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7/12/2018 c1 Klanglilie
Oh my, I would love to read a full lenght story of this! Greatly writen. Thank you for your hard work <3
12/7/2017 c1 5sesshomarurules01862
I loved this
12/2/2017 c1 Guest
I really liked this (: I would definitely be interested in reading the longer AU if you decide to write it
11/11/2017 c1 The Fall of Spring
*raises hand* I would enjoy more. Thank you. *bows*
10/9/2017 c1 Improvise inspiration
this is a really interesting concept for a fic and you really managed to paint your scene quite masterfully with all the details put in and just with how you describe things! if you decide to explore this AU further then I'd love to read more of it! :D

after all, I'm always gung ho about ASL fics of any kind, and a this modern setting you just set up is one I haven't really encountered before. luffy dealing with past abuse? how he got out of that situation and started living with his brothers? how all of this lines up with them all living with dadan at some point? why luffy genuinely at one point feared for his life, and how they're all gonna deal with his sever PTSD when he inevitably reveals just how much the past is still affecting him? all good plot threads that could turn into some amazingly angsty and fluffy fic!

but either way, whether you continue this or not, good job on this one!
9/9/2017 c1 51Thisisarealtagwhy
ahhhh, this was so sweet! i absolutely love this little AU and you know it ;) It's so sad though in it's own right... I mean, Luffy pretty much was abused by Garp in One Piece and for reasons unknown (probably Makino) he's still so sweet and happy! But here, we have reality and reality is cold and harsh but it's the truth. I just have a lot of feelings about your work, it's just so beautiful and sad and cute. Man i love my sweet little ASL AU's
9/8/2017 c1 19AndurilofTolkien
nice job
9/7/2017 c1 10shishiswordsman
awww, poor luffy ;;-;; I would definitely be interested in a longer fic in this AU, I'm definitely intrigued!
9/7/2017 c1 Guest
Aww so cute. Please make this into a full story, I would so read it.
9/6/2017 c1 20Hiken no Furia
It's coded. Please reupload.
9/6/2017 c1 21Wordlet
I totally feel, needless description is my fav to write as well! Your formatting seems to need a bit of editing- i think the site input some stuff! But I read around and the story itself shines nicely! Not sure i followed the plot properly but i feel plenty bad for Luffy so the hurt has been delivered soundly *thumbs up*

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