
6/12/2018 c13 Guest
Good to see you back. I really liked this new chapter. Your writing style is getting more polished with each update. I always thought it had a colourfully verbose, literary-device rich nature to it, which gives the story an interesting description and flow. I especially enjoyed the interactions b/w Goten and Hokage & co.. I especially enjoyed it when Ino's father freaked out when he read Goten's mind and his memories. Like I said before in previous reviews, I always wanted to read a crossover between DBZ and Naruto in which the Narutoverse fully acknowledges the DBZverse, not because I think one is superior to the other, but just in terms of power. Naruto & co. would have their collective minds blown by the fact there are planetary powers and villians that exist somewhere out of their awareness. Thanks for that moment. It was very satisfying and made my day. Anyways, I don't know your personal life and stuff, but please keep working on this story if and when you can. You've collected a solid viewership from this story whom are genuinely invested in this story (with me as no exception), and we would greatly appreciate it if you continue it if possible. Good luck my dude, and thanks for sharing.
Good to see you back. I really liked this new chapter. Your writing style is getting more polished with each update. I always thought it had a colourfully verbose, literary-device rich nature to it, which gives the story an interesting description and flow. I especially enjoyed the interactions b/w Goten and Hokage & co.. I especially enjoyed it when Ino's father freaked out when he read Goten's mind and his memories. Like I said before in previous reviews, I always wanted to read a crossover between DBZ and Naruto in which the Narutoverse fully acknowledges the DBZverse, not because I think one is superior to the other, but just in terms of power. Naruto & co. would have their collective minds blown by the fact there are planetary powers and villians that exist somewhere out of their awareness. Thanks for that moment. It was very satisfying and made my day. Anyways, I don't know your personal life and stuff, but please keep working on this story if and when you can. You've collected a solid viewership from this story whom are genuinely invested in this story (with me as no exception), and we would greatly appreciate it if you continue it if possible. Good luck my dude, and thanks for sharing.
6/12/2018 c13 Guest
Good to see you back dude. I loved this chapter too. Your writing always had a verbose nature to it, with colour imagery and literary devices implemented. It’s definitely becoming more polished - I really enjoyed the work you put into this one. The interactions between Goten and the Hokage & co. was very enjoyable to read as well. I personally enjoyed the moment when Ino’s father (?) read Goten’s mind and was completely blown away by what he found. I always wanted to read a fanfic with a moment like that. A lot of other crossovers between DBZ and Naruto just brush off fully acknowledging the DBZverse and their powers and villains. So seeing him lose his mind was very satisfying to me. Thanks for that. I’ll see you in 4 months. Keep up the good work.
Good to see you back dude. I loved this chapter too. Your writing always had a verbose nature to it, with colour imagery and literary devices implemented. It’s definitely becoming more polished - I really enjoyed the work you put into this one. The interactions between Goten and the Hokage & co. was very enjoyable to read as well. I personally enjoyed the moment when Ino’s father (?) read Goten’s mind and was completely blown away by what he found. I always wanted to read a fanfic with a moment like that. A lot of other crossovers between DBZ and Naruto just brush off fully acknowledging the DBZverse and their powers and villains. So seeing him lose his mind was very satisfying to me. Thanks for that. I’ll see you in 4 months. Keep up the good work.
6/11/2018 c10
4123GOHANZ
Poor Orochimaru never stood a chance. When a member of the Son family makes a promise to kill you best start fucking running because not matter what it will be fulffilled.

Poor Orochimaru never stood a chance. When a member of the Son family makes a promise to kill you best start fucking running because not matter what it will be fulffilled.
6/11/2018 c13 Guest
Aw, 4 months? That's sad.
Anyway, this story and that one with Broly are the best crossovers with Naruto here IMO.
Aw, 4 months? That's sad.
Anyway, this story and that one with Broly are the best crossovers with Naruto here IMO.
6/11/2018 c13 Statess
THANK YOU YOU ARE STILL HERE :D I REALLY HOPW GOTEN AND TRUNKS ARE SOOOOO OP IT IS NOT FUNNY :D
THANK YOU YOU ARE STILL HERE :D I REALLY HOPW GOTEN AND TRUNKS ARE SOOOOO OP IT IS NOT FUNNY :D
6/11/2018 c13
12Hawkcam1996
Great chapter. So Inoichi probably should think twice about reading the mind of someone with repressed emotions like Goten. There tends to be reasons behind said repressed emotions, and when someone as powerful as Goten has them, you can bet the reason is utterly terrifying.

Great chapter. So Inoichi probably should think twice about reading the mind of someone with repressed emotions like Goten. There tends to be reasons behind said repressed emotions, and when someone as powerful as Goten has them, you can bet the reason is utterly terrifying.
6/11/2018 c4 Felon GT
They realizes that their is no law in the universe. That there are races even humans/ humanoids that use "ki" and if strong enough have the power to destroy worlds. That chakra would be seems laughable to them. They foster 2 children with the potential to cause such chaos if they wanted to but they were raised to be good hearted ones at least. What to do with powerhouses stronger than all bijuu combined? Im sure inoichi learned about frieza, cell games, saiyans, dragon balls, the kais, heaven though Gotens' 2nd hand knowledge since he wasn't born around those times. But witnessing Magin Buu, he can conclude that those past events that involved Goku and the so called z fighters were just as troubling chapters from Gotens world, except that BUU was the one who succeeded that those other 2 foes did not. Until the magical dragon restored the planet. Sarutobi cant let them continue the exams since it a completely unfair advantage to the other opponents, or keep them pretending to play weak for the sake of spies not questioning why they were kicked off. Plus what to do with them. And what if their presence here allowed others in the stars to sense them and not the friendly kind either.
They realizes that their is no law in the universe. That there are races even humans/ humanoids that use "ki" and if strong enough have the power to destroy worlds. That chakra would be seems laughable to them. They foster 2 children with the potential to cause such chaos if they wanted to but they were raised to be good hearted ones at least. What to do with powerhouses stronger than all bijuu combined? Im sure inoichi learned about frieza, cell games, saiyans, dragon balls, the kais, heaven though Gotens' 2nd hand knowledge since he wasn't born around those times. But witnessing Magin Buu, he can conclude that those past events that involved Goku and the so called z fighters were just as troubling chapters from Gotens world, except that BUU was the one who succeeded that those other 2 foes did not. Until the magical dragon restored the planet. Sarutobi cant let them continue the exams since it a completely unfair advantage to the other opponents, or keep them pretending to play weak for the sake of spies not questioning why they were kicked off. Plus what to do with them. And what if their presence here allowed others in the stars to sense them and not the friendly kind either.
6/10/2018 c13
46yangri
Ah, this update made me so happy. This is gonna be a long four months, though... TTTT

Ah, this update made me so happy. This is gonna be a long four months, though... TTTT
6/10/2018 c13 Guest
Great chapter please update again soon
Great chapter please update again soon
6/10/2018 c13 Guest
An update at last. An awesome chapter dude. Yeah no, not 4 months dude! It will be a torture
An update at last. An awesome chapter dude. Yeah no, not 4 months dude! It will be a torture
6/10/2018 c13
13Inkaliber
I can’t wait another four months! This story is so good! I wish the update time was on a lower standard. This story is a work of art and I really need more of it.
I really think that there has to be a way for Goten and Sakura to stay together, even if they find a way home. They make a great couple, and I think they should be together. You could do some kind of bridge between the two worlds or maybe a fusion of worlds brought about by a battle with Buu or Kaguya or maybe Buu(Kaguya absorbed). OMG that last option sounds crazy awesome now!
Back to pairings, Ino seems to be more interested in someone with good looks and not an actual relationship. I might be reading it wrong, but that’s how I see it. I actually think that There was something starting with Hinata. Or maybe Temari. She’s got the personality to deal with a saiyan and the guts to attract one. See ya (hopefully soon) next chapter.

I can’t wait another four months! This story is so good! I wish the update time was on a lower standard. This story is a work of art and I really need more of it.
I really think that there has to be a way for Goten and Sakura to stay together, even if they find a way home. They make a great couple, and I think they should be together. You could do some kind of bridge between the two worlds or maybe a fusion of worlds brought about by a battle with Buu or Kaguya or maybe Buu(Kaguya absorbed). OMG that last option sounds crazy awesome now!
Back to pairings, Ino seems to be more interested in someone with good looks and not an actual relationship. I might be reading it wrong, but that’s how I see it. I actually think that There was something starting with Hinata. Or maybe Temari. She’s got the personality to deal with a saiyan and the guts to attract one. See ya (hopefully soon) next chapter.