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6/21/2019 c2 10Helljumper206
I like the idea you have going on but the story is so monotoned and lifeless.
12/10/2017 c3 1dekuton
I'm assuming to account for his semblance qrow has the jinxed trait? which caused bad luck for himself,allies, and enemies? which is also his semblance in canon? this is...interesting but dear gods you need a beta or something. plus the fact that nobody questioned where they went actually. just questioned we individual stuff that made no sense
12/3/2017 c3 Demon-255
Bruh, why does Qrow have 10 luck? If anything he should have 0 luck due to his semblance. Use those 10 SPECIAL points elsewhere like his perception, agility, intelligence, and endurance.
(In case you didn't know, his semblance is bad luck, which is exactly what it says on the tin.)
10/31/2017 c1 1Rorksen
Like it so far but god it is hard to read.
9/18/2017 c1 Lords of Lemon Drops
great start
9/15/2017 c1 Uknownreader 00
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