for The Presence9/19/2017 c1 zanessa14luv18
this is really good! I hope you update! I never read a story like this before but by reading the summary the story had me hook, specially with the Danny part. creepy yet good to the point I need to finish the story. keep the great work and please update a second part!
this is really good! I hope you update! I never read a story like this before but by reading the summary the story had me hook, specially with the Danny part. creepy yet good to the point I need to finish the story. keep the great work and please update a second part!
9/1/2017 c1 DB-KT
Wow I am totally hooked even though what Danny - I assume it's him - said that sentence sounds a little creepy to be saying about a little girl, but it does make sense for him to be interested - and hopefully protective in a good way - because of her sixth sense. I also wonder where Tucker is and when - or if - he appears.
I can't wait for the next chapter to see how you take this story. Thank you.
Wow I am totally hooked even though what Danny - I assume it's him - said that sentence sounds a little creepy to be saying about a little girl, but it does make sense for him to be interested - and hopefully protective in a good way - because of her sixth sense. I also wonder where Tucker is and when - or if - he appears.
I can't wait for the next chapter to see how you take this story. Thank you.