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2Misia0123
Well holy shoot this will be interesting... I can't wait for her to get together with Goku but seeing Ava in other relationships and discovering herself will be fun to read about too . Thanks for the awesome chapter and good luck in writing the next one. I'll be looking forward to it for sure! Love you, Misia out xxx
2Misia0123Well holy shoot this will be interesting... I can't wait for her to get together with Goku but seeing Ava in other relationships and discovering herself will be fun to read about too . Thanks for the awesome chapter and good luck in writing the next one. I'll be looking forward to it for sure! Love you, Misia out xxx
12/5/2018 c8 2Jazzmo03
Wow, I never got a notification that this updated but I just realised it had and I’ll admit, that really got me in my emotions. Poor Ava. Also that plot twist was really unexpected but I love it!
Are we gonna get to see what Ava did/wrote to say goodbye to Goku?
This was awesome, I can’t wait for the next chapter! :D
2Jazzmo03Wow, I never got a notification that this updated but I just realised it had and I’ll admit, that really got me in my emotions. Poor Ava. Also that plot twist was really unexpected but I love it!
Are we gonna get to see what Ava did/wrote to say goodbye to Goku?
This was awesome, I can’t wait for the next chapter! :D
11/14/2018 c8 2Misia0123
You are honestly breaking my heart into tiny little pieces here. T.T I'm thiiiiiiiis close to actually crying alongside Ava at this point. This is too sad... I love it. Your writing is amazing, please keep up the awesome work! I cannot tell you how excited I am for the next chapter. I really want to know how Goku's and Ava's relationship will develop further. This fanfic has so much potential! Good luck in writing the next chapter. Love you, Misia out xxx
2Misia0123You are honestly breaking my heart into tiny little pieces here. T.T I'm thiiiiiiiis close to actually crying alongside Ava at this point. This is too sad... I love it. Your writing is amazing, please keep up the awesome work! I cannot tell you how excited I am for the next chapter. I really want to know how Goku's and Ava's relationship will develop further. This fanfic has so much potential! Good luck in writing the next chapter. Love you, Misia out xxx
10/11/2018 c7 2Jazzmo03
Hey there! I honestly forgot about this site until today when this book suddenly popped up into my mind. I've recently been using Wattpad as there doesn't seem to be many active writers on here these days, but I was wondering if you're still writing this book? I have missed reading these chapters and the actually well thought out story. Hope this doesn't seem weird or anything and I hope you're doing well. =D
2Jazzmo03Hey there! I honestly forgot about this site until today when this book suddenly popped up into my mind. I've recently been using Wattpad as there doesn't seem to be many active writers on here these days, but I was wondering if you're still writing this book? I have missed reading these chapters and the actually well thought out story. Hope this doesn't seem weird or anything and I hope you're doing well. =D
7/30/2018 c7 Reader
Please update I love this story
Please update I love this story
4/20/2018 c7 Jazzmo03
This was an amazing chapter! :D I hope you update soon! Also this is kinda late because I lost my phone and only just found it. (I didn't have any fanfics to read for weeks. DAgain, this was awesome! Keep up the good work
This was an amazing chapter! :D I hope you update soon! Also this is kinda late because I lost my phone and only just found it. (I didn't have any fanfics to read for weeks. DAgain, this was awesome! Keep up the good work
3/16/2018 c6 Guest
Wow this is really good. I read it straight through today. I love your other stories so I gave this one a go and I am so glad I did. I am really enjoying how you’re writing Goku in this. Can’t wait to read more from you.
Wow this is really good. I read it straight through today. I love your other stories so I gave this one a go and I am so glad I did. I am really enjoying how you’re writing Goku in this. Can’t wait to read more from you.
2/26/2018 c6 Jazzmo03
Plz plz plz say that you're gonna update this, it's an awesome story (sorry, I know I sound needy but it's amazing!
Plz plz plz say that you're gonna update this, it's an awesome story (sorry, I know I sound needy but it's amazing!
12/20/2017 c5 Jazzmo03
This was amazing :D I have read walking monographs and it's great! (Also looking glass seems prettt cool.) can't wait for the next chapter. D
This was amazing :D I have read walking monographs and it's great! (Also looking glass seems prettt cool.) can't wait for the next chapter. D
12/11/2017 c1 crazystargirl11
OMG! I love this story sooo much! I'm sad that Ava's leaving but I think that she will be happier if she can be seen. PLZ keep up the good work with this story cause I'm practically dying waiting for the next chapter already!
OMG! I love this story sooo much! I'm sad that Ava's leaving but I think that she will be happier if she can be seen. PLZ keep up the good work with this story cause I'm practically dying waiting for the next chapter already!
12/10/2017 c1 Jazzmo03
This was awesome! I feel so bad for Goku but I'm also like Ava should totally leave cuz it's unfair for her. And omg I hope she does find a way to break the curse and everyone will see her. Do you think piccolo would be able to see her anyway cuz Kami can? (Soz this was long) can't wait for the next update!
This was awesome! I feel so bad for Goku but I'm also like Ava should totally leave cuz it's unfair for her. And omg I hope she does find a way to break the curse and everyone will see her. Do you think piccolo would be able to see her anyway cuz Kami can? (Soz this was long) can't wait for the next update!
11/30/2017 c3 Jazzmo03
Omg omg omg! This is amazing plz plz plz update soon! This cliffhanger is killing me! XD DX
Omg omg omg! This is amazing plz plz plz update soon! This cliffhanger is killing me! XD DX