for It was you3/18/2018 c2 Aqua and Luna's dead account
Holy crap, that actually made me cry. Geez! That was amazing and bitter sweet OH MY GOSH! That was awesome.
~Aqua
Holy crap, that actually made me cry. Geez! That was amazing and bitter sweet OH MY GOSH! That was awesome.
~Aqua
3/8/2018 c2 
8PeterPanfan13
Whaaaaaa! Pitch you jerk! Poor Jack! Great story, I loved it! And I am so glad that my friend introduced me to Ladybug or that reference would have bugged me forever. Maybe someday you can have the guardians find out about this...just a thought.
8PeterPanfan13Whaaaaaa! Pitch you jerk! Poor Jack! Great story, I loved it! And I am so glad that my friend introduced me to Ladybug or that reference would have bugged me forever. Maybe someday you can have the guardians find out about this...just a thought.
3/2/2018 c2 XinterestingX
Jack is understandbly angry and hurt. Pitch is his natural evil and mean self. Yeah, everyone is normal :P
I got really exited about this update, since I like the plot idea about them having met once before, so thank you! It was a good story :)
God bless you!
Jack is understandbly angry and hurt. Pitch is his natural evil and mean self. Yeah, everyone is normal :P
I got really exited about this update, since I like the plot idea about them having met once before, so thank you! It was a good story :)
God bless you!
3/2/2018 c2 30KitoH
I thought you would never update!
So glad you did eventually.
I have to say, it was worth the wait.
Hope to see more from you soon!
~KitoH
30KitoHI thought you would never update!
So glad you did eventually.
I have to say, it was worth the wait.
Hope to see more from you soon!
~KitoH
3/2/2018 c2 6PaperGirlInAPaperTown
Well that was soul crushing. Pitch, I love your deranged ass, but why must you be. so. stubborn. I'm still very glad you finished it though. Very, very glad. Congrats on another completed fic!
6PaperGirlInAPaperTownWell that was soul crushing. Pitch, I love your deranged ass, but why must you be. so. stubborn. I'm still very glad you finished it though. Very, very glad. Congrats on another completed fic!
3/2/2018 c2 miss.ptitegeek
Thanks for this second chapter (even if now my heart is bleeding)
I don't really know what to say, the end of a story is always a hard thing... Especially for a fic we enjoyed so much! It was grandiose, the realisation slowly growing in Jack's mind, the smooth reaction of pitch, which in the end was just a better mask than Jack's... Really, what an emotional roller coaster! I like how youre able to make us be in two pov at the same time, like when Pitch is savouring Jack's fear and we understand at the same time the reason of the fear and the attirance to its taste... I don't really know how to say it...
Anyway, as I was saying, it's always hard to comment an ending. A part of me still want this to continue and search for reasons for you to do so (so many questions in my mind!) but a more rational part reminds me that every stories have to end at one point, and that a bad ending is also an end. Plus the melo-drama of a bad ending is awsome from an emotional point of vue!
Thanks a lot for this amazing two shots, it was really worth reading it. I didn't see any language mistake (but yeah, I'm not a native speaker so...) and once again you had the perfect ratio descriptionaction. This is easily one of my favourite RotG fic.
Once again, thank you very much for your work. I hope you'll have a nice day, and you'll be as great for all your next stories!
Bye!
PS. Nice reference for miraculous ladybug ;3
Thanks for this second chapter (even if now my heart is bleeding)
I don't really know what to say, the end of a story is always a hard thing... Especially for a fic we enjoyed so much! It was grandiose, the realisation slowly growing in Jack's mind, the smooth reaction of pitch, which in the end was just a better mask than Jack's... Really, what an emotional roller coaster! I like how youre able to make us be in two pov at the same time, like when Pitch is savouring Jack's fear and we understand at the same time the reason of the fear and the attirance to its taste... I don't really know how to say it...
Anyway, as I was saying, it's always hard to comment an ending. A part of me still want this to continue and search for reasons for you to do so (so many questions in my mind!) but a more rational part reminds me that every stories have to end at one point, and that a bad ending is also an end. Plus the melo-drama of a bad ending is awsome from an emotional point of vue!
Thanks a lot for this amazing two shots, it was really worth reading it. I didn't see any language mistake (but yeah, I'm not a native speaker so...) and once again you had the perfect ratio descriptionaction. This is easily one of my favourite RotG fic.
Once again, thank you very much for your work. I hope you'll have a nice day, and you'll be as great for all your next stories!
Bye!
PS. Nice reference for miraculous ladybug ;3
1/6/2018 c1 XinterestingX
Ah crap. Didn’t really see the end coming.
I really like the plot and the idea in general. These two have a lot in common and in a different circumstance than the movie, it’s not a stet h to think they’d become friends. I wonder what’ll happen when they see each other again, and will Jack recognise him? Considering he doesn’t know his name and Pitch doesn’t really look like himself, it’s possible Jack won’t context the dots immodestly. Then again, he might and that’ll definitely change a few things in the movie.
Ah crap. Didn’t really see the end coming.
I really like the plot and the idea in general. These two have a lot in common and in a different circumstance than the movie, it’s not a stet h to think they’d become friends. I wonder what’ll happen when they see each other again, and will Jack recognise him? Considering he doesn’t know his name and Pitch doesn’t really look like himself, it’s possible Jack won’t context the dots immodestly. Then again, he might and that’ll definitely change a few things in the movie.
10/27/2017 c1 3Monsterremix
this is great! <3 please finish this i want see how it ends. so please, pretty please with cherrys on top please update
3Monsterremixthis is great! <3 please finish this i want see how it ends. so please, pretty please with cherrys on top please update
10/8/2017 c1 3lala32903
This is a nice start to a story.
The grammar is on point and it flows really nicely, especially with how you've shown the characters
3lala32903This is a nice start to a story.
The grammar is on point and it flows really nicely, especially with how you've shown the characters
9/26/2017 c1 6PaperGirlInAPaperTown
YOU MUST FINISH THIS! Omg I love it? I know I already got to read bits of it but this is actually awesome to read in full. You really are a genius and have managed to warm my cold dead heart. I can't wait to read the rest of it!
6PaperGirlInAPaperTownYOU MUST FINISH THIS! Omg I love it? I know I already got to read bits of it but this is actually awesome to read in full. You really are a genius and have managed to warm my cold dead heart. I can't wait to read the rest of it!
9/13/2017 c1 Aqua and Luna's dead account
TAKE MY HEART I NEED TO SEE THE END OF THIS TWO SHOT! Oh my gosh! I missed reading your work! It's absolutely fabulous! This was such an awesome chapter! Pitch was amazing and Jack was amazing and I seriously need more Pitch in Rise of the Guardians!
~Aqua
TAKE MY HEART I NEED TO SEE THE END OF THIS TWO SHOT! Oh my gosh! I missed reading your work! It's absolutely fabulous! This was such an awesome chapter! Pitch was amazing and Jack was amazing and I seriously need more Pitch in Rise of the Guardians!
~Aqua
9/11/2017 c1 miss.ptitegeek
Woah! This fic is so great!
All seems so natural, the way their friendship is born, how each of them think... So many parts are heartbreaking, but at the same time some of them are so cute and full of hapiness: what a emotional roller caster! It's so nice to read those peaceful moment between Pitch and Jack, when they learn from each other and heal their "heart-wounds".
The way you write is also really smooth, we switch from one PoV to an other easily and invade their thoughts without any problem. There is the perfect ratio of description and action: we can perfectly see rhe scene, but we aren't bored!
Even if Jack cry a bit too much in my opinion, I do understand that it's an important point of the character that show how Pitch had a good influence on him (all the "wear a mask" speech).
I can't wait to read the next chapter, and see how they'll react when Pitch and Jack will discover that they are respectively the Boogieman and the new Guardian: will Pitch change his mind? Will Jack join him in Antarctica? Will the guardians reject Jack? So many possibilities! Thanks again for this wonderful fic!
Miss P'tite Geek
Woah! This fic is so great!
All seems so natural, the way their friendship is born, how each of them think... So many parts are heartbreaking, but at the same time some of them are so cute and full of hapiness: what a emotional roller caster! It's so nice to read those peaceful moment between Pitch and Jack, when they learn from each other and heal their "heart-wounds".
The way you write is also really smooth, we switch from one PoV to an other easily and invade their thoughts without any problem. There is the perfect ratio of description and action: we can perfectly see rhe scene, but we aren't bored!
Even if Jack cry a bit too much in my opinion, I do understand that it's an important point of the character that show how Pitch had a good influence on him (all the "wear a mask" speech).
I can't wait to read the next chapter, and see how they'll react when Pitch and Jack will discover that they are respectively the Boogieman and the new Guardian: will Pitch change his mind? Will Jack join him in Antarctica? Will the guardians reject Jack? So many possibilities! Thanks again for this wonderful fic!
Miss P'tite Geek