for Contractual Obligations: Deleted Snippets9/29/2017 c1 Guest
I noticed someone mention that the jester would be the one to critique the king. While I agree, it bears mention that King Arthur's Jester was Dagonet. As a knight of the round himself he likely would not yet have the position so Arturia would be lacking a court Jester.
I noticed someone mention that the jester would be the one to critique the king. While I agree, it bears mention that King Arthur's Jester was Dagonet. As a knight of the round himself he likely would not yet have the position so Arturia would be lacking a court Jester.
9/16/2017 c1 
21thepkrmgc
i have to wonder how it would affect the character dynamic if Gwen ended up falling for Archer instead of Lancelot, talk about the pathos!
21thepkrmgci have to wonder how it would affect the character dynamic if Gwen ended up falling for Archer instead of Lancelot, talk about the pathos!
9/16/2017 c1 4rickyp01
Such a position, allowed to speak frankly DOES exist in a mediëval court, and guineverre's claims of ignorance are weird as she should be familiar with such a person,
its a jester.
4rickyp01Such a position, allowed to speak frankly DOES exist in a mediëval court, and guineverre's claims of ignorance are weird as she should be familiar with such a person,
its a jester.
9/5/2017 c1 Shirosakurai
it is interesting to see the perspective of guinivere as it is the closest to arturia, also because of that misunderstanding between the two and its unrelated relationship guinever will end up in the arms of lancelot who is the most similar to arturia, great Deleted Snippets
it is interesting to see the perspective of guinivere as it is the closest to arturia, also because of that misunderstanding between the two and its unrelated relationship guinever will end up in the arms of lancelot who is the most similar to arturia, great Deleted Snippets
9/5/2017 c1 Guest
Not bad
Not bad
9/4/2017 c1 Z
Oooh, a companion piece to a fic that I enjoy? Alright! It's nice that we get to see what Sir Ector and Guinevere's impressions of Archer are. It definitely makes sense and is very entertaining that both father and son are annoyed by Archer.
Oooh, a companion piece to a fic that I enjoy? Alright! It's nice that we get to see what Sir Ector and Guinevere's impressions of Archer are. It definitely makes sense and is very entertaining that both father and son are annoyed by Archer.
9/4/2017 c1 9God-of-Machines
I find it quite acceptable;
It is well centered on one of the key characters in which we can see its reference point in the others, although we have already been able to see the development from the perspective of Gwinivere, but that is what it is ...
Something important, I had emphasized how extensive it might be, I think 120k would be the most appropriate.
Enough for the most demanding for a while, balanced to pause to work on the following chapters, for at least a month and a half.
But if you're still unsure I recommend that you take a look at (Fate-In Time) author Parcasious; I am sure that you can find a little inspiration and publish the track with the other fellow readers, I have seen good critics there.
9God-of-MachinesI find it quite acceptable;
It is well centered on one of the key characters in which we can see its reference point in the others, although we have already been able to see the development from the perspective of Gwinivere, but that is what it is ...
Something important, I had emphasized how extensive it might be, I think 120k would be the most appropriate.
Enough for the most demanding for a while, balanced to pause to work on the following chapters, for at least a month and a half.
But if you're still unsure I recommend that you take a look at (Fate-In Time) author Parcasious; I am sure that you can find a little inspiration and publish the track with the other fellow readers, I have seen good critics there.