for River Lily12/4 c1 Naruto420
Robert was a psycho who had many Bastards even when he was betrothed to Lyanna. So I personally don't like this pairing.
Robert was a psycho who had many Bastards even when he was betrothed to Lyanna. So I personally don't like this pairing.
11/15 c39 HSkarsgard
I read this in one go which upon reflection wasn't smart given that it's now nearly 3am and I have work at 7. oh well. this is bloody brilliant so far! I absolutely love Lily and was genuinely hurt when Elbert died despite knowing she'd eventually end up with Robert. The scene with Ned and Lyanna had me smiling because like you, I agree that many writers completely gloss over the fact that she was a homewrecking hypocrite of the highest order. very few stories show her getting her just deserts and I look forward to seeing how her life unfolds post war. The character development in this is spectacular and I will anticipate each update with baited breath. thank you!
I read this in one go which upon reflection wasn't smart given that it's now nearly 3am and I have work at 7. oh well. this is bloody brilliant so far! I absolutely love Lily and was genuinely hurt when Elbert died despite knowing she'd eventually end up with Robert. The scene with Ned and Lyanna had me smiling because like you, I agree that many writers completely gloss over the fact that she was a homewrecking hypocrite of the highest order. very few stories show her getting her just deserts and I look forward to seeing how her life unfolds post war. The character development in this is spectacular and I will anticipate each update with baited breath. thank you!
11/14 c22 OogaChooga
to not obliviate at least Brandon and Petyr seems incredibly foolish. regardless of morality Petyr CLEARLY has an idea to abuse this knowledge and she doesn't really know or like Brandon. She only loses if she doesn't obliviate.
to not obliviate at least Brandon and Petyr seems incredibly foolish. regardless of morality Petyr CLEARLY has an idea to abuse this knowledge and she doesn't really know or like Brandon. She only loses if she doesn't obliviate.
9/18 c3 
4Covante
I'm liking the start and it will be interesting to see what sort of changes Lily manages to make and what sort of pushback she gets for her efforts. I also want to see why she wants to bother learning the sword, that seems kind of odd for a witch who doesn't need one to defend herself to be hung up on that.
I have a couple of questions. You had Harry being 3 months instead of 15 months and said Lily is 'completely twenty-first century in her thinking', were either one of those on purpose?
4CovanteI'm liking the start and it will be interesting to see what sort of changes Lily manages to make and what sort of pushback she gets for her efforts. I also want to see why she wants to bother learning the sword, that seems kind of odd for a witch who doesn't need one to defend herself to be hung up on that.
I have a couple of questions. You had Harry being 3 months instead of 15 months and said Lily is 'completely twenty-first century in her thinking', were either one of those on purpose?
9/3 c39 JazminSS
Thank you very much for the story. I've enjoyed it very much. Hope you find some inspiration and time to update soon. I really want to see how lily's character develops as a queen and how the romance with Robert develops.
Thank you very much for the story. I've enjoyed it very much. Hope you find some inspiration and time to update soon. I really want to see how lily's character develops as a queen and how the romance with Robert develops.
8/27 c39 PrimalWhiteStar
I really really REALLY Love this story... any hope for an update, can't wait to read of the new interaction in King's Landing
I really really REALLY Love this story... any hope for an update, can't wait to read of the new interaction in King's Landing
8/27 c37 PrimalWhiteStar
I have to say that I really love the you put Lyanna... she caused a war... and nothing is said on the metter... Good job
I have to say that I really love the you put Lyanna... she caused a war... and nothing is said on the metter... Good job
8/27 c21 PrimalWhiteStar
I'm curious of how her Magic being discovered will change her relationship with her sister and Petyr
I'm curious of how her Magic being discovered will change her relationship with her sister and Petyr
8/27 c39 Guest
Eh... I didn't like the way this chapter was going.
"Thanks for saving my sister and her children, now go whore yourself off to the last ridden horny king in a loveless marriage for us will you?"
Nah... I'd be pissed off.
I don't understand how nonchalant everyone is especially Ellia when she knows first hand how that's wrong
Eh... I didn't like the way this chapter was going.
"Thanks for saving my sister and her children, now go whore yourself off to the last ridden horny king in a loveless marriage for us will you?"
Nah... I'd be pissed off.
I don't understand how nonchalant everyone is especially Ellia when she knows first hand how that's wrong
8/4 c39 5Lyz135
I hope you plan to update this soon! I just spent the last 2 days reading this, and i cant wait for more!
5Lyz135I hope you plan to update this soon! I just spent the last 2 days reading this, and i cant wait for more!
7/4 c39 Guest
This sooo good! I am so invested in this story! Love your work so much
This sooo good! I am so invested in this story! Love your work so much