2/6/2022 c1 I want to read fanfic
The description threw me off guard and I just started laughing! I haven't read it yet but I'm sure this will be great

7/7/2020 c1 Jisbon28
"Nothing says love like humping." I died with that, hahaha. I love to read Hayate's point of view. He takes no bullshit, he wanted a daddy, he got a daddy.

5/2/2018 c1 Mary-san 310405
esto es genial. no pare de reír me por el "POV" es simplemente genial

10/11/2017 c1 85byzinha
This was too cute, I loved it. The line "nothing says love like humping" got me laughing for a long time before I could continue reading :'D

9/18/2017 c1 Shijaeger
Damn,the dog mind is a weird place,lol..."flame man" ...I died

9/16/2017 c1 fmpipsqueak
I enjoyed this, and I think you could expand it past a one shot :) I could see Hayate getting jealous quickly if Roy starts getting more attention than him, which would be cute. Good writing :)

9/14/2017 c1 77lexieconextreme
This too cute. I was smiling too loud in Math class, lol.

9/13/2017 c1 3C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only
...I have no idea why, but this is the CUTEST FUCKING THING I'VE EVER READ! AAAUUUGGGHHHHH!