for The Road Not Taken6/29/2024 c1 
6Serenacula
This is actually really good. The plotting was incredible, I was totally onboard with "shego is acting evil here", the reveal that she was helping all along was a genuine surprise, and excellently done. :)
In terms of improvements, I think the pacing of the writing could use a bit of work. Maybe a beta or something to go over it? And the epilogue was way too short, I wanted some cute scenes of them together..!
But other than that, I loved everything. Tha ms for writing!
6SerenaculaThis is actually really good. The plotting was incredible, I was totally onboard with "shego is acting evil here", the reveal that she was helping all along was a genuine surprise, and excellently done. :)
In terms of improvements, I think the pacing of the writing could use a bit of work. Maybe a beta or something to go over it? And the epilogue was way too short, I wanted some cute scenes of them together..!
But other than that, I loved everything. Tha ms for writing!
5/16/2023 c1 VAND1TA
After reading all the way up to chapter 13, i got to say, it was a amazing read, great plot twist and developments.
i like how Kim's parents figured out the real reason, and i got mind blown with certain reveals.
Great job written this mystery, and revealing it step by step.
Also i like how you describe the scenes so well.
After reading all the way up to chapter 13, i got to say, it was a amazing read, great plot twist and developments.
i like how Kim's parents figured out the real reason, and i got mind blown with certain reveals.
Great job written this mystery, and revealing it step by step.
Also i like how you describe the scenes so well.
5/13/2023 c1 VAND1TA
Currently on chapter 7, and the story is very engaging!
I love the way you write Shego's character here, and this is a fresh New take on Kim's personality.
And i like the interactions between them.
Want i dont like, is the abrupt change in location and scenes, which can be very annoying, and throws me out of the immersion.
Currently on chapter 7, and the story is very engaging!
I love the way you write Shego's character here, and this is a fresh New take on Kim's personality.
And i like the interactions between them.
Want i dont like, is the abrupt change in location and scenes, which can be very annoying, and throws me out of the immersion.
10/20/2021 c1 3SJs Stories
Now on chapter 10, almost 11. I really hope that even though Kim hates shego right now, shego will protect Kim from the villains in the world that wish to cause her harm.
3SJs StoriesNow on chapter 10, almost 11. I really hope that even though Kim hates shego right now, shego will protect Kim from the villains in the world that wish to cause her harm.
10/19/2021 c1 SJs Stories
Ok, I’m currently on chapter 6 and I’m getting the feeling that shego has crushed pills that have added to Kim’s amnesia state. But it’s still too early to tell. What I can tell is that she really is head over heels in love with Kim!
Ok, I’m currently on chapter 6 and I’m getting the feeling that shego has crushed pills that have added to Kim’s amnesia state. But it’s still too early to tell. What I can tell is that she really is head over heels in love with Kim!
5/22/2021 c1 6Scirrhia
As reward for your exemplary service in posting this story, you should have... a Molok. Or three. Seven actually, for good luck. Not saying I have them, just saying you should. Y'know, I bet Chribba is a KiGo fan, what with him being a Saint and all. He could get you something!
6ScirrhiaAs reward for your exemplary service in posting this story, you should have... a Molok. Or three. Seven actually, for good luck. Not saying I have them, just saying you should. Y'know, I bet Chribba is a KiGo fan, what with him being a Saint and all. He could get you something!
3/26/2021 c1 Inlynee
Thank you so much for writing this, I think it's my favorite fanfiction so far (and it means a lot because I'm reading a lot!really, I don't know how to express it but it's just so good and well written ! Thank you !
Thank you so much for writing this, I think it's my favorite fanfiction so far (and it means a lot because I'm reading a lot!really, I don't know how to express it but it's just so good and well written ! Thank you !
10/12/2020 c1 anomouws
nice
nice
8/24/2020 c1 loo
This was absurdly GOOD!
This was absurdly GOOD!
4/10/2020 c1 Otakucat105
This is the best fanfic i have ever read
This is the best fanfic i have ever read
9/29/2019 c1 Doc Mcstaffins
Thank you for the story. Its been a while since i read such a beautiful and simple story
Thank you for the story. Its been a while since i read such a beautiful and simple story
2/7/2019 c1 Ben113
I really liked this, though I wish it had a better epilogue, longer and maybe a couple more time skips.
I really liked this, though I wish it had a better epilogue, longer and maybe a couple more time skips.
5/15/2018 c1 PikaGelly
Took me about 4 hours to read, but I enjoyed every minute of it. This was definitely well thought out, and I felt the emotions raging here. The best part about this is the fact that you let this relationship bloom very slowly but surely.
Wish I had amnesia too, so I can read this again and again without knowing what will happen! But even then, a good story like this can have the ability to be seen in a different light every time.
Well done, kudos to you! :D
Took me about 4 hours to read, but I enjoyed every minute of it. This was definitely well thought out, and I felt the emotions raging here. The best part about this is the fact that you let this relationship bloom very slowly but surely.
Wish I had amnesia too, so I can read this again and again without knowing what will happen! But even then, a good story like this can have the ability to be seen in a different light every time.
Well done, kudos to you! :D