
9/8/2021 c15 Guest
Welp looks like this story is dead. Sorry folks but it looks like the author of this fanfic is not gonna continue this and has decided to write new stories without bothering to even finish one.
Welp looks like this story is dead. Sorry folks but it looks like the author of this fanfic is not gonna continue this and has decided to write new stories without bothering to even finish one.
7/25/2021 c1 Buff
Buff the saiyans more and godlike.. Show how even ten tails is just a drop of water compare to oceans of power that the two boys have
Buff the saiyans more and godlike.. Show how even ten tails is just a drop of water compare to oceans of power that the two boys have
7/2/2021 c15 Guest
The guy below me is a dweeb
The guy below me is a dweeb
6/26/2021 c15 nerf
Nerf the saiyans, nerf'em up!
Nerf the saiyans, nerf'em up!
Nerf the saiyans, nerf'em up!
Nerf the saiyans, nerf'em up!
Have them be nothing more than slaves to the Leaf village and have their free will taken away. Oh I know, why not place some kind of slave seal on both those saiyan losers that reduces them into mindless dusk that obeys the Hokage's every command so that way the Hokage can have his own saiyan army like he wanted. Heck, why not have both those saiyan brats be use soley for breeding and nothing else. Lastly, have no one save them from their fate so that way those two can forever suffer for their stupidty and forever prove that everyone from the Dragon Ball series should be nerfed and always lose to everything like the pathetic weaklings that they are.
Nerf the saiyans, nerf'em up!
Nerf the saiyans, nerf'em up!
Nerf the saiyans, nerf'em up!
Nerf the saiyans, nerf'em up!
Have them be nothing more than slaves to the Leaf village and have their free will taken away. Oh I know, why not place some kind of slave seal on both those saiyan losers that reduces them into mindless dusk that obeys the Hokage's every command so that way the Hokage can have his own saiyan army like he wanted. Heck, why not have both those saiyan brats be use soley for breeding and nothing else. Lastly, have no one save them from their fate so that way those two can forever suffer for their stupidty and forever prove that everyone from the Dragon Ball series should be nerfed and always lose to everything like the pathetic weaklings that they are.
4/24/2021 c10 Lil Chris
Shidd this chapter was lit and i loved how you turned trunks into a simp
Shidd this chapter was lit and i loved how you turned trunks into a simp
4/6/2021 c15 Guest
Welp. It looks like this story is now officially abandoned since there has been no update on it.
Welp. It looks like this story is now officially abandoned since there has been no update on it.
3/21/2021 c14 Guest
Old man stop making new stories and finish this one, it is your story with more fans and the truth is, if you want to be a famous writer one day or at least have more people read your stuff, at least finish this story, so you attract thousands more to see your things and you with it then have fans who follow your work for new stories.
Old man stop making new stories and finish this one, it is your story with more fans and the truth is, if you want to be a famous writer one day or at least have more people read your stuff, at least finish this story, so you attract thousands more to see your things and you with it then have fans who follow your work for new stories.
3/12/2021 c2 JF13
The story is pretty good but I think you made Trunks a bit too unlikeable.
The story is pretty good but I think you made Trunks a bit too unlikeable.
3/8/2021 c15 streak27
I don't want to come off as rude but what's with the long intervals between updates? This is one of my favorite fics but could you please be a little more consistent?
I don't want to come off as rude but what's with the long intervals between updates? This is one of my favorite fics but could you please be a little more consistent?
3/6/2021 c4 Guest
hinata / sasuke?
hinata / sasuke?
2/27/2021 c11 LobsterSCience
If you do somehow manage to have Kabuto get a hold of their DNA, it'll take more than that to actually get a powerup enough to even stand a chance against them. A majority of it is raw training and grit. Unless we get a Bio Broly situation, or Kabuto is stupid enough to infuse himself with Saiyan DNA, the kids are literally the most powerful and skilled beings in that world right now.
Even the Tailed Beasts combined wouldn't stand a chance.
If you do somehow manage to have Kabuto get a hold of their DNA, it'll take more than that to actually get a powerup enough to even stand a chance against them. A majority of it is raw training and grit. Unless we get a Bio Broly situation, or Kabuto is stupid enough to infuse himself with Saiyan DNA, the kids are literally the most powerful and skilled beings in that world right now.
Even the Tailed Beasts combined wouldn't stand a chance.
1/22/2021 c15 Dontus -not Donut- Powerus
This is so open to have Goku during Beerus and his final clash in BOG to be sent there.
I don't know how many years has it been since the Zabuza fight and the final Kaguya fight, but if it's 7 long years, then putting Goku in the likely scenario is highty possible.
I just wanna connect the 2 verses. AND MAKE THE SHINOBI WORLD BOW DOWN TO LORD POPO
Plus to tweak the absolute living crap of Boruto into what it could be fixed among the scrap heap of a series.
It's not even close to "Naruto with his parents alive" scenario. Because we just got a self entitled rich brat desperate for a fatherly care.
This is so open to have Goku during Beerus and his final clash in BOG to be sent there.
I don't know how many years has it been since the Zabuza fight and the final Kaguya fight, but if it's 7 long years, then putting Goku in the likely scenario is highty possible.
I just wanna connect the 2 verses. AND MAKE THE SHINOBI WORLD BOW DOWN TO LORD POPO
Plus to tweak the absolute living crap of Boruto into what it could be fixed among the scrap heap of a series.
It's not even close to "Naruto with his parents alive" scenario. Because we just got a self entitled rich brat desperate for a fatherly care.