
9/9/2017 c1 Mr Miliardo
Too short. Has potential, but you MUST make it longer. It's not an option. One page long chapter fics usually (and by usually I mean the 120% of the times) suck.
Too short. Has potential, but you MUST make it longer. It's not an option. One page long chapter fics usually (and by usually I mean the 120% of the times) suck.