for New Kids on the Block9/11/2017 c1 SilentXD7
Interesting story. I hope you continue with the series and I see great potential in this story.
Interesting story. I hope you continue with the series and I see great potential in this story.
9/11/2017 c1 kakarotsanmistic
interesting story I really like it so keep it up and I wanted to see some dbz style action like punching and kicking shockwaves that shake the entire landmass and planet itself and heavy lifting scene like big boulders buildings mountains and big creatures etc. and lot's of destruction in dbz/s style than your story will be worth reading it and become more awesome so please add this kind of stuff and you already know how strong and op dbz/s characters are ( multiversal level ) so don't nerf or underpower goten and trunks because you already know how strong they are (multi big planet buster and in ssj large star buster ) and in their fusion base gotenks is multi solar buster and super gotenks 1/3 of galaxy buster and ssj 3 easily galaxies buster so remember this and how much powers they will use against naruto characters like 1% or 2 % something during the fight because you already know how strong they are so keep remember this and please pair them with someone . ..and make a longer chapter. .thank you. .
interesting story I really like it so keep it up and I wanted to see some dbz style action like punching and kicking shockwaves that shake the entire landmass and planet itself and heavy lifting scene like big boulders buildings mountains and big creatures etc. and lot's of destruction in dbz/s style than your story will be worth reading it and become more awesome so please add this kind of stuff and you already know how strong and op dbz/s characters are ( multiversal level ) so don't nerf or underpower goten and trunks because you already know how strong they are (multi big planet buster and in ssj large star buster ) and in their fusion base gotenks is multi solar buster and super gotenks 1/3 of galaxy buster and ssj 3 easily galaxies buster so remember this and how much powers they will use against naruto characters like 1% or 2 % something during the fight because you already know how strong they are so keep remember this and please pair them with someone . ..and make a longer chapter. .thank you. .
9/11/2017 c1 Guest
Dude, this is great. Solid start, really good capturing the essence of the characters and is hilarious! I definitely look forward to more chapters.
Dude, this is great. Solid start, really good capturing the essence of the characters and is hilarious! I definitely look forward to more chapters.
9/10/2017 c1 Great Saiyaman54
Hanabi
Hanabi
9/10/2017 c1 Great Saiyaman54
Gotten is 7 and trunks is 8 right maybe one of them can pair with Moegi and the other with
Gotten is 7 and trunks is 8 right maybe one of them can pair with Moegi and the other with
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