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3AlexFalTon
Nice to see an update, hope your doing well man!
About this chapter, you put effort in describing the brutal and tricky nature of the arena which is was the downfall of the tributes. Nice to see a final that doesn't include careers - it was humorously (in a morbid way) anticlimactic after Chalice died.
3AlexFalTonNice to see an update, hope your doing well man!
About this chapter, you put effort in describing the brutal and tricky nature of the arena which is was the downfall of the tributes. Nice to see a final that doesn't include careers - it was humorously (in a morbid way) anticlimactic after Chalice died.
5/21/2022 c104 Thanoswasright
This was a surprise! Great chapter as always. Was rooting for Evelyn to win, but Cherry was my second choice.
This was a surprise! Great chapter as always. Was rooting for Evelyn to win, but Cherry was my second choice.
7/20/2021 c1 575WizMonCruWil
Just started my own Victors compilation! But I'm keeping it straight to just 75. I look forward to reading this one for ideas! By the way, you hit 444 reviews on March 11th, 2019. Congrats for reaching 555 reviews on July 20th, 2021!
575WizMonCruWilJust started my own Victors compilation! But I'm keeping it straight to just 75. I look forward to reading this one for ideas! By the way, you hit 444 reviews on March 11th, 2019. Congrats for reaching 555 reviews on July 20th, 2021!
7/3/2021 c31 Guest
Love the chapter but I just want to point out that Barley is already a mum. Rye, Barleys’ son, won the 44th games (14 years after this) than Rye is 2 right now and Barley had her first son at 16.
Love the chapter but I just want to point out that Barley is already a mum. Rye, Barleys’ son, won the 44th games (14 years after this) than Rye is 2 right now and Barley had her first son at 16.
6/25/2021 c1 ast
Also, sorry for my complaint spam from 2018. Your fic's awesome and has always been quite the inspiration for me! Keep up the great work!
Also, sorry for my complaint spam from 2018. Your fic's awesome and has always been quite the inspiration for me! Keep up the great work!
6/20/2021 c102 ast
The prominence of the D1 ditzy dumb blonde stereotype in this FF and others should be annoying, but I'm twistedly fond of the rage it brings when I see another embodiment of it. Well done.
The prominence of the D1 ditzy dumb blonde stereotype in this FF and others should be annoying, but I'm twistedly fond of the rage it brings when I see another embodiment of it. Well done.
6/4/2021 c103 3AlexFalTon
Always interesting to see a new chapter. And I think I'll always be surprised by any new one. Somehow, Susanna become the most interesting one this chapter. Feel as tho her crushing on a dead guy hundred years ago seems silly and random. Probably a moral about obsession. Two's having some striff (along with no volunteers) was a neat thing, probably helped the other outliners by quite a bit.
Take care.
3AlexFalTonAlways interesting to see a new chapter. And I think I'll always be surprised by any new one. Somehow, Susanna become the most interesting one this chapter. Feel as tho her crushing on a dead guy hundred years ago seems silly and random. Probably a moral about obsession. Two's having some striff (along with no volunteers) was a neat thing, probably helped the other outliners by quite a bit.
Take care.
7/31/2020 c11 Marbledcat
Just read The Ballad of Songbirds and Snakes. Velvet is a better victor than Lucy could ever be.
Just read The Ballad of Songbirds and Snakes. Velvet is a better victor than Lucy could ever be.
6/29/2020 c102 18tracelynn
omg I loved this! I've always wanted to see someone use 500YOP's format and I remember reading some of the first chapters when you started this, but you've gotten so good at writing these! You said you're out of shape with this format but I loved this chapter I felt it was amazing! I wasn't rooting for Aspen, I wanted Jacquard or Nereid to win, but all in all this was a very realistic and exciting chapter, I have to go back and read more of them now!
18tracelynnomg I loved this! I've always wanted to see someone use 500YOP's format and I remember reading some of the first chapters when you started this, but you've gotten so good at writing these! You said you're out of shape with this format but I loved this chapter I felt it was amazing! I wasn't rooting for Aspen, I wanted Jacquard or Nereid to win, but all in all this was a very realistic and exciting chapter, I have to go back and read more of them now!
6/26/2020 c102 3AlexFalTon
I was not expecting this! This chapter was pretty gucchi. Thank you. Hopefully, you can make more. Maybe you can make arena's out of nice places you've been - just a suggestion, probably unnecessary. Still, I and others wouldn't mind if you made more surprise chapters.
3AlexFalTonI was not expecting this! This chapter was pretty gucchi. Thank you. Hopefully, you can make more. Maybe you can make arena's out of nice places you've been - just a suggestion, probably unnecessary. Still, I and others wouldn't mind if you made more surprise chapters.
6/25/2020 c102 5YDdraigGymreig
Nice chapter. I have been making my own hunger games recently in the same format as yours. It is shit, but atill. As you have a lot of fans (I would say that what you would call them), maybe we can write our own chapters and send them to you. You then choose the best one and that is the next chapter. Saves you the bother of thinking of all the names, mutts, arenas and lore.
5YDdraigGymreigNice chapter. I have been making my own hunger games recently in the same format as yours. It is shit, but atill. As you have a lot of fans (I would say that what you would call them), maybe we can write our own chapters and send them to you. You then choose the best one and that is the next chapter. Saves you the bother of thinking of all the names, mutts, arenas and lore.
10/17/2019 c102 acupofdeathflowertea
This was one of the first stories I read all the way through that had a lot of chapters! I'll miss it but all good things come to an end! See you in the next story!
This was one of the first stories I read all the way through that had a lot of chapters! I'll miss it but all good things come to an end! See you in the next story!
8/7/2019 c102 2jdog67
I finally got the chance to read these last two chapters and it was amazing! The 100th Games had a cool twist and I loved the epilogue. I'm sad to see this story end but it was incredible! Thanks for a great story!
-jdawg6739
2jdog67I finally got the chance to read these last two chapters and it was amazing! The 100th Games had a cool twist and I loved the epilogue. I'm sad to see this story end but it was incredible! Thanks for a great story!
-jdawg6739
8/6/2019 c1 jdog67
The newest chapters won’t load and this is annoying because I love your writing and I am dying to read them.
The newest chapters won’t load and this is annoying because I love your writing and I am dying to read them.