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6/29/2024 c1 6Serenacula
This is actually really good. The plotting was incredible, I was totally onboard with "shego is acting evil here", the reveal that she was helping all along was a genuine surprise, and excellently done. :)

In terms of improvements, I think the pacing of the writing could use a bit of work. Maybe a beta or something to go over it? And the epilogue was way too short, I wanted some cute scenes of them together..!

But other than that, I loved everything. Tha ms for writing!
5/16/2023 c1 VAND1TA
After reading all the way up to chapter 13, i got to say, it was a amazing read, great plot twist and developments.
i like how Kim's parents figured out the real reason, and i got mind blown with certain reveals.
Great job written this mystery, and revealing it step by step.
Also i like how you describe the scenes so well.
5/13/2023 c1 VAND1TA
Currently on chapter 7, and the story is very engaging!
I love the way you write Shego's character here, and this is a fresh New take on Kim's personality.
And i like the interactions between them.

Want i dont like, is the abrupt change in location and scenes, which can be very annoying, and throws me out of the immersion.
10/20/2021 c1 3SJs Stories
Now on chapter 10, almost 11. I really hope that even though Kim hates shego right now, shego will protect Kim from the villains in the world that wish to cause her harm.
10/19/2021 c1 SJs Stories
Ok, I’m currently on chapter 6 and I’m getting the feeling that shego has crushed pills that have added to Kim’s amnesia state. But it’s still too early to tell. What I can tell is that she really is head over heels in love with Kim!
5/22/2021 c1 6Scirrhia
As reward for your exemplary service in posting this story, you should have... a Molok. Or three. Seven actually, for good luck. Not saying I have them, just saying you should. Y'know, I bet Chribba is a KiGo fan, what with him being a Saint and all. He could get you something!
3/26/2021 c1 Inlynee
Thank you so much for writing this, I think it's my favorite fanfiction so far (and it means a lot because I'm reading a lot!really, I don't know how to express it but it's just so good and well written ! Thank you !
10/12/2020 c1 anomouws
nice
8/24/2020 c1 loo
This was absurdly GOOD!
4/10/2020 c1 Otakucat105
This is the best fanfic i have ever read
9/29/2019 c1 Doc Mcstaffins
Thank you for the story. Its been a while since i read such a beautiful and simple story
2/7/2019 c1 Ben113
I really liked this, though I wish it had a better epilogue, longer and maybe a couple more time skips.
11/12/2018 c1 1Supervivens
Beautiful.
5/15/2018 c1 PikaGelly
Took me about 4 hours to read, but I enjoyed every minute of it. This was definitely well thought out, and I felt the emotions raging here. The best part about this is the fact that you let this relationship bloom very slowly but surely.

Wish I had amnesia too, so I can read this again and again without knowing what will happen! But even then, a good story like this can have the ability to be seen in a different light every time.

Well done, kudos to you! :D
4/1/2018 c1 4RedToxicity
loved this story. I wish you'd write another
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