for Na Hoahanau a hiki ibka hopena (Brothers till the End)9/5/2017 c1 Guest
Perfect one shot! I touched my heart and although it was very sad to read I enjoyed every line.
Perfect one shot! I touched my heart and although it was very sad to read I enjoyed every line.
9/5/2017 c2 earthling1970
I was in tears reading this, but not in a bad way. Beautifully written, heart warming and easily seen in the readers eye. Brilliant! Thanks for sharing.
I was in tears reading this, but not in a bad way. Beautifully written, heart warming and easily seen in the readers eye. Brilliant! Thanks for sharing.
199/5/2017 c1 JeanBlythe
At first, when I saw this story, I was hesitant to read it. I don't want them to end! But this story kept nudging me, so finally I read it, and ... four checkmarks, favorite story/author, follow story/author. :) That's the best I can do.
I really think you gave them full lives, happy lives, and brought things to a believable close. And I love how they are all up in heaven, watching over their ohana. It is remarkable to think of what happened when those two met, and set into motion all this life. :) Beautifully done! I would love to read more Five-0 from you (and feel free to give Danny more of the credit :D )
At first, when I saw this story, I was hesitant to read it. I don't want them to end! But this story kept nudging me, so finally I read it, and ... four checkmarks, favorite story/author, follow story/author. :) That's the best I can do.
I really think you gave them full lives, happy lives, and brought things to a believable close. And I love how they are all up in heaven, watching over their ohana. It is remarkable to think of what happened when those two met, and set into motion all this life. :) Beautifully done! I would love to read more Five-0 from you (and feel free to give Danny more of the credit :D )
9/4/2017 c1 rosayago65
Thank you for a great but sad story. It's have been perfect if you'd have translated the Hawaiian words
I hope you keep writing H50 stories.
Thank you for a great but sad story. It's have been perfect if you'd have translated the Hawaiian words
I hope you keep writing H50 stories.
8/31/2017 c1 Guest
You really need a proof reader, particularly someone who knows the difference between he and him and when to use them, and can read for clarity, since you obviously can't.
You really need a proof reader, particularly someone who knows the difference between he and him and when to use them, and can read for clarity, since you obviously can't.
8/31/2017 c1 Guest
Wow, I love it even if it does break my heart to read it.
Wow, I love it even if it does break my heart to read it.