
9/21/2017 c2 Guest
I guess the increased knockback on the Demon's swings is one of those things you changed.
I guess the increased knockback on the Demon's swings is one of those things you changed.
9/21/2017 c1 Guest
Interesting take on the curse, not a fan of the first person bits at the end. When we're looking at his mind, its understandable. Glad it is just for this chapter.
Interesting take on the curse, not a fan of the first person bits at the end. When we're looking at his mind, its understandable. Glad it is just for this chapter.
9/10/2017 c1
4Supreme Gamer
Bro, this is a great start for your story. It won't happen all at once or overnight, but there is literally no doubt in my mind that this is going to be a fun read. Also, that disclaimer and AN is freaking hilarious.

Bro, this is a great start for your story. It won't happen all at once or overnight, but there is literally no doubt in my mind that this is going to be a fun read. Also, that disclaimer and AN is freaking hilarious.