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69/17/2017 c2 Guest
I am confused of what your trying to say you have said it out nicely but you have jumbled up some of your words using he instead of she as an example and stop writing said king write said king Jace you need to write it out more clearly and have it flow better. Good luck
I am confused of what your trying to say you have said it out nicely but you have jumbled up some of your words using he instead of she as an example and stop writing said king write said king Jace you need to write it out more clearly and have it flow better. Good luck
9/18/2017 c2 oesteffel
Is Clary in an orphanage? Why and is she related to Valentine? Why is Clary at the castle? Jace is kind of an A-hole with how he treats women. I'm really looking forward to reading how his character changes and how he reacts to seeing Clary. I'm guessing that it's not love at first sight. Please update soon thanks. :)
Is Clary in an orphanage? Why and is she related to Valentine? Why is Clary at the castle? Jace is kind of an A-hole with how he treats women. I'm really looking forward to reading how his character changes and how he reacts to seeing Clary. I'm guessing that it's not love at first sight. Please update soon thanks. :)
9/17/2017 c2 Debra Williams
Those mean girls POOR Clary, and I hope Jace will LEARN TO LOVE [For REAL !] I'm really starting to get intensely into YOUR STORY ! THANK YOU
Those mean girls POOR Clary, and I hope Jace will LEARN TO LOVE [For REAL !] I'm really starting to get intensely into YOUR STORY ! THANK YOU
9/14/2017 c1 Guest
OH MY GOSH! I saw your name and clicked on your story as fast as I could. I love your writing so much!
OH MY GOSH! I saw your name and clicked on your story as fast as I could. I love your writing so much!
9/13/2017 c1 ImToLazyToLogin
This seems great! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
~BearMyChildren
This seems great! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
~BearMyChildren
9/13/2017 c1 oesteffel
I love the beginning. To me, it reads very Romeo and Juliet-like. Please update soon thanks.
I love the beginning. To me, it reads very Romeo and Juliet-like. Please update soon thanks.