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2/27/2020 c2 Tristen
Where's chapter 3?
7/16/2019 c2 3mike204
hey I live I Connecticut to
6/6/2018 c2 JohnMonty
Hope you update and continue the story it's real good and want to read more of it
2/17/2018 c1 Guest
Will Lincoln die? No, but it's still a great story
2/11/2018 c2 louisholmes21
Ah, a story where Ronnie Anne Punching Lincoln turns out worse then in canon.
How will Ronnie Anne deal with the grief of almost killing the boy who she has a crush on? I hope Chapter 3 comes soon.
2/11/2018 c1 louisholmes21
Well at least in the canon version Heavy Meddle Lincoln did get punched by Ronnie Anne, but he never fell into a coma! The only injury he received from the punch was a black eye! And at the end of the episode, Ronnie threw a steak and a apology note at his upstairs window. 763Boi, I love your darker idea for Heavy Meddle! I can't wait 4 chapter 3!
12/24/2017 c1 Mr. Noname
Okay, the pacing is too fast at this point. You need to build the story up more, give events a chance to develop. Also, regardless what Ronnie Anne did to Lincoln, Bobby wouldn't just let her get beat up and then join the others on insulting her nonstop. Third, keep in mind that you begin a new paragraph when someone else starts talking; that makes the story easier to read.

Hope these tips help.
12/25/2017 c2 Killersoul42
It's okay man. But please continue with the story and happy holidays
9/13/2017 c1 imrottentodacore
Nice story. I might make a roleplay out of this
9/12/2017 c1 Guest
Will do tell me your location so I can do you the favor

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