so far
1Super KamehamehaHey so I checked your profile and saw that I inspired you. I'm honestly flattered man thank you. This story is actually pretty good! I don't watch one piece so I don't know much about Law but I like this. Only suggestion would be to work on grammar a bit but considering you're German it's actually pretty commendable! Great job so far
10/28/2017 c5 5Gamelover41592
nice job on this chapter seems Law is getting use to school rather well ;)
5Gamelover41592nice job on this chapter seems Law is getting use to school rather well ;)