
12/31/2020 c13 4ntares
Damn I forgot how infuriating the scene on the start of the next chapter was, how I wanted that Trunks would just be passing by casually when they were having this conversation, but then the fic would end. Also "They grow as far as their potential allows", isn't this the first misunderstanding? Since that was Goten's memories I won't blame this geezer too much, but for thy enlightening, Saiyans DO NOT have limits to their potential, this was mentioned in the series so many times, mainly by Vegeta, yeah those things happen when your race is the incarnation of battle itself, and another misunderstanting is, what the hell is this big deal with the Oozaru? Isn't the SSJ much stronger? The only thing that the Oozaru is better than the other forms, is on the intimidating, frightening and terryfying departments
Damn I forgot how infuriating the scene on the start of the next chapter was, how I wanted that Trunks would just be passing by casually when they were having this conversation, but then the fic would end. Also "They grow as far as their potential allows", isn't this the first misunderstanding? Since that was Goten's memories I won't blame this geezer too much, but for thy enlightening, Saiyans DO NOT have limits to their potential, this was mentioned in the series so many times, mainly by Vegeta, yeah those things happen when your race is the incarnation of battle itself, and another misunderstanting is, what the hell is this big deal with the Oozaru? Isn't the SSJ much stronger? The only thing that the Oozaru is better than the other forms, is on the intimidating, frightening and terryfying departments
12/31/2020 c6 4ntares
Oh God, you better very well give up on trying to diminish Trunks's pride it will be for naught, it's on his blood, his utter admiration for his father, and I personally wouldn't like any other way, if the one who had his memories read was him, they would see that is pointless, hell it would be straight disrespectful and a spite try to "adjust his attitude", he can get a bit more considerate like his own father got, but that would be it, Hokage my ass, Trunks would never want such useless position, hell if he wanted he could go all Gilgamesh on all their asses and they would kept their mouths shut and obey like the mongrels they are. And about Sakura feelings of insecurity... Well she shouldn't be, in comparission to Goten the other two are useless too, even Kakashi, Hell even the fucking Kaguya would be, that's the difference
Oh God, you better very well give up on trying to diminish Trunks's pride it will be for naught, it's on his blood, his utter admiration for his father, and I personally wouldn't like any other way, if the one who had his memories read was him, they would see that is pointless, hell it would be straight disrespectful and a spite try to "adjust his attitude", he can get a bit more considerate like his own father got, but that would be it, Hokage my ass, Trunks would never want such useless position, hell if he wanted he could go all Gilgamesh on all their asses and they would kept their mouths shut and obey like the mongrels they are. And about Sakura feelings of insecurity... Well she shouldn't be, in comparission to Goten the other two are useless too, even Kakashi, Hell even the fucking Kaguya would be, that's the difference
12/30/2020 c2 4ntares
For Z down there, don't worry man, the sealing is just a countermeasure for the Oozaru transformation, you really was thinking after all those well written chapters, the author would have any intent on nerfing them? Chill man, this is a good story not those crappy shits out there
For Z down there, don't worry man, the sealing is just a countermeasure for the Oozaru transformation, you really was thinking after all those well written chapters, the author would have any intent on nerfing them? Chill man, this is a good story not those crappy shits out there
12/14/2020 c15 Z
Goten gets sealed on him, nerfing is now considered possible because of it. Great just flipping great. Just add some stupid BS to happen just so that writers can use it as an excuse to nerfing DBZ characters in their stories. Honestly, for anyone planning on writing acrossover with DBZ then I freakin suggest that you use a DBZ-human because they aren't that strong and them getting beat up by another series characters is much more believeable than nerfing a powerful DBZ-character.
Goten gets sealed on him, nerfing is now considered possible because of it. Great just flipping great. Just add some stupid BS to happen just so that writers can use it as an excuse to nerfing DBZ characters in their stories. Honestly, for anyone planning on writing acrossover with DBZ then I freakin suggest that you use a DBZ-human because they aren't that strong and them getting beat up by another series characters is much more believeable than nerfing a powerful DBZ-character.
12/13/2020 c15 lionbrian
You just had to do that didn't you. You literally and I kid you not, had to have Goten have a sealed on him. You just gave an excuse for idiots to try and justify nerfing both Goten and Trunks because of. Honestly, that is why you got so many guest reviews asking to have both Goten and Trunks to be nerfed. Plus, if a sealed can be placed on them like Goten just did then I suggest you get ready because chances are you might get more annoying reviewers asking to nerf the saiyans since you gave them ammo for them to use aginst you and no amount of clearing things up will change their mind (trust me, I have seen it happen and it is scary)
You just had to do that didn't you. You literally and I kid you not, had to have Goten have a sealed on him. You just gave an excuse for idiots to try and justify nerfing both Goten and Trunks because of. Honestly, that is why you got so many guest reviews asking to have both Goten and Trunks to be nerfed. Plus, if a sealed can be placed on them like Goten just did then I suggest you get ready because chances are you might get more annoying reviewers asking to nerf the saiyans since you gave them ammo for them to use aginst you and no amount of clearing things up will change their mind (trust me, I have seen it happen and it is scary)
12/9/2020 c15 The Guest
It's just me or are there a lot of dumb "please nerf Goten and Trunks" comments? WTH is wrong with these people?
Anyway, I'm really glad because just when I thought that this story would have no more chapters, we have this. This crossover is amazing, easily one of the best Naruto X DBZ stories over here. Also, I like where this is going, and Sakura learning ki MAKES SENSE here, because like the author said, she hasn't got anything.
Looking forward for the next chapter. I'm curious about two things: Goten/Sakura's trip and the Akatsuki.
It's just me or are there a lot of dumb "please nerf Goten and Trunks" comments? WTH is wrong with these people?
Anyway, I'm really glad because just when I thought that this story would have no more chapters, we have this. This crossover is amazing, easily one of the best Naruto X DBZ stories over here. Also, I like where this is going, and Sakura learning ki MAKES SENSE here, because like the author said, she hasn't got anything.
Looking forward for the next chapter. I'm curious about two things: Goten/Sakura's trip and the Akatsuki.
11/22/2020 c15 sirtito
Yeah, I hope do not plan on making non-dbz learn and then later be a threat because that will be utterly stupid. Too many stupid fanfics did and it always turned out awful. Not only that, but do not make Goten and Trunks too trusting of the Naruto characters (especially the leaf village and main cast). Just because they're young does not make them stupid to not know when they are being manipulated (especially Trunks) and learn of their "plan" on making them into living weapons. Heck, I would be up right pissed off about being used as a tool in their schemes.
Yeah, I hope do not plan on making non-dbz learn and then later be a threat because that will be utterly stupid. Too many stupid fanfics did and it always turned out awful. Not only that, but do not make Goten and Trunks too trusting of the Naruto characters (especially the leaf village and main cast). Just because they're young does not make them stupid to not know when they are being manipulated (especially Trunks) and learn of their "plan" on making them into living weapons. Heck, I would be up right pissed off about being used as a tool in their schemes.
11/18/2020 c5 Guest
what it broly from dragon ball super visited the naruto world?
what it broly from dragon ball super visited the naruto world?
11/18/2020 c15 Guest
Nerf the saiyans, nerf'em up!
It is obvious that you want them to be used as prized breeding machines for Konoha like the Kumogakure tried to do when they attempted to kidnap Hinata so why not nerf those two brats with a seal to make them slaves! I mean both Goten and Trunks are idiotic losers who couldn't even beat Buu dcause they were so focused on looking "cool" and being overdramtic with everything that everyone they knew died because of their stupidity. Before you come up with some stupid lame excuse, you already made the leaf wanting to use them as tools and had a seal placed on Goten (should have been a mind control slave curse mark) so have them both get one already so they can forever be nerfed slaves with no one coming to save them!
Nerf the saiyans, nerf'em up!
It is obvious that you want them to be used as prized breeding machines for Konoha like the Kumogakure tried to do when they attempted to kidnap Hinata so why not nerf those two brats with a seal to make them slaves! I mean both Goten and Trunks are idiotic losers who couldn't even beat Buu dcause they were so focused on looking "cool" and being overdramtic with everything that everyone they knew died because of their stupidity. Before you come up with some stupid lame excuse, you already made the leaf wanting to use them as tools and had a seal placed on Goten (should have been a mind control slave curse mark) so have them both get one already so they can forever be nerfed slaves with no one coming to save them!
11/11/2020 c15 Guest
I'm liking the way this story is going! Keep up the great work!
I'm liking the way this story is going! Keep up the great work!
11/8/2020 c15 guest
D'oh just have Goten and Trunk be nerfed already by some stupid over power jutsu already because prolonging it makes it worse. I mean you easily had a seal placed on Goten so why not have them noth become slaves to the Konoha already. Also, no, don't try to make them out as the heroes since you showed that they'd want them as weapons and tools to use. Seriously, by placing a seal you can join the ranks of many writers who nerfed the DBZ characters because they want to make every non-DBZ character look like a threat.
D'oh just have Goten and Trunk be nerfed already by some stupid over power jutsu already because prolonging it makes it worse. I mean you easily had a seal placed on Goten so why not have them noth become slaves to the Konoha already. Also, no, don't try to make them out as the heroes since you showed that they'd want them as weapons and tools to use. Seriously, by placing a seal you can join the ranks of many writers who nerfed the DBZ characters because they want to make every non-DBZ character look like a threat.